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Peach's Story of Sorrow and Grieve
Topic Started: Oct 17 2008, 05:43 PM (812 Views)
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As Peach lied alone in her King sized pink sheeted bed, she waited for something anything to happen, just as long as it took her mind off that tragic day, or actually night. She heard someone at the staircase making their way up the door,two people. Coming through the door was Rosalina in a silver dress that was down to her ankles. It shimmerd and Luma, well the silver one, floated by her as cute as always. Rosalina noticed Peach was still upset. "Peach," said Rosalina" Im gonna take you somewhere, so get dresses and come down to the main hall. Without saying a word Peach put on a casual n64 dress and met Rosalina and Luma down stairs. The castle was still under construction do to the incident and the clouds painted on the walls seemed like they were gray and pouring rain to Peach. "Come on Peach let's go, and for once i hope you smile" but she didn't smile, she couldn't smile she was just so destroyed inside about what had happened. Rosalina lead Peach outside to the beautiful terrain of Peach's castle. Rosalina used her wand and in a second they were at the.......
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oh my why is peach so sad >.<
keep it up i wana no wat happens ;)
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They were at the cocunut mall. but Peach was the princess! What cant she get for free. Peach loved to decorate her house and loved to trough parties, loved to. After the terrible accident at the party she could never throw another one again. She really wished her friends that were gone weren't but she felt it was her fault. She should've never invited him. He caused it all. He did it and she new it and he new it, and they all new it. They went into Cyndi's dresses and Gowns and looked through. Peach without saying a word grabbed a shimmering pink dress with a blue broach a single flap with a ribbon in the fro t to hold it onto the dress and puffy sleeves and seemed to go halfway down the shoulder. They bought it and Peach showed in her eyes she wanted to go home." Let's go then" said Rosalina and they poofed on home. Rosalina and Luma told her goodnight and were gone and Peach fell asleep. She wanted to talk. She did but her mind wouldn't let her. Rosalina wanted to know what Peach went through. Rosalina knew they were killed in the accident at the castle but how? Peach felt that Rosalina had a right to know so the next morning she wrote a letter to the Observatory.
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this is getting good ;) do moree!!!
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Dear Rosalina,

I am not ready to tell you what has gone
on at the castle that night. I'm still recovering
inside myself, so maybe in a week or so i let
you no over dinner.

Yours Truly,

Peach

As Peach went down that crimson staircase to Toad's room on the first floor she wondered why Toad was the only one who stayed at the castle. As she opened the door she saw him on the desk writing something. " Hi Toad." she said in a mild tone. "Toad do you ever think about what happened that night?"
" No i've moved on"
" Not even a little i mean everyone who died!"
And she left a stammered out of the room.
"Ahhh!!!" she screamed
" Rosalina it's you"
" Peach, did you just talk"
"I guess I did, i guess did. Im so angry that Toad doesn't care."
Rosalina stared at Peach like she was insane.
"Peach what do you mean?" asked Rosalina
" Toad doesn't care"
"Peach are you okay?"
"Yes but im mad about it"
" Where did you see Toad in his room, hes always there watching TV or on the computer or writing."
"Peach your kidding right?'' but she wasn't, no she wasn't at all
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Good story so far. Sad though. (sniff, sniff)
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Thank you, yes very sad and Peach is insane sadly.
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"Peach" Rosalina said softly "Toad is dead!"
Peach: But. Come i'll show you. Look!"
Rosalina: Peach this room is empty"
As peach looked harder she realized it was empty.
Peach: But he was right there, oh i wish mario was here.
Rosalina: Let me take you to him.
And with a poof they were at the hospital. It was very cold like all hospitals. They walked to the main desk and asked the nurse to visit mario. The nurse lead them to Mario's hospital room. He was in a Coma. He had been since his head hit the stairrail during the incident. He lay their.
Peach: Is he ever going to wake up?
Nurse: Will just have to wait and see.
Peach leaned forward towards Mario and placed her head near his.
Peach: I love you mario! and she started crying.
Peach: Rosalina *sob* take me home.
And they poofed back home.
Peach: Rosalina, do you want to know what happened?
Rosalina: Only if you want to tell me.
Peach: Ok well it was at the party, supposed to be the party of the year!
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It was a nice night out. Princess Peach was having a Christmas Eve party. She invited the whole Mushroom Kingdom! Princess Rosalina couldn't make it. Princess Daisy and Toad helped Peach get the party ready. The first guests to arrive were Yoshi and Birdo. Yoshi saw the dessert table and ran strait for it. Birdo looked annoyed and followed along. As some of the residents started to come Peach just waited for one person, Mario. Meanwhile at Mario's house he sat eating pasta not knowing about the party for the invatation hadn't gotten to him and he hadn't seen Peach in a few days. Soon Toady a 6 year old toad from next door came in. "MARIO" he yelled. "LUIGI". "What Toady" said Mario. "Are you coming to Princess Toadstool's party". " Peach is having a party?" asked Mario. " Ya me and my mommy and daddy are going, are you?" Mario couldn't answer. He was rushing to get on nice clothes. " Mario what are you doing?" asked Luigi. " Peach....Party....NOW!" Mario yelled. He pulled Luigi and Ran as fast as he could. Toady walked with his parents. Peach was so excited when she saw Mario run through the door. Although everyone was having fun now it would soon be a disaster.

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I'll be your Princess if you be my Toad <3
Awsomeness! Keep up the good work!
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As Mario arrived the castle was flooded with guests. Peach went to give Mario a kiss when the wall exploded. Toads were flying through the air! Peach and Mario started leading everyone to the castle cellar when they realized they were all slanting. The Castle was flipping. People started sliding across the floor along with tables and chairs. Some people were hanging on to out of the stair case railing. Peach, Mario, and Daisy were hanging on to the staircase. As the castle landed on its side it didn't stop flipping. Daisy fell of falling on to the window breaking trough it and blood splattered. Luigi was on the ground rolling eventually breaking his neck. Yoshi and Birdo were still flipping. As the castle landed upside down Peach and Mario dropped thinking it was over. But the castle started flipping again and this wall had a hole in it. People were flying out the hole getting killed as some already were. It finally flipped right side up but many people were missing as many people were dead. Everyone ran back to their homes as the main gang stayed.Peach, Yoshi, Toadette were at the castle helping to get rid of the bodies. Yoshi cried for Birdo didnt make it and Mario had hit his head on the stair rail and Peach thought Luigi was dead and he was. But then Peach looked through the hole confused in what happened when she saw someone running of in the shape of Bowser. Peach soon discovered pieces of a bomb-omb on the ground. She knew he did it.
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OH NO!!! ;)
keep one writeing!! :)
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Peach: And thats what.... WAHHHHH ooo NOOOO!!!! It's all terrible and i just, just need to. And their was silence like the world had ended, but it hadn't. No it hadn't. Just a power outage. And back the power was.
Peach: *sob* woa... that was spooky.
RING RING the phone rang.
Rosalina: I'll get it
Rosalina: Yes.....REALLY.... ok thank you... goodbye.
Rosalina: Peach, come with me
Rosalina poofed them to the hospital
Peach: Rosalina what are we doing her i can't d....
Rosalina: Go to Mario's room
She walked to the room and opened the door
Peach: MARIO!!!!!! Oh my gooodness ive missed you so much!

And Well Mario's alive and well, Peach is happy, and theres a sequel of the begining so this is like the sequel but was written first i guess. Thank you for reading and read the sequel
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ALL COMPILED AS ONE BIG STORY

As Peach lied alone in her King sized pink sheeted bed, she waited for something anything to happen, just as long as it took her mind off that tragic day, or actually night. She heard someone at the staircase making their way up the door,two people. Coming through the door was Rosalina in a silver dress that was down to her ankles. It shimmerd and Luma, well the silver one, floated by her as cute as always. Rosalina noticed Peach was still upset. "Peach," said Rosalina" Im gonna take you somewhere, so get dresses and come down to the main hall. Without saying a word Peach put on a casual n64 dress and met Rosalina and Luma down stairs. The castle was still under construction do to the incident and the clouds painted on the walls seemed like they were gray and pouring rain to Peach. "Come on Peach let's go, and for once i hope you smile" but she didn't smile, she couldn't smile she was just so destroyed inside about what had happened. Rosalina lead Peach outside to the beautiful terrain of Peach's castle. Rosalina used her wand and in a second they were at the.......
They were at the cocunut mall. but Peach was the princess! What cant she get for free. Peach loved to decorate her house and loved to trough parties, loved to. After the terrible accident at the party she could never throw another one again. She really wished her friends that were gone weren't but she felt it was her fault. She should've never invited him. He caused it all. He did it and she new it and he new it, and they all new it. They went into Cyndi's dresses and Gowns and looked through. Peach without saying a word grabbed a shimmering pink dress with a blue broach a single flap with a ribbon in the fro t to hold it onto the dress and puffy sleeves and seemed to go halfway down the shoulder. They bought it and Peach showed in her eyes she wanted to go home." Let's go then" said Rosalina and they poofed on home. Rosalina and Luma told her goodnight and were gone and Peach fell asleep. She wanted to talk. She did but her mind wouldn't let her. Rosalina wanted to know what Peach went through. Rosalina knew they were killed in the accident at the castle but how? Peach felt that Rosalina had a right to know so the next morning she wrote a letter to the Observatory.
Dear Rosalina,

I am not ready to tell you what has gone
on at the castle that night. I'm still recovering
inside myself, so maybe in a week or so i let
you no over dinner.

Yours Truly,

Peach

As Peach went down that crimson staircase to Toad's room on the first floor she wondered why Toad was the only one who stayed at the castle. As she opened the door she saw him on the desk writing something. " Hi Toad." she said in a mild tone. "Toad do you ever think about what happened that night?"
" No i've moved on"
" Not even a little i mean everyone who died!"
And she left a stammered out of the room.
"Ahhh!!!" she screamed
" Rosalina it's you"
" Peach, did you just talk"
"I guess I did, i guess did. Im so angry that Toad doesn't care."
Rosalina stared at Peach like she was insane.
"Peach what do you mean?" asked Rosalina
" Toad doesn't care"
"Peach are you okay?"
"Yes but im mad about it"
" Where did you see Toad in his room, hes always there watching TV or on the computer or writing."
"Peach your kidding right?'' but she wasn't, no she wasn't at all
Peach" Rosalina said softly "Toad is dead!"
Peach: But. Come i'll show you. Look!"
Rosalina: Peach this room is empty"
As peach looked harder she realized it was empty.
Peach: But he was right there, oh i wish mario was here.
Rosalina: Let me take you to him.
And with a poof they were at the hospital. It was very cold like all hospitals. They walked to the main desk and asked the nurse to visit mario. The nurse lead them to Mario's hospital room. He was in a Coma. He had been since his head hit the stairrail during the incident. He lay their.
Peach: Is he ever going to wake up?
Nurse: Will just have to wait and see.
Peach leaned forward towards Mario and placed her head near his.
Peach: I love you mario! and she started crying.
Peach: Rosalina *sob* take me home.
And they poofed back home.
Peach: Rosalina, do you want to know what happened?
Rosalina: Only if you want to tell me.
Peach: Ok well it was at the party, supposed to be the party of the year!
It was a nice night out. Princess Peach was having a Christmas Eve party. She invited the whole Mushroom Kingdom! Princess Rosalina couldn't make it. Princess Daisy and Toad helped Peach get the party ready. The first guests to arrive were Yoshi and Birdo. Yoshi saw the dessert table and ran strait for it. Birdo looked annoyed and followed along. As some of the residents started to come Peach just waited for one person, Mario. Meanwhile at Mario's house he sat eating pasta not knowing about the party for the invatation hadn't gotten to him and he hadn't seen Peach in a few days. Soon Toady a 6 year old toad from next door came in. "MARIO" he yelled. "LUIGI". "What Toady" said Mario. "Are you coming to Princess Toadstool's party". " Peach is having a party?" asked Mario. " Ya me and my mommy and daddy are going, are you?" Mario couldn't answer. He was rushing to get on nice clothes. " Mario what are you doing?" asked Luigi. " Peach....Party....NOW!" Mario yelled. He pulled Luigi and Ran as fast as he could. Toady walked with his parents. Peach was so excited when she saw Mario run through the door. Although everyone was having fun now it would soon be a disaster. As Mario arrived the castle was flooded with guests. Peach went to give Mario a kiss when the wall exploded. Toads were flying through the air! Peach and Mario started leading everyone to the castle cellar when they realized they were all slanting. The Castle was flipping. People started sliding across the floor along with tables and chairs. Some people were hanging on to out of the stair case railing. Peach, Mario, and Daisy were hanging on to the staircase. As the castle landed on its side it didn't stop flipping. Daisy fell of falling on to the window breaking trough it and blood splattered. Luigi was on the ground rolling eventually breaking his neck. Yoshi and Birdo were still flipping. As the castle landed upside down Peach and Mario dropped thinking it was over. But the castle started flipping again and this wall had a hole in it. People were flying out the hole getting killed as some already were. It finally flipped right side up but many people were missing as many people were dead. Everyone ran back to their homes as the main gang stayed.Peach, Yoshi, Toadette were at the castle helping to get rid of the bodies. Yoshi cried for Birdo didnt make it and Mario had hit his head on the stair rail and Peach thought Luigi was dead and he was. But then Peach looked through the hole confused in what happened when she saw someone running of in the shape of Bowser. Peach soon discovered pieces of a bomb-omb on the ground. She knew he did it. Peach: And thats what.... WAHHHHH ooo NOOOO!!!! It's all terrible and i just, just need to. And their was silence like the world had ended, but it hadn't. No it hadn't. Just a power outage. And back the power was.
Peach: *sob* woa... that was spooky.
RING RING the phone rang.
Rosalina: I'll get it
Rosalina: Yes.....REALLY.... ok thank you... goodbye.
Rosalina: Peach, come with me
Rosalina poofed them to the hospital
Peach: Rosalina what are we doing her i can't d....
Rosalina: Go to Mario's room
She walked to the room and opened the door
Peach: MARIO!!!!!! Oh my gooodness ive missed you so much!

And Well Mario's alive and well, Peach is happy, and theres a sequel of the begining so this is like the sequel but was written first i guess. Thank you for reading and read the sequel











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I'm crying! Really truly crying! But my fanfic is going to get sad soon!
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