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The Golden Treasure of Lumaland; this has nothing to do with peach
Topic Started: Apr 20 2010, 11:41 AM (831 Views)
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This story is about Rosalina's daughter, Lucie. It's about a long journey through dangers and thrills to find the sacred treasure of Lumaland. Lumaland is a small planet tucked away near the edge of the galaxy, and rumors say there are many good things awaiting to be found....

(Lucie is the picture at the top.)
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Chapter 1-Lucie.

Lucie was a princess of 10 years. She had a wonderful life, many, many friends, and a mother who made the best muffins in the world. There was one thing Lucie desired terribly. The Golden Treasure of Lumaland. One day, Lucie called her 2 best friends, Lexie and Lacie, and her mother, Rosalina, to the Royal Meeting Hall.
"Friends and mother." she said. "I have gathered you here today to tell you that I will be departing for Lumaland first thing tomorrow. To find what I want so very badly."

Lexie and Lacie

Posted ImagePosted ImageLexie on the left, Lacie on the right.
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Chapter 2- Sad to Excited-For some people...

"No way, Lucie!" said Lexie."It's way too risky."
Lucie looked over at Lacie. She was sobbing by now, drenching her pretty pink dress. Lucie smoothed down her rainbow hair and sighed.
"If you want me to stay with you," she said,"You shall have to come with me."
Lexie got all excited and ran off to pack. Lacie smiled, and she skipped off to pack as well.
"I better get packing as well." Lucie told her mother. Rosalina said nothing. She just hugged her daughter and walked out the room.
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I don't know what to write.
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I'm stuck!
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jasmineism
Apr 21 2010, 12:40 AM
I'm stuck!
Don't worry. Maybe if you day dream, then you'lll get an idea for your next chapter. Don't rush. It can take you at least 3 months before you post the next chapter. That was how it was when I couldn't think of the next chapter on my Pokemon fanfic. It took me 3 months before I posted it. Just take your time and day dream. ;)
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Thanks! I tried it and it soooo worked! Welcome to the website, by the way. I see you're new here. :)
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Chapter 3- A Big Help

Lucie, Lexie and Lacie departed the next day.
Lexie made up an annoying little tune, while Lacie had her bag over her shoulder, and reading
Alice in Wonderland. Lucie was trying to make her torch shine brighter, as it was pitch black in space.
Suddenly, a blinding light came out of nowhere. "What's going on??????" screamed Lacie. "I want to go home!"
"You want your home, do you?" said Lexie. "Here's your home, then!" and she zapped a model of Lacie's house into Lacie's hands. "OOPS!" said the light, starting to dim. "My name is Amelia Starlight, and I am a Light Fairy in training.
"SWEET!" said Lucie. "If you stay dim, you can come with us on our quest and lead the way to Lumaland. I'll make a map for you."
So Amelia joined the quest and it wasn't dark in space any more.

Posted Image Amelia Starlight
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Chapter 4- The Unusual Rainbow...

Lucie was making her own spell up as the four of them were going along the darkness (brightness thanks to Amelia.) of space. This is what she had come up with so far:

Sparkle and Shimmer!
Glitter and Shine!
Send me a rainbow,
With beauty divine!


Lucie tried it out, and sure enough, a rainbow flashed across the galaxy!
But then, a mysterious thing happened. A girl came out with the rainbow!
"Thank you!" she said. "You have freed me. Thank you ever so much. My name is Princess Suzalinosadobalan. But you may call me Suzanna."
"Oh great." said Lexie. "All WE need is yet another dumb person to help us."
Amelia took what Lexie said as a literal offence. She tossed her hair and sped off. Lucie gave Lexie the longest, hardest glare she had ever given in her life. "You too, Twinklehead! Push off." And Suzanna started sobbing, and flew away.
Lacie was so angry!
"Well done Lexie!!! You REALLY went and did it this time!"


Posted Image Princess Suzalinosadobalan.
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Keep going! And you can guess how Bloom looks.
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Chapter 5- Lexie's New Friend

"Lexie, you fat piece of dirt!"shouted Lacie. "I'll kill you if it kills ME!" And Lacie lashed out at Lexie. Lexie was bleeding all down her face. She was very hurt and had to sit down. But she couldn't, as she was in the middle of space. For the first time ever, Lexie started crying. Lucie didn't like to see her friends sad so she made Lexie a magic sofa to sit on. Lacie was not happy. "Come on, Lucie. Let's go and leave HER here alone. Lucie looked over at the sobbing Lexie.
"No. I am not leaving any of my friends."said Lucie,bravely. She knew that no-one would mess with Lacie when she was in a bad mood.
Lucie looked at Lexie again. This time a girl was talking to her!
"OI!!!!!!!" shouted Lucie.
"Hi!" the girl said. "My name is Phoebe Newmoon and I am a Crystal Fairy."
"Don't worry." said Lexie, smiling. "She's with me."
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Chapter 6- Lakadovia

"Oh!" gasped Lucie. "I'm so sorry. I did'nt know you were a friend of Lexie's."
Lacie looked disgusted.
"Any friend of Lexie's is an enemy of mine." she grumbled. Lucie, Lexie and Phoebe were all talking.
Suddenly, a bright light came out of nowhere. It was Amelia! Lexie suddenly forgot she was hurt and flung her arms around Amelia.
"Oh, Amelia!" she said."Oh Amelia, I'm so, so sorry!"
"It's OK. Don't worry." said Amelia.
All 5 girls laughed. Phoebe flew over to Amelia.
"Phoebe Newmoon. Pleasure to meet you!" said Phoebe.
"Amelia Starlight. Pleased to make your acquaintance!" said Amelia.
Amelia and Phoebe laughed and hugged like they were always best friends. So all 5 of them carried on until Lucie saw a huge L sign.
"Lumaland!" she breathed. But she was wrong. As they got closer, they found out that the sign said
WELCOME TO LAKADOVIA.
They had gone the wrong way...
and now they were in the middle....of nowhere.


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Chapter 7- Scared and Alone


Amelia stared up at the sign.
"Lakadovia..." she gasped. She flew up to the chrome gate and knocked gently. Lucie looked a bit frightened. She saw a magic bench and went to sit down. Lexie's stomach rumbled. "Hey guys, I'm starving. Let's get some food from that takeout on that planet over there. "she said. So Lexie, Lacie, Phoebe and Amelia went to the takeout. Lucie was still on the bench! Due to Amelia's knocking, the gate opened with a creak. Lucie saw it and flew inside, on her own. She looked around. It was a scary ghost town, with nobody there. Lucie turned to fly out, but the gate was closed.
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This is what Phoebe looks like! :)
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Chapter 8- I need a Hero-and I got one

"Um..hello?" Lucie called out. "Hello!" called a voice. It was a male voice. The voice sounded about the same age as Lucie. Lucie ran towards this voice, shouting. "Hello? Hellooooooo!" She finally reached this boy and he was smiling at her. "Hi!"said the boy. "I'm Derek and i'm 11."
Derek held out his hand and Lucie shook it. "Um..hi. I'm Lucie and I'm..um..10." she said. She looked into Derek's eyes and he looked into hers and instantly they both knew they were going to be very good friends for a long...long time. "Er..so anyway!" said Derek. "Do you need..er...saving or something?" Lucie thought for a moment. She pictured her in Derek's arms, soaring into the black sky, her friends all very jealous....
"Oh, YES." she said. "Yes, I DO need saving very much."
"Where to, then?"
Lucie thought about Lexie. She had a GOOD appetite.
"That takeout over there, please!"
"Hang tight, Lucie!"
And Derek picked Lucie up and they flew into the sky, both of them smiling.

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