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The Many Tradgaties of Princess Peach
Topic Started: Jun 17 2010, 03:21 PM (511 Views)
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Once upon a time there was a beautiful land called Mushroom Kingdom. It was a land that knew naught but peace ruled by King Peach, a man who ruled his kindom with wisedom and compassion. There was only one thing that gave him more pride than his glorious empire and that was his beautiful daughter Princess Peach.
Princess Peach was a gentle and lovely maiden whose beauty was known throughout the land and kindness was prided by her people. Knowing nothing of war or evil she remained pure and unmared by violence and pestalence. She would soon find out that such a world could only exist so long as there was no evil.
Though the lush fields of flowers were safe and quiet, King Peach whose love for his daughter wa outmatched had ordered two guards to remain with and accompany her at all times.
"I don't understand why my father makes you two follow me everywhere. I'm sixteen years old and he won't even trust me to pick flowers by myself." Princess Peach sighed returning with an arm full of colorful flowers.
"It's not that your father doesn't trust you your highness." Efen, one of her guards said with a smile. "It just that he wants to see you safely back to the castle is all."
"Oh my!" Toadette said, returning with a basket of berries. "You've outdone yourself again! Won't those flowers look just lovely in the banquet room?" she said turning to the guards whose eager nodding made Princess Peach giggle.
"We should head back to the castle now your highness" Efen said picking up his spear "it's almost sunset."
They happily followed the winding trail back to the castle, delihting themselves in Toadettes anouncement that she would be making sweet cakes out of the berries she picked for tomorrow's breakfast. The party suddenly came to a hault at the sound of buzzing.
"What do you suppose that could be?" Efen said raising his spear.
"Maybe a swarm of bees." Toadette said nervously. "We best hurry if we don't want those bees getting our flowers."
"It's getting louder" Peach said backinng away from the direction of the sound holding her collected flowers close against her.
"It... just stopped...." Efen said lowering his weapon.
Suddenly as if out of nowhere a swarm of brown winged creatures dove at them causing them all to hit the ground. Peach screamed as a brown wingless creature sank its teeth into her ancle.
"Back you demon!" Efen bellowed running the beast through with his spear. The other guard let out a battle cry as his sword cut off a wing of one of the flying creatures who started to pull at Peach's long golden hair.
"Quick!" Efen cried "to the castle!"
Though younger than all the mushroomites Peach, knowing she was faster scooped the three up in her arms and ran towards the castle her ancle screaming in pain each time it hit the ground. She had run right through the town as the guards shouted for the people to head for the castle, Toadette warning them that horrable monsters were chaseing them.
"What happeded?!" King Peach crued seeing his daughter run in panting for breath and followed closely by hundreds of panicing mushroomites.
"It was horrable! Simply horrable!" Toadette cried as Peach entle set them down. The guards rushing to the princess and helpin her to her throne. "She's injured! Get the healer!" a guard cried drawing everyones attention to her bloody ancle which had now made a dripping puddle.
"It's true your highness" Efen said in such a state that the other mushroom guards had to pry the spear from his shaking hands. "We were attacked on our way back by creatures unlike anything I've ever seen who attacked from both the air and the ground. We got back just in time to warn the people."
"By the spirits." the king said in a cracked voice. "They're back."
"Whose back?" Peach asked trying to stand up causing the healers to scold her fiercely.
"King Bowser Koopa and his minions." the king answered his manner stricken with fear. " You probably don't remember this, but six years ago, Bowser's father, Memnus laid seige to our castle."He hung his head now even more troubled. "It was late at night and your mother had gotten you out... Memnus' general, Kamak found your mother trying to escape and he...."
"How did I escape the general" Peach asked quietly.
"After that night I sent a messanger out, but when he reported that neither you nor your mother was at the safe house I feared for the worse. The whole kingdom set up a search party... your mother was the first one they found..."
"We found you lying in a ditch from what we could muster up from the scene you must have fallen when your mother was killed." Toadsworth said stepping forward. "You had hit your head and was unconcious for many days."
'With the help of two young heros who used the power of the red flower and the gold star we were able to defeat Memnus and his forces. Bowser declared that the battle was not over and that I would be sorry.... oh spitirs help me." The king collapsed in his throne and shook his head as if in so doing he was able to banish the memories. "He must have found out about you.. and now because of me.... he's comeing after you."
"But why didn't you tell me?! And why can't I remember?!" Peach cried.
"It had been years, I thought Bowser was gone. I never wanted you to have to remember that day, I wanted you to be protected and pure. I fear we must now find the young heros and plead for their help."
"Wait!" Peach said catching his arm. "Where are you going?"
"I shall find the brothers myself." the king said trying to pull his arm free.
"Please father! Don't go! It isn't safe!" She said pulling him back.
" It isn't safe for any mushroomite to ride out!" He said in a raised voice. Frowning as he realized that he had taken out his anger contained on an undeserving spirit. "I'm sorry." he said hugging his young daughter. " I must do what is best for my kingdom, that is my place, your place is here, comforting the people. I will be back in a day." he mustered up his most reassuring smile as he kissed and hugged her.
"Please be safe daddy." She whispered in a voice only he could hear.
"I should be wishing you the same. I won't be gone long, I promise." he gave her one final kiss and headed outside into the cold rainy night.
"Please be safe." Peach whispered as she saw him mount his white horse and ride off into the night.




To Be Continued in Chapter 2 (coming soon)





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I did not know who Bowser's real father's name or what happened to Peach's mother so don't hate and please forgive my spelling I see now I made a few mastakes (this thing didn't display it as indented even though I did)
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Not a bad start, the names are quite fitting except for the king of Mushroom Kingdom, however no name has been given in canon. the spelling mistakes can easily be fixed with a spell check or a Beta Reader, you can ask around to see who would like to be your beta reader.

Eagerly expecting chapter 2.
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thanks I found that some keys on my laptop was jammed like my g button it's very annoying I was speed typing it because I was afrade I would loose my connection before I finished
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Lady Scarlet
Jun 18 2010, 02:09 PM
thanks I found that some keys on my laptop was jammed like my g button it's very annoying I was speed typing it because I was afrade I would loose my connection before I finished
I type my stories on microsoft word so I could make sure that I spell things correctly and you don't need internet connection. ;) Nice story btw. :)
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that was my next plan for part two which is currently giving me writers block
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