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The Adventures Of Princess Peach
Topic Started: Apr 4 2012, 02:38 AM (682 Views)
PrincessPeach103
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This is one of my fanfiction stories. It may be a bit boring at the begining but it is only an introduction chapter. I have written up to chapter nine in my storybook but I have not had time to type the full story up. I am still working on it. Please tell me whether my story is good/bad and what I need to improve, but no mean comments (not that anyone would do that on this forum). Hope you like it!

*THE ADVENTURES OF PRINCESS PEACH*

Chapter 1: The Breakfast Incident

Princess Peach woke up from the golden sunlight pouring in her huge window. It was a glorious day in the Mushroom Kingdom. She lay in her bed for a moment, thinking about how lucky she was to rule such a beautiful kingdom. She looked around her very pink bedroom and murmured to herself:

Peach: What a wonderful day! I sure wish every day was as perfect as this one!

Princess Peach changed into her standard gown (the one that she wears most days), put on her brooch, shoes, and earrings, did her hair and makeup and finally placed her crown on her long, yellow hair. As she made her way down the royal staircase for morning breakfast, a mailtoad approached her.

Mailtoad: Good mornin' ya highness, I got a letter for ya from ya best friend Princess Daisy of Sassaraland.

Peach: Thankyou Toadsey! I have been hoping for a letter from her soon enough. I hadn't heard from her in so long, I thought that SHE may have been kidnapped this time!

Toadsey: No problem ya highness, just doin' my job.

Peach: How many times must I tell you! You may call me Peach. There is no need for such formalities! Hee hee!

Toadsey: Okay. I’ll try to remember that. See ya your hig-Peach.

Peach: Goodbye Toadsey. Have a nice day!

Peach entered the dining hall for breakfast. It is very pink, at Princess Peach’s request. The dining hall has large windows so that they can look down at Toad Town, the Mushroom Kingdom’s capital city. Peach made her way over to her seat at the head of the table. As Princess Peach sat down first, because the Toadstool Dystany royal etiquette required the reigning monarch(s) to be seated first, a fart noise came from her direction.

Peach: What was that? I didn’t do a pop off.

Toadsworth: It came from your direction, if you don’t mind me saying so.

Peach: Of course I don’t mind your point of view. It wasn’t me though. I insist.

Princess Peach stood up and looked at her chair. All of the other toads did the same.

Peach: This looks like a...Whoopee cushion! Who did this- Oh! It has a Bowser symbol on it! I doubt that Bowser would do something so lame. It must have been one of those pesky koopalings! I wish I remembered what they look like! I have gone blank AGAIN!

Toadsworth: I have one on my seat too!

Toadette: Same!

Toad: So do I!

Various Toads: So do we!

At that moment, everyone heard cackles of hysterical laughter.coming from the other side of the dining hall. Princess Peach, after just sitting again, rose up from her chair and stormed over to the other side of the dining hall, not in the best of moods.

Peach: Who is there!?

She saw two figures moving in her pink and gold curtains. Peach swept back the curtains and out poured Bowser Junior and Lemmy Koopa. Princess Peach didn’t remember them very well, or what they looked like for that matter.

Peach: Who are you? You should have a very good reason for trespassing in my castle and putting whoopie cushions on our chairs.

Lemmy Koopa: We didn’t do that!

Bowser Jr: You can’t prove that was us! N-not that it was us though, right Lemmy?

Lemmy: Y-Yeah! You have no p-proof it was us.

Peach: Oh really? Well then what is this!?

Peach pointed to the huge bag of un-used whoopie cushions beside the pair of troublemakers.

Lemmy (trying to get off subject): So you wanted to know who we are? I am Prince Lemmy Koopa, the one that is older and smarter and downright handsomer than the rest of my siblings, and this little pipsqueak faced runt here is Junior.

Bowser Jr: Hey! I am not a little runt meanie! My name is Prince Bowser Jr, heir to the throne of whatever kingdom my papa rules. I don’t care what the name is, as long as I am a king one day! He he!

Lemmy: Oh, and by the way Princess whatever your name is, I can see by that facial expression of yours that you are going to ask me how many siblings we have and why we are here or something like that, blah blah blah. I’ll tell you so I don’t have to listen to you ask anything or talk. There are eight if us including yours truly... ME! I can’t be bothered to name everyone so deal with it!

Peach: Umm...

Bowser Jr: HEY! I heard you before! You ain’t smarter than ME Lemmy...um SMELLY!

Lemmy: Am too dumbo bumbo! I can actually come up with a good comeback, unlike YOU.

Bowser Jr: At least I am Papa Bowsers favourite!

Lemmy: S-SO! I-I don’t care!

Bowser Jr: You do so! Too bad. Boo hoo!

A Random Boo: Did someone say boo? Thats my name, don’t wear it ou-

Lemmy and Bowser Jr together: GET LOST BOO!!!

Boo: Fine then! See ya losers!

Boo flew away feeling extremely angry. Bowser Jr went to go and chase Boo just for fun, but Lemmy kept hold of him. Lemmy had to look after Bowser Jr. Lemmy and Bowser Jr kept on fighting. Peach was begging them to stop. After the tenth time of Peach trying to get their attention, they finally paid her some form of attention.

Peach: Can you stop fighting...PLEASE!

Bowser Jr: Don’t you remember me? I am your favourite-

Lemmy *interrupting*: Second-

Bowser Jr: -Favourite person. After Papa Bowser of course.

Peach: Now I have a rough idea who you are. I definitely remember Bowser though.

Bowser Jr: Grrr! I am the one who sometimes kidnaps you for Papa Bowser!

Lemmy: I help too!

Bowser Jr: Not as much as me.

Peach: Oh! Now I remember you! You are his son’s right?

Peach discreetly summoned some of her palace guards over in case Lemmy Koopa and Bowser Junior got any ideas to attempt to kidnap her.

Bowser Jr *mimicking Peach*: Oh! You are his son’s right! Jeez!

Lemmy: Of course we are his sons you airhead! DERR!

Peach: Hey! That is mean and not true! Guards! Can you please get them out of here. They’re just being pesky and rude.

A Mushroom Retainer: No problems.

Lemmy: Hurry up Junior! Let’s scram! Papa Bowser will be mad if we get caught by Mushroom Retainers! We’ll be a laughing stock!

Bowser Jr: Our brothers and sister will never let us hear the end of it! Apart from Wendy O Koopa! She loves herself too much to notice. Right behind you!

Lemmy and Bowser Jr sprinted back home. The Mushroom Retainers didn’t bother to chase them.

Toad: Thank goodness they are gone!

Toadette: What the mushroom was that about?

Toad: Beats me.

Toadsworth: Are you okay Princess?

Peach: Yes, thank you. Let’s eat in peace now. And to think that today would be a perfect day!

I am working on typing up chapter 2. Hope you like it!
Edited by PrincessPeach103, Apr 4 2012, 02:40 AM.
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haha this is awesome! how come you didnt write a fanfic sooner? your really talented as a writer! jeez. keep it up kid!
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Thankyou! I am hoping to put up the next chapter soon. Now I am currently writing chapter 10 in my storybook and should have chapter 2 posted soon. Is there any constuctive criticism so that I can improve next time? By the way, thanks for the positive feedback!
Edited by PrincessPeach103, May 25 2012, 03:34 AM.
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