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Nemi	12 Jun 2008, 05:49 PM
She lives in a fairy tale somewhere too far for us to find... Posts: 2,304 Group: Nemi Member #11 Joined: 13 January 2008 Steam ID youngrev	I'll be honest here Joker. Editing and posing was great. Though the story? I felt like you pushed it too hard. Like you were trying to hard to get what you wanted. So to me it came out as stale dialogue. I understand you were trying to build a character and all. But it could've been done in a much longer fashion. Not all piled onto us at once. But again, in the technical aspect, it was great. Then writing aspect? Not so good.


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