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The Rekojian One Called Joker.	12 Jun 2008, 05:52 PM
Posts: 7 Group: Members Member #136 Joined: 30 April 2008	Nemi Jun 12 2008, 11:49 PM I'll be honest here Joker. Editing and posing was great. Though the story? I felt like you pushed it too hard. Like you were trying to hard to get what you wanted. So to me it came out as stale dialogue. I understand you were trying to build a character and all. But it could've been done in a much longer fashion. Not all piled onto us at once. But again, in the technical aspect, it was great. Then writing aspect? Not so good. You see, this was all supposed to be the intro, the buildup. It was heavy on dialogue, because it had to set the scene. After this, it was supposed to relax into a more visual comic. But, you know, the aforementioned problems got in the way.


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