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City 17 Street; A random comic by Mr.Chips
Topic Started: 17 Jun 2008, 06:43 AM (456 Views)
CallumFreeman	17 Jun 2008, 06:43 AM Post #1
Posts: 72 Group: Members Member #286 Joined: 28 May 2008 Steam ID [PoB] CallumFreeman	Here is my comic series. I normally post the series over on PHWOnline but here is one of my latest episodes. Edited by Nemi, 17 Jun 2008, 07:05 AM.



Killz2much	17 Jun 2008, 09:49 AM Post #2
Looks like that doctor... got a taste of his own medicine. YEAAAAAAA Posts: 545 Group: Members Member #361 Joined: 6 June 2008 Steam ID Killz2much	Looks like a parody comic of Concerned that sucks. Okay, first off, "Gay-Man?" Really, get better jokes and put some thought into them like Rimmer said on PHW. Also, use better maps please. I always see you using construct and flatgrass. The editing is good I guess but the face posing could use some work. The posing got a bit better I guess. All in all, it ain't good. Get better jokes, a better story, and use better maps.
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Amute	17 Jun 2008, 10:18 AM Post #3
Posts: 183 Group: Members Member #16 Joined: 14 January 2008 Steam ID amute	Oh lawd, he found us.
	John Lennon 'Imagine' You may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one, I hope some day you'll join us, And the world will live as one.


Nemi	17 Jun 2008, 10:55 AM Post #4
She lives in a fairy tale somewhere too far for us to find... Posts: 2,305 Group: Nemi Member #11 Joined: 13 January 2008 Steam ID youngrev	Amute, we won't have that around here. Okay?



Amute	17 Jun 2008, 11:17 AM Post #5
Posts: 183 Group: Members Member #16 Joined: 14 January 2008 Steam ID amute	What Shitty comics or me being a dick?
	John Lennon 'Imagine' You may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one, I hope some day you'll join us, And the world will live as one.


Nemi	17 Jun 2008, 11:19 AM Post #6
She lives in a fairy tale somewhere too far for us to find... Posts: 2,305 Group: Nemi Member #11 Joined: 13 January 2008 Steam ID youngrev	The latter.



Killz2much	17 Jun 2008, 11:24 AM Post #7
Looks like that doctor... got a taste of his own medicine. YEAAAAAAA Posts: 545 Group: Members Member #361 Joined: 6 June 2008 Steam ID Killz2much	Amute 17 Jun 2008, 11:17 AM What Shitty comics or me being a dick? It's obvious Mr. Chips doesn't care about what you think, seeing how on PHW they mentioned he had you on the ignore list. Edited by Killz2much, 17 Jun 2008, 11:25 AM.
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CallumFreeman	17 Jun 2008, 11:25 AM Post #8
Posts: 72 Group: Members Member #286 Joined: 28 May 2008 Steam ID [PoB] CallumFreeman	Ok, I will try to get better jokes and setting. I will set the story more in city 17 rather than gm_flatgrass or construct. This was just to test my posing. Also amute, I don't give a crap what you think. So there. Edited by CallumFreeman, 17 Jun 2008, 11:26 AM.



ErikKiller	17 Jun 2008, 12:31 PM Post #9
Sleekier or vomiter Posts: 2,243 Group: Members Member #196 Joined: 10 May 2008 Steam ID 456123789258	Well yeah Amute tries to be all fancy and shit. Other than that good for a first comic, decent for a third, shitty for later. Editing IS nice but yeah different maps...



DIE	17 Jun 2008, 12:59 PM Post #10
The engineer awaits quietly, until his prey, ignoring any possibilities of resistance, raches the capture point... Posts: 479 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: 12 January 2008 Steam ID [DIE]Hardcore Medic	Uh... Why did you name it ''City 17''? Only 10 of your comics occur in City 17, and you cancelled City 17 street and started with City 18.
	The engineer awaits quietly until his prey, ignoring any possibilities of resistance, reaches the capture point...


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