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The State of The Union: Union of Evil Part 1; Yes Yes YES!
Topic Started: 4 Oct 2009, 09:41 AM (144 Views)
Chris	4 Oct 2009, 09:41 AM Post #1
Bitches don't know bout my dyslexia Posts: 707 Group: Members Member #215 Joined: 15 May 2008 Steam ID Chris_or_DIE	Its heeeerrrreeeee..... And there you have it comrades, part one of the great story arch 'The Union of Evil' submited with a week to spare to my birthday. But what will happen next? How will Chris react to the Gun revelation? Who was that mysterious woman? And will they actually raid Aperture science? Find out next time in The State of The Union! Spoiler: click to toggle Whenever that is...



SoupForOne	4 Oct 2009, 10:05 AM Post #2
A blackbelt judo expert with a machinegun Posts: 1,148 Group: PoB Squad Member #514 Joined: 22 January 2009 Steam ID OctaneHugo	Brilliant. The editing was a bit confusing in some spots but I was entertained the whole way through. Can't wait for Part 2.



Chris	4 Oct 2009, 01:13 PM Post #3
Bitches don't know bout my dyslexia Posts: 707 Group: Members Member #215 Joined: 15 May 2008 Steam ID Chris_or_DIE	SoupForOne 4 Oct 2009, 10:05 AM Brilliant. The editing was a bit confusing in some spots but I was entertained the whole way through. Can't wait for Part 2. Nor can I, It will make a pleasent change to be able move this sucker on now



Looshkin	4 Oct 2009, 10:25 PM Post #4
Axe wielding maniac, with a touch of Celtic class. Posts: 1,272 Group: Team Loosh Member #78 Joined: 27 April 2008 Steam ID Looshkin_uk	Wow... Just, wow.



Chris	5 Oct 2009, 12:57 PM Post #5
Bitches don't know bout my dyslexia Posts: 707 Group: Members Member #215 Joined: 15 May 2008 Steam ID Chris_or_DIE	Wow as in: WOW! or Wow as in: Wow...?



Looshkin	5 Oct 2009, 07:14 PM Post #6
Axe wielding maniac, with a touch of Celtic class. Posts: 1,272 Group: Team Loosh Member #78 Joined: 27 April 2008 Steam ID Looshkin_uk	Wow as in WOW!



Arctic Avenger	11 Oct 2009, 01:09 AM Post #7
Moment of the Unknown Hero Posts: 824 Group: Members Member #76 Joined: 27 April 2008	You wanned a reply Chris, you got one. At first, I tought FireFoX had a glitch, because it was using 300 RAM! >.< Then I noticed it was because of the size of the comic. That beeing said... If I was to estimate how long it took you to put this together, I would say about a month, and that's just for the posing. One thing I did notice about your comics Chirs. You have a tendancy to not use dots and commas, very much. Maybe it's just me, but adding these would make one less thing seem out of place. And since were on the subject, about the layout. Try to pay more attention to it, because in some places it seamed sloppy. For example, the meeting in the rec' room. The problem I'm habing right now is how to put this, in a way, that it wouldn't seam, mean (there was another word, but it doesn't come to mind right now)? Around 50% of this comic, I found boring. I'm not saying you didn't put a lot of work into it, nor am I saying that it didn't have good parts. Maybe I need to be part of the union, maybe I need to be british (along that line, the first part might be true), to find it "WOW" as a certain member put it. Believe me, when I say I understand you have a duty towards your Union, and that you wanna put your friends in it. But in a way, this is what I think contributed to it beeing the way it is. You comprimesed quality, by adding more and more characters. I hope you don't take it the wrong way Chris. This is just how I see it. Just a suggestion, but I think it would have been a good idea, to link to some of Striker's comics. The one with the villan, you just showed. Edited by Arctic Avenger, 11 Oct 2009, 01:10 AM.
	There's a saying around here. You want the weather to change, wait 5 minutes. If you want my opinion to change, you can go FUCK YOURSELF!


ErikKiller	11 Oct 2009, 03:38 AM Post #8
Sleekier or vomiter Posts: 2,243 Group: Members Member #196 Joined: 10 May 2008 Steam ID 456123789258	Arctic Avenger 11 Oct 2009, 01:09 AM You wanned a reply Chris, you got one. At first, I tought FireFoX had a glitch, because it was using 300 RAM! >.< Then I noticed it was because of the size of the comic. That beeing said... If I was to estimate how long it took you to put this together, I would say about a month, and that's just for the posing. One thing I did notice about your comics Chirs. You have a tendancy to not use dots and commas, very much. Maybe it's just me, but adding these would make one less thing seem out of place. And since were on the subject, about the layout. Try to pay more attention to it, because in some places it seamed sloppy. For example, the meeting in the rec' room. The problem I'm habing right now is how to put this, in a way, that it wouldn't seam, mean (there was another word, but it doesn't come to mind right now)? Around 50% of this comic, I found boring. I'm not saying you didn't put a lot of work into it, nor am I saying that it didn't have good parts. Maybe I need to be part of the union, maybe I need to be british (along that line, the first part might be true), to find it "WOW" as a certain member put it. Believe me, when I say I understand you have a duty towards your Union, and that you wanna put your friends in it. But in a way, this is what I think contributed to it beeing the way it is. You comprimesed quality, by adding more and more characters. I hope you don't take it the wrong way Chris. This is just how I see it. Just a suggestion, but I think it would have been a good idea, to link to some of Striker's comics. The one with the villan, you just showed. Dyslexia. Google it.



Arctic Avenger	11 Oct 2009, 04:44 AM Post #9
Moment of the Unknown Hero Posts: 824 Group: Members Member #76 Joined: 27 April 2008	ErikKiller 11 Oct 2009, 03:38 AM Dyslexia. Google it. And all these years I lived in darkness. Thank you Erick, for showing me the light.
	There's a saying around here. You want the weather to change, wait 5 minutes. If you want my opinion to change, you can go FUCK YOURSELF!


Mythos	11 Oct 2009, 07:59 AM Post #10
PhD. Posts: 3,741 Group: Admin Member #2 Joined: 22 December 2007 Steam ID MithosAurion	I just finally got time to read this; sorry for not doing it sooner, comrade. The editing really was quite confusing at bits, and that's one of the main things I think you should improve on. Otherwise, what you have here is one of the best Garry's Mod comics of the past year. It's funny, it's interesting, it's tense, it's got a great climax, it's fresh... well, it's epic. Congratulations. You've got a classic right here. Can't wait for part 2. Also, I assume the other guy's skins are real and not people you made, but still... damn, those are some ugly skins.
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