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| Amethyst Sunrise; A WillowxThane fiction. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 8 2009, 06:37 PM (532 Views) | |
| Syniah | Aug 11 2009, 02:27 PM Post #46 |
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Willow I look at Thane and smile. I dont think i want to go back. If I go back, then I will have to marry prince caleb. But Caleb will realize I've lost my chasity and can ruin my Land's title. What will happen to Thane? I dont want to leave him. And because of our act, he may be prisoned, whipped or worse. Executed. I have washed the berries and see Thane walk next to me. 'Look, i picked fruit for us. i cleaned them off." I smiled at him and I see him trying to smile but it's grim. |
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| LadyG | Aug 11 2009, 02:32 PM Post #47 |
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THANE "I noticed" I said to her and kneeled next to her, then just sat on the ground and picked a handful of the berries she chose. She's smart, she picked edible ones and no poisonous ones in the mix. They taste very good, sweet and ripe. Better then the bread I've been living off of lately. Bread and other stale foods. "I am going to take you back after this" I tell her honestly, I should do that much for her "you can kick me, hate me, scream. I have no choice, I have to return you. I took you for a reason, I still need to go through with it, for both our sakes" I say "your still under ransom and your men will start searching this far before long, we might even be intercepted on the way back" I admit. None of my plan may actually work. Sure hasn't so far, I never expected to kidnap a girl in the first place, or fall for her or bed with her at that either. After we eat I get up and walk to the horse and grab the rope I had tied to her hands the night before "come on" I told her, hoping she'd cooperate. I know I have to tie her up again. |
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| Syniah | Aug 11 2009, 02:42 PM Post #48 |
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Willow I feel sad now but Thane is right. I have to go back. i have a duty to Azanth and I must go back. I get up and go with him toward the horse and let him tie me up. "If my child is a girl I will name her..." I say thinking. "Atlanta. That was my mother's nickname because she was a fast runner. Just thinking in advance." When he helps me onto the horse and gets behind me, I lean onto him and sighed deeply to myself. I will have to return not a princess anymore. I will return a queen. |
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| LadyG | Aug 11 2009, 02:50 PM Post #49 |
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THANE "Nothing says you are impregnated Princess" I tell her after a bit "a Heathen like me I doubt is any fertile" I kick the horse into action, going back into the woods. Even this deep out I know where I am and which direction to go. It'll take a good hour before we are back into Xanth. The ride will feel forever. It DOES feel forever. We ride the hour and I stop near the hut. I do not enter though, I just want to know the others are okay. They seem to be, nothing is disturbed and I hear thier voices talking inside. I go on my way. Why ISN'T there more search parties and guards around? had they given up? or looking in another direction. I take a deep breath and ride into town, fast, fast as I can, so I don't change my mind and to try and keep up what I really want. I stop metres before the castle gates, I won't move forth. I have thier Princess, they can come to me. I have the upper hand at this moment. Thier prized possession. Now all I can do is see how this all turns out. |
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| Syniah | Aug 11 2009, 02:57 PM Post #50 |
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Willow I pretend to have fainted in his arms as I hear loud voices opening the castle gates and I feel someone grabbing me. I open my eyes so it seems I've woken up. I see them grabbing at Thane, forcing him down onto the ground. My father, Prince Caleb and his father come to us. My father hugs me and says, 'Willow. My Little Willow Tree, are you okay? I dont see any bruises on your face. Your dress is dirty and...Oh my willow tree." "What is the meaning of them. Guards, throw that man into the prison!" says the king of Xanth, telling his men to take thane to the prison. I cannot help but sob. "I know he hurt you, but he's going to prison and he wont hurt you ever again," my father says. But he doesnt understand that my tears arent from Thane taking me, it's them taking Thane away from me. |
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| LadyG | Aug 11 2009, 03:19 PM Post #51 |
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THANE DAMN. Thats the only thought I got. I was careless. I didn't notice the guards from behind me. I missed them. They were the ones who jumped me. The guards from the front were more careful. Making sure I had no weapons to hurt thier Princess with if I or they made a move. They were quick, getting me to the ground. So much for deliberations and debates. No ransom deals, no money, no chance. I don't fight them hard, theres no point. I let them take me to the prison cells. I saw her face before I got taken away, she was crying. I can't be fully sure her reasons, but I know I have a pretty good idea. Shame her family is so arrogant they'll never know her true reasons for those tears. The cells are cold, dark and dingy. Mud floors, a single window to let sun or moonlight in. The cell bars. It smells musty. The floor is yet again my sleeping ground. There is other prisoners too. Most of them look old, like they've been there a long time and have long gone crazy from the solitude. I won't have to worry about that. My crimes mean I'll be hung or worse and pretty soon too. Too bad that girl wasn't a sword fighter or adventurer, she could break me out of this place. Maybe she'll confess her love for me in some other way. Though I doubt they'll let me out as much as add her to these cells. |
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| Syniah | Aug 11 2009, 03:27 PM Post #52 |
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Willow I'm sent to my bedroom as they assume I've been overcome with Shock. I stare out my window and let loose another tear. And idea comes into my head and I go downstairs. There is a servant that is about to give food to the prisoners. "Excuse me?' i ask. "May I take this down? I want to make sure the prisnoers down get away." The servant is reluctant but lets me take the food. The cellars where the prisoners are is dark, cold and smells of must and rust. I go through the cells until I see Thane. "Are you use to the cold?" I slide his tray to him. "I want to get you out of here. I dont want you hurt..." |
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| LadyG | Aug 11 2009, 03:35 PM Post #53 |
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THANE "cold does not bother me" I admit to her, it is the truth, I've felt worse. I take the food she slid to me. Knowing it is from her means I do not have to worry about it being poisoned. I think about what she said. "don't bother saving me Princess. It would ruin your own life. Admitting you love a low life. A heathen. You would be shunned. Kicked out of this land. The peace between the two lands would be broken. Just marry and be happy" I told her. I realize the worst at this point too. The original servant who brought food down was standing there and overheard our conversation. They run off, obviously to tell of what they just heard. What does it matter to them? a Princess from another land? to them they'll see themselves as doing thier Prince a favor, warning of a Princess who isn't pure and in love with Caleb. |
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| Syniah | Aug 11 2009, 03:41 PM Post #54 |
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Willow I see the servant run off and I say, "I have to go...Goodbye Thane..." I look at him then I run fron the cellar and as fast as I can, i run to my room and close the door and look out the window. My father and the King of Xanth come into my room and said, 'What is this I hear that you are in love with a heathen?" "Father, what are you talking about? I love Caleb," i say, forcing a smile. "The servants..." the king of Xanth say. "The servants speak nothing of truth. I do not love that dirty thief and kidnapper! I love Caleb and I will be happy marrying him," I say, standing up. "Please...Leave my room..." "Willow Tree..." my father says until I glare at them and they both leave. I lay on my bed and sigh. I am going to be married to Caleb. I want to be free but no matter what, i shall only be in this prison of my own, far worse than Thane's. |
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| LadyG | Aug 11 2009, 03:47 PM Post #55 |
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THANE I can't help but wonder what Willow did. Where she ran and what she said to cover up the truth. Or did she. Maybe she told the truth of our love. I doubt it. I'm sure she wants to live and my life isn't worth it. A few hours pass, the sun is setting on the town again and I sigh. It's boring down here. I just wnat to know my fate and have it over with. I guess I won't have to wait long, here come guards and the two Kings right now. I stand up and look them face to face, not letting them look down on me. I've had enough of that. I don't speak though. "your coming with us" The Prince of Xanth says "you are to be hung the beginning of next hour. For your crimes of kidnapping our Princess" I say nothing and just go along with them. |
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| Syniah | Aug 11 2009, 03:53 PM Post #56 |
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Willlow I see them about to execute Thane. I shouldnt have lied. I should have said the truth. I see thane get onto the platform and the noose being tied around him. Thoughts run into my head until one comes out in a loud noise from my mouth. "NO!!!!!!!!" I run up to gallows and say to Caleb, "NO Caleb! No! I should have told the truth before, i dont like you! You're boring and egotistical and self centered. i hate you even!" My father and the king of Xanth gasp. "Willow, you mean you..." my father asks. "Yes, i'm in love with this heathen. I even gave myself ot him. I may or may not even have his child!" My father gasps and the king of Xanth is wide eyed. "Child what have you done!" the king of Xanth shouts at me. "You've soiled yourself! you were to stay pure for my son and my son only! You are now nothing more than a stupid little whore!" My father glares at the king of Xanth and says, "Dont you dare call my daughter a whore! The engagement is OFF! Take the noose OFF that man and let him come with me and my daughter and my wife. We are leaving here and never turning back." I smile and take the noose off Thane and hug him. |
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| LadyG | Aug 11 2009, 04:00 PM Post #57 |
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THANE I really have no idea what just happened, it was all a blur. The noose around my neck, screaming, the girl, more yelling and name calling. Taken to a new land? going with the King, Queen and Princess Willow to thier land? Could they really let me be with her or will they execute thier own punishment on me in that land? I can't help but hug her. That small warm body of hers. She told the truth afterall. Used her will and strength and came forth for me. I kiss the top of her head and look at the King and Queen and Azanth "I'll travel with you. I have one favor to ask. If you would listen. I have a few friends here I would like taken care of." I say. I love this girl. Set, Damean, Wil and Joshua were there for me too, I want them to have a life too. |
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| Syniah | Aug 11 2009, 04:03 PM Post #58 |
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Willow "Alright, indeed it shall be done," says my father, smiling. "Bring them to us before we leave. Xanth knows they have another carriage to spare." The king of Xanth is not pleased at all and just scoffs. "Fine. You shall have a carriage for, whoever you take with you." I look up at Thane and kiss him directly on the lips for all to see. I hear Meredith clap and say, "Oh, so beautiful, their love." "yes..." I hear my father say, sighing. happily for me. |
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| LadyG | Aug 11 2009, 04:09 PM Post #59 |
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THANE I can hear some distaste to the Kings sigh he gave, but he also wants his daughter happy and I do not plan on letting them down "can I have my horse back? to get my friends?" I ask and look at Willow, knowing she might remember my friends and not think to highly of them "do you mind? they really are not bad people" I tell her, she nods for me to get them. I mount my horse and ride off and within the half hour I am back with the 4 in tow. "are you really willing to let us out of this land? to give us a better future?" Damean asks Willow |
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| Syniah | Aug 11 2009, 04:12 PM Post #60 |
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Willow "Yes, my father is going to take car eof you. But of course, you'll have to also take car eof yourselves. Find your own house and such things like that," I answer him, nodding that my father will take care of them. I hold Thane's hand and smile. "I am going ot be queen of Azanth with you as my king," I say smiling. "I love you." |
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