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The Cheatin' Heart; KaellanxDerekxEpue Fanfic story
Topic Started: Aug 13 2009, 02:31 PM (531 Views)
LadyG
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KAELLAN

http://www.costumecraze.com/WEST06.html
(hope that works for Kaellans costume)

I'm standing in my room looking in a full length body mirror and doing up my corset. Take in my waist and prop up my bust. The back does what it needs to my butt naturally. The stockings to slim and lengthen your legs. Gloves to add sexiness. That's my job, look good for the men. Next is makeup and proping up my long wavy hair and add the feather. Actually today I think I will keep it flowing down loosely. Men like playing with the feather for some reason. My costume is more sleek, sexy and clean then the other girls, you can easily pick me out of the crowd from them. Purple is my color of choice and no other girl is allowed to use it in this saloon.

Most don't call my by my real name, Kaellan Suzume. Suzume is an odd last name for this day and age. It doesn't really matter, no one addresses me by it. Most of the times its 'hey you over there' or 'hi there pretty lady' or the basic 'what does it take to get YOU upstairs' and 'can I buy you a drink'. No one cares about my name as much as my body. But that is my job. I work in a saloon called The Cheating Heart. A place for men to go and drown thier worries in thier drinks, smoking, gambling and whores. I'm the last option. Poker seems to be huge these days. As is the whiskey that flies off the shelves and the cigars- oh how I hate the cigar smell on thier breaths mixed with the booze.

The owner is a man by the name of Ephraim Dark. He's tall, handsome and definately knows what he's doing. A great businessman. He also bartends alot to keep an eye on things. I know him as Epue for short. I like working for him. In fact I love him. Perhaps since I am his number one girl. He doesn't let me 'go upstairs' for just any men that stroll into this place. Most nights he has me for himself, I like it, he knows how to please me. To have me the cowboys who stroll in here HAVE to be THE high payers or prove thier worth in some manner or another to Epue. The other girls get any men, I don't. The only rule all whores have is no kissing (that IS true to olden days). We'll give our bodies out, but kissing is sensual, saved for love, the most passionate of sexual acts and we shall not give it to these rogues. To me, that's for Epue. I can perform ANY other act a man wants.

I live in this saloon. As do about 5 other girls. I pay no manner to them. Us girls, it's about business, and to each of us, the other is competition. To me not so much since I am the head whore, the top wench, the REAL money maker for Epue. Anyone who is grungy, dirty, or perhaps judged as dangerous can't take me to my room. The other girls can deal with THOSE men. Epue keeps a good roof over us, as long as we are turning over enough men to keep up money and business we can stay, as well as pay our share of room and board. We live and do our business in our provided rooms. Epue provides us meals and drinks. The other girls pay from thier earnings. I'm able to sneak things more freely.

"a new day, a new adventure" I say to myself in the mirror pulling up a garter around my high thigh to add the last touch and smile. Actually the real last touch is the lighter I put down the middle of my chest to pull out to light the mens cigars, they love that. I'm used to the sounds downstairs, drinks clashing down on tables, the odd scuffle of men fighting over thier poker game, my how they can cheat. The other girls flirting and giggling, working up thier next 'victim' as I call them for fun. I leave my room to join the crowd, going downstairs.

"good morning Mr. Dark" I say and give my smile and walk behind the counter. I slap his butt for fun. It makes him smile. To start my day I like to throw back a drink or so myself, helps make the days activities easier. I scan the room looking at all the rogues and cowboys wondering if any seem worth my effort.
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"Morning kaellan. Good sleep, I suppose'n?" I say to her, smiling as I wipe the counters clean. Ephraim Dark is the name. I've been living in this town for over...Pretty much all my life. The Cheating Heart was my great-granddady's saloon, that was passed down from him to my granddaddy, to my daddy to me.

Kaellan. My top Saloon girl. I suppose you wanna know the relationship between me and her. Event hough Kaellan is the money-maker for my saloon, I guess you can say she's something close to being a wife to me. With the other girls, I dont care who takes them up there and what not. But with her, she's only for those worthy and for me. I love her. I shouldnt love a whore but I do.

I wonder who's gonna come in today.

"Gonna bring somemore money into the place Kaellan? I know you will." I say. "Maybe tonight, you can entertain me." I smirk as I say it.
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KAELLAN

"you know it" I say back to Epue. I always please him, whenever and wherever he asks for it. I look around, downing a bit of whiskey and take to the floor. There is a few handsome men in the saloon, time to see if any are worth the effort. The bunch so absorbed into ther card game to even know if its day or night I don't bother with. They'll want ladies later when they aren't so busy. I see a table of some cowboys just sitting and having fun. Lia is working one of them already.

Lia is my favorite of the other girls here. She is probably next in line to take over when I leave or find better, if that happens along. Or if Epue truly makes me his wife. Her bust puts the other girls to shame. Pretty face and voice. Her butt is a bit on the smaller side though. Shes on one guys lap running a hand up his chest, giggling and whispering in his ear. I smirk and take a man across from her

"light?" I ask him pulling out my lighter and lighting his cigar for him. Of course they love the lighter comes from my chest, their eyes always seem to linger there a moment. Lia doesnt' seem to mind I joined her table. The other girls hate it when I come near. I'm their competition, they want me no where near them. Jealousy often happens around here. A few girls have lost thier jobs fighting with me.

"why thank you miss" the guy says and takes a puff of his newly lit cigar

'yuck' I think to myself. He sounds old. Smells of old booze and the cigar, something about him I don't like. Hopefully someone better walks in.
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So far, no one has walked in so I just serve the men more beer and whiskey.

Then, a man came in. Tall, dark and mysterious looking. One of those rogues I guess you be hearing about in the papers. His hat is pulled down infront of his eyes so no one can know what he's doing. He wears a long black coat and I can see from it open, he has a pair of guns on him.

He comes to the counter and said, 'Whiskey." His voice is husky and I can tell it's from years of smoking.

"Coming up sir," I say, getting him the whiskey. "So, what brings you into town?"

"Heard this was the best saloon around," the man says.
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I saw the mysterious one walk in. THAT was my cue to make a move. I know this man intrigues Epue, I can see it on his face. Maybe this one will be worthy of my business. No others in here at the moment are. I walk over to him while Epue is serving him and asking casual questions.

"Hello stranger" I say, standing near him and trying to look a bit under his hat. Two of the other girls scoff. Giselle and Eugene. Mad I got to this one first. But they should know better. If they want to make money they need to concentrate on thier business, not mine. Though maybe in a way I just stole thier business. I look at Epue who nods that its okay for me to keep working this particular man. New folk in town are good hits. I do them right, they spread the word and more folk come strolling in.

I reach into my corset as always "light?" I ask, incase he smokes and I can tell he does.
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"Thanks," the man says, pulling a cigarette from his coat and putting it toward his mouth. He lifts his hat up form over his eyes so Kaellan and I have a better look at his face. His eyes are blue, a piercing blue.

I now grow concerned when he looks at Kaellan and smirks. I fill his mug with whiskey and slam it down on the counter. I go to the other cups and clean them.

"Eugene, Giselle, go, go," I say to them, shooing them away so I could watch this man and Kaellan.
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This man is one good looking fellow I give him that.

"so what brings you into town?" I ask, but he's quiet. The quiet type. To me it matters not, it is not my job to know ones business.

Something about this man has riled Epue, I can see it. I look at him and smile. A look that says 'it's okay, I want this one'. I sit on the stool next to him, my back to the bar, leaning back a bit with my chest pushed forward and tilting my head for a bit of added sexyness

"you have a name mister?" I ask so I can at least address him properly. I DO like his eyes. A stunning blue, piercing. There looks like there could mayhap be a lot of adventures and tales behind them. Almost think I'd like to hear some. All of a sudden I have goosebumps and its not even cold out.
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"Derek. Came to town to stock up on things. I dont mind a lay or two," the man says getting closer to Kaellan.

I'm trying not to frown for Kaellan's sake but it sure is hard not to. I try to relax when she told me with her eyes that it was okay but I know deep down in my heart, it's not. I feel as if after this, things will change for her and I.

"Mind getting me a whiskey? And a drink for the little lady here?" Derek says, still smirking and smoking. I do what I'm asked and give Kaellan a drink and give Derek whiskey.
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I don't mind when the men proposition me with booze. Sometimes I refuse. This time I won't.

"you have a girl in mind for that lay your after or will I suffice?" I ask, giving him the choice. I already know it's me, but asking always makes you seem a bit better in thier minds. Besides, I'm not opposed to sharing the bed with another girl or two for the sake of pleasing these men.

I wait for him to finish his drink and I get up "come, let me show you upstairs" I say, wrapping my arm into his and pulling him along gently. I take him upstairs but not to my room.

The bathing room is vacant. It has a free standing tub and I fill it up with bubbles and nod towards it "I reckon after a long journey you can use a bit of a good soak and company to clean you up" I say, meaning for him to go in as I wash him. Both of us know full well I'll rub him FULLY down. I'll take him to my room after the bath.
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Traveling? Sure, yeah I've been traveling around. This saloon is alot different than the ones I've been to in my travels. The whores are usually ugly and they dont even have a bathing area. But this one is fairly decent. The girls look good and they have what I want.

I take off my hat and strip down from my clothes and get into the bath. It's nice and warm. I smirk as I get in and wait for the girl to wash me down.
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I must say I am impressed with this mans body. He keeps in shape. Strong muscles in his chest, thick arms. Strong legs. Big cock. It's my job to notice that last one. I hate small men, I really do. This mans package is nice. I must say he is similar to Epue. The two compare nicely.

"Derek right?" I say "lean forward for me sugar" I say from behind him, start on the back first. It's the boring part, get that out of the way first. It may not be sexy but I AM thorough at what I do. I run my hands around front to his chest from behind, rubbing it and breathing lightly onto his neck.

His scent is interesting. For a smoker he actually doesn't smell horribly bad and for a man that seems 'cold' he actually is quite warm.

"there are no rules in this here saloon, other then no kissing. I'll do anything you ask, for the right prices. If you want more girls to join in let me know and I shall fetch as you desire" I tell him "you start hurting me now, I will raise a ruckus" I tell him, my eyes shifting to those large guns he carries.
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"Dont worry hon, I aint gonna use those on you," I say to her, knowing she's looking at the guns I carry. I let her wash me up. For a whore, she sure has nice hands. But really, i expect a lay and to get cleaned up.


Epue

I want to go upstairs and check on Kaellan but I decide against it because I dont want anyone trying to stela my beer and I dont a bunch of drunken idiots would try and start a fight.

I sigh and shake my head.
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I move around and rub his chest and his legs and all, washing him up, I even offer him a shave but he refuses. I reach into the water finding his manhood and smirk, rubbing it up and 'washing' it. Making him ready for the actions we shall take next. He doesn't disappoint me with his hard manlyness. Big and strong like the rest of him.

"you have two options at this point mister...Derek" I say using his name "for extra, I get naked and fulfil your desires in the tub, or we move to my room now and you bed me. Perhaps both perk up your interests." I offer to him the choices

'he better pay good' I think, I haven't actually noticed where he keeps a wallet or how thick it may be, but I don't mind right now. I'm actually looking forward to this one for once. Usually its only Epue I look forwards to.
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"Hmm..Tempting offer," I say, being turned on my her stroking my manhood.

"I'll take you on your offer of bed." I'd rather do a woman in the bed than in the water.

She leads me to her room and the moment we're in there, I push her down on her bed. Because she's already naked and I dont have time for foreplay, i slide into her immediately and go at a hard and fast pace. She'll get turned on after a bit, I know it.
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I'm used to men just pushing me around and doing me hard or fast, foreplay or not. His 'attack' surprises me not. I immediately respond to him, moving my body with his and pushing back at him with the same force.

Some men like it when you just lay there and let them be dominant. I know just from this short time talking Derek is not like that. I run my groomed nails up his back and tilt my head back, letting off some moans, I can fake it as well as I can mean it. For now its fake, its too soon, but men love to hear thier women moaning.

Soon it does turn to some pleasure. This man sure can rock a girl. He's very filling and skilled. He knows a womens pleasure spots. I like that. My moaning is real now.
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