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Our Heart's Destiny; Written version of the comic
Topic Started: Dec 4 2010, 10:18 AM (39 Views)
Syniah
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Alright! So since this is a solo story, i decided to do a novel version of our Heart's Destiny. And it might be better for me to understand on how I want to draw everything if I'm organized. ANd I need to practice writing anyway.
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Thane

Age 5

"Why the hell would you cheat on me!?"
"Oh, fuck you!"
"Four children and you're doing them like this!?"
"Well, if their mother wasnt such an overbearing bitch then I wouldnt have to cheat now would I!?"

I watch from the corner of the hallway my mommy and daddy screaming at each other. They look so mad. I've never heard Daddy cussing at mommy like that.

"You're giving up your family, the family we've had for over fourteen years for some whore you slept with for only a few months!?" mommy screams at him, her face turning red with anger.

"No, I'll never leave my kids, real talk. But I'm getting sick of you! Everytime I come home it's 'Seth, where were you? It's one in the morning and I know you nothing better to do!' or 'Why were you cheating on me?' for years until now!" Daddy shouts back at mommy, his face showing anger.

"Get the hell out my house!" Mommy shouts

"Gladly. And wait til i take your ass to court!" Daddy shouts as Mommy follows him to the door. Daddy opens the door and before Mommy can say anything, he slams the door behind him. She stands there, shaking. I see she put her hands on her face and is crying.

"Mommy?" I say, revealing my hiding spot. She gasps and turns to see me.

"Honey, what are you doing out of bed?" She asks, picking me up as she wipes her tears.

"Is Daddy coming back?" I ask.

"yes, of course he'll come back and we'll be a family again," she says, kissing my forehead, "Now, i need to tuck you into bed."

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Age 14

I frown. Mom's at the kitchen table, drinking a beer already. She's been doing that lately. Drinking one beer when i see her. I dont believe she's drunk but she easily could. She looks at me and smiles weakly. Before she can say anything, there's a knock at the door and I answer it.

"It's Seth," I shout to my mom.

"you know better than that, boy," Dad says, frowning as well. He's wearing a black suit with a red tie. His dreadlocks are pulled back, exposing his face. I can definitely see myself in him. But of course, he's my father. Seth Jenkins is just another nigga to me. A Nigga who left my mom for some bitch

"Trinity," he says to Mom, "I want to take Thane to lunch. I havent seen him since the divorce."

"So you can abandon him again like you did when you divorced me?" mom retorts and I smirk.

"Whatever, I'm taking my son to lunch atleast. And maybe while we're gone you can get yourself together and maybe find a man instead of moping around and drinking. Set an example for Serena," Dad says as he takes me to his car. A new black Benz. It's in pretty good condition.

The silence within the car as we drive to whatever restaurant Dad's taking me show how much I dislike him. I know he glances over at me once in a while but doesnt say a word. I dont look at him at all. A straight toward look and a hope that i can hurry up and go back home.

We leave the Benz and go to the doors of the Random Home Buffet. When we sit, I look out the window, not wanting to look at his face. He sighs and rests his forearms on the table.

"Thane, why do you dislike me so much?" he asks. As if he really honestly needs to ask on that topic.

"You left my mom for some woman and you expect me to be okay with what you did?" I ask him, smartly.

"You dont understand what happened or why it happened Thane. you're acting on emotions that have misunderstandings," he says, making em upset even more.

"And it looked like you acted more on lust when you were fucking that bitch," I say and immediately Dad grabs my shirt and I'm ready to fight him if I have to.

"Now listen here, boy.

(will finish later)
Edited by Syniah, Dec 4 2010, 08:46 PM.
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