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The Cheatin' Heart 2: Revenge.; An ErikaxLevi (and others!) Western.
Topic Started: Nov 7 2011, 08:29 PM (565 Views)
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About 20 years ago my life completely changed. One of my best friends died. She was a co-worker, a friend, someone I actually liked in a job that sucked. I was a saloon-girl 'wench' for Ephraim Dark, Epue for short at The Cheatin' Heart. Long story short he was best friend and lover with Kaellan Suzume. She had no family and Epue grew up with and guided her, he helped her, gave her a job, loved her. He wanted a family with and to marry her. Til HE came along. Derek, a mystery man from far off who caught Kaellans attention, shook things up and got in a showdown with Epue over thier shared love of the same girl. Derek AND Kaellan lost. They both died. Kaellan left me a note that day to take care of Ephraim from then on, to help him heal and I have ever since.

When Kaellan died I helped Epue grieve. I was too so it wasn't hard to share the pain and move on together. Not long after I stopped being a wench even though I was Epues best moneymaker at the time, but I didn't want to have him re-live any pains and uncertainties. I didn't want a repeat of Derek and Kaellan. Not to make her sound bad, she really did love Epue and tried to save him. After half a year Ephraim asked me to marry him and settle. I agreed. We married shortly thereafter, cute little ceremony, I got the most beautiful dress I could afford, my hair done up and a bouquet of my favorite flowers, plain red roses. We bought a nice home and I became a mom quickly too. Pretty sure I got pregnant on our wedding night. I stayed a housewife after, watching the home and raising our two daughters. Eirika is 18 and Daniella is 16 now. Epue and I have been inseperable.

'Not much changes' I think to myself sitting behind the bar at The Cheatin' Heart. Some men playing poker, some with girls on thier laps, the girls working for thier money and rent, the smoke and booze in the air, it's all the same.
Epue wanted to give up The Cheatin' Heart after Kaellan died, to shut it down. I told him it was part of his family, to be strong, overcome and make the saloon stronger in the process. He did.
He is still the manager but has help. A man named Levi came in with a bunch of business experience and helps Epue take a break when he wants.
The girls are changed too. After Kaellan died and I retired Trina left to be with her regular, Seth. They got married. I went and saw the ceremony, they both looked so happy and content. Eugene met a handsome rough looking rogue who whisked her away and we got a letter from her years later telling us how she settled, had a son and daughter and she was happy and safe. Giselle up and disappeared, we never heard from or saw her again.

Now I watch the girls and sigh. Epue and I give the girls a safe home, decent rooms, decent rent, food, safety. Epue won't let his girls be abused or hurt. He really does the best he can. What makes me sigh is Eirika is out there. She chose to follow in my old footsteps against my advice. She would be the 'lead' girl but Epue won't allow her, wanting to drive her out of the saloon and into a better job, but she seems content for now. She's sitting on a mans lap who is playing poker, he seems to be losing, probably because fo her distractions. He's not her 'regular', that is Jonah, mysterious boy he is. She tells me about him lots over dinners. Sitting at the bar taking a break is Amy, she's a cute little thing. She has no parents or family. Not much boob or leg but she has this amazing innocence to her face that just draws some of the men into her. Epue wasn't even going to take her in since she looked TOO innocent but he heard her story and put a roof over her head. She has no parents anymore, young, needing guidance...it was exactly like Kaellan. Dianna is up in her room I saw. I pity her. Her family is poor and trying thier hardest to keep thier land and to make her own contributions Dianna does this job and gives them her spare money. Miracle is also a cute little thing with a pretty good set of breasts to attract the men. She is educated, a decent family, has talent. She 'fell' is our best guess. Me and Epue think she got so tired of being 'good' that she tried this and just lost herself. I really hope she finds herself again. Kiyah, SHE'S the main girl right now, biggest set of breasts I have ever seen, great legs, wild black hair with some red she dyes in, frisky as hell. I've heard rumors of the all sorts of things she'll do and allow for her men. Most the girls seem to have men who like them, regulars. We'll see where those 'relationships' go. Miracle doesn't, but she has an admirer from a distance, photographer who lives in town but refuses to come in and pay for the sex, I think he just wants to 'save' her nicely.

"mom, you're dazing" Dani says to me, working behind the bar. She won't whore, she refuses. I'm not sure why but I won't complain either. She works the bar and helps her dad with the drinks, supplies and keeping everything clean. She has a really good eye for watching for potential fights and issues too.

"It's nothing, just thinking of the past" I tell Dani, seeing Ephraim and wave to him. Epue waves back but I see a girl walk in and that catches my attention instead, of course naturally we are only used to men walking in. Girls only walk in to fill a vacant spot and apply for a job. I look this one over. LONG black hair that must be just past her butt, tall, small breasts but I can see her legs from the front look pretty damn nice so I bet her behind is too, she might fit in. Epue will have to talk to her and see what he thinks, 'screen' her. Then I see her wave at Eirika and smile "Guess they are friends" I say, assuming she isn't in for a job afterall.
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Nineteen years ago. It's been so long since I've even thought about what happened but every night, it still haunts my memories and it plays over and over and over. When HE came in. Derek, rogue from the East. When he challenged me to a showdown and that showdown lead to her death. Kaellan. My first love. We grew up together as I took over my family's bar. She had nothing, no parents, no home, no money, nothing. It's why I fell in love with her.

With her death, I moved on with Lia, we married and had two daughters. I look over the counter to look at my oldest daughter. I frown at both the fact she decided to become a Saloon Girl and that the man she's with is trying to feel her up. I cant help it as a father but she is eighteen and she's old enough to make her own decisions.

"Dani, hand me the whiskey bottle," I say to Dani as she hands me the bottle and I fill up two to give to the men.

When she walked in, I was amazed and had a look of familiarity. But that could be so but it doesnt matter.
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Epue musn't of heard my first thought or just didn't answer to it anyways. I watch him fill up for two men who walk away with thier mugs and go to Amy who for the moment shoo's them away. They must of done something to make her refuse but I never saw it. I also watch at the new girl who walked in. Eirika left the lap of the man she was on and went over to the long haired girl and they sat at a table alone and started talking.

"I bet Eirika is telling her how to get a job here" I say and Dani shakes her head

"I don't get why ANYONE would want the job, but then again you are never short on girls from what I've seen" Dani said and goes to stocking up more Whiskey on the back shelf of the bar. I know she sneaks a drink once in awhile but she behaves and for all the work she does, she might as well take a small reward once in awhile. She's really close to her sister even though they seem to have two very different personalities, but they watch eachothers backs and laugh together alot. Alot of men do try and take her upstairs. Afterall, shes got a nice body with a large chest and long hair but she also dresses up in tight tan pants alot, her tops and takes on a boyish style, some of the men like her 'independant' style, but she'll never go.

"Maybe you should go over Epue, see what the two are talking about, you were talking of posting a 'Help Wanted' sign, maybe our help just walked in" I say to him. I have no idea why this new girl has me curious but she does. Maybe it's her pretty blue eyes.

I look and see Dianna come back downstairs from her latest customer. She adjusts her corset and runs a hand over her shiny straight brown hair to make sure it's all tidy. I am pretty sure when she straigtened her hair she flicked away tears in her pretty green eyes too. I KNOW she hates this job, but she manages for her family. At first Epue or I would check to make sure she wasn't abused but that never seemed the case, I think the hurt is emotional, not physical. She looks around, maybe for a new customer...or maybe Aric...he's her regular. I think he is anyways. He used to come in here for any random girl, but once Dianna joined us he seemed to of taken preference. He's the only one I've never seen her cry after having.

"Wonder how long it took her to grow that hair, it's so pretty" Dani says watching as Epue goes over to the girls to talk and say hello.

I look around noticing Levi is off today so while Epue isn't at the bar I get up to help Dani watch it til he returns.
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"Hey girls, how's it going?" I ask the girls and Eiri smiles.

"Daddy! I'm surprised you didnt meet Erika yet! She came into town a few days ago. She use to write to me! Remember?" Eiri says, her words almost mash together and I stare at her.

Write to her? Where did that come from but then again, i remember seeing letter talking to someone but Eiri got into the mail and started writing to someone. I never minded it but after that she had stopped writing letters.

I shake my head and try to not confuse myself anymore than I should and smile. "Hello, Erika. How are you?" I ask. She's a quiet thing.
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"Good" I say extending a hand to the man and shaking his. From research I have done and through Eirika I know this is Ephraim Dark. His wife is Lianda. The daughters are Eirika who I have 'befriended' and Daniella. From what Eirika has told me it must be her behind the bar that I spot. The wife is pretty, she really is. I see her eyes watching me and I see she must not like the idea of any girl being a saloon girl anymore. Eirika wrote me about that once, telling me how her mom didn't agree even though she used to be one herself.

I scan the Saloon, looking around at it all from where I sit and my eyes rest upon a picture high up on the back bar. It's of the man before me when he was younger and a black haired pretty lady beside him. They look happy. It also is the clue I needed to know I am exactly in the right place I wanted to find.

I have business in this town to take care of, but I need to be careful how I go abouts it, so for now I play the part I know that I need to. Ephraim is watching me to see what I'll say next so I amuse him and tell him exactly what he thinks I am going to say "I was wondering if I could get a job here" I say to him, waiting "I know you'll probably want to ask me a few things, I'm willing to answer, or show that I can belong"

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"yeah, I'd like to see what you can do," I say to her. "I dont want to throw you into the crowd now but how about tomorrow? That way, I'll have a dress ready for you. You're tall but slim. I have a few that could fit you."

Eiri looks around and says, "you two keep talking! I see my regular!" Eiri runs off to meet that Jonah boy. Rogue, around her age and looks like he's much older. She sits in his lap and flirts with him.

"I never wanted her to be like that but I cant stop her...Whiskey?" I ask, pouring some in a mug for Erika. "Other than the job offering, what you in town for?"
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"Just looking for a new place to settle. I came from a town even smaller then this and jobs were so sparce that I decided to branch out and just see what I can find. I know this doesn't seem like the best job to pick up on for why I moved but alot of people in town said you were REALLY good to your girls and make it respectable so I figured I'd come and see" I say to Ephraim Dark keeping it short and simple of an explaination but it should be a satisfactory enough answer to cover my needs.

I watched Eirika a little, that must be Jonah. She wrote me about him too, chatty in her letters she was. Almost annoyed me, but chatty also meant she was easy to get the info I needed from, even without her realizing. I just didn't realize she'd be RIGHT at the heart of my business. Jonah looks older then her, longer jet black hair tied at his neck, pretty buff actually. He holds her and kisses at her neck, fondling her up a bit. He does look like a rogue, he doesn't hide the gun at his waist and his boots alone command attention. Eirika mentioned he was VERY well equipped where it counted for her job, too much detail, but hey, now that I can see his face I can definately picture it.

I realize I got distracted and look back at Ephraim "sorry" I say knowing he said something but I missed it and pay more attention "tomorrow, that is fine with me. I like purple if you have that, don't know why. It was just always a favorite of mine, or blue to match my eyes" I shrug and take the whiskey he offered me and sip at it before I just down it fully and set the glass down "no more" I say when he offers more to me.
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I nod and stop serving her. "Well, I can offer an old room if you dont have a hotel already," I said, holding back a choke since it was Kaellan's room. I didnt want anyone in there or to disturb it but it seems that if I fully want to move on, I have to do just that. I just miss her so much, i guess.

I see Eiri taking Jonah upstairs to her room. He pays well and she does love him or atleast I hope she does. She services him over everyone else when she sees him. There are days where she flat out rejects others waiting for him and when he doesnt show, she resumes her duties and sleeps with others.
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"I actually have a hotel for tonight, thanks" I tell Ephraim. I only want to use this place when I have to, when I get a job here to start up my plans and ensure I am in the right place. Something also tells me the room he offered means something to him, he got emotional in his eyes. No matter, I'll deal with it later "I see your younger daughter I assume? your wife? behind the bar. You, does anyone else run the place with you? quite an accomplishment if you have it up and running without much else help" I tell him, making random talk with him

JONAH

I take Eirika upstairs in my usual fashion. Her dad watched us earlier but he doesn't mind me so much as he minds the OTHERS who touch her. I can't say I like other men touching her either but for now we are young and I am not settling YET to tell her to stop what she does. She makes a pretty penny for it and saves up well. Her younger sister is a cute little thing too, I tried to get her up once for a threesome but she refused.

When we get to her room I close the door, locking it and smirk. I go up to Eirika, pulling her into my arms and up to my body, letting her feel me. She lets off a soft moan and I kiss at her neck.
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Before I say something, a young man of only Twenty stumbles in. His brown hair a mess on his head and his shirt buttoned in every old whichaway. He says, "Sorry, Mr. Dark! I didnt mean to oversleep! I thought my brothers were going to wake me but my youngest brother was with some girl, my second older brother was in his chair, staring off into space and my oldest brother was writing and laughing. They completely ignored me!"

"No worry, Levi. Come, sit. You can start in a minute," I say to him. "This is Miss Erika. She'll be working here soon."

He looks at Erika with some astonishment and I have to admit, I believe the boy was struck with love when he saw her. He's an awkward thing while she seems cool and collected. I believe they could work out as a couple.

Eirika

I moan as he touches me.

"Where were you yesterday? I was waiting for you," I ask, wanting an answer before we had sex. I wrap my legs around him and kiss at his neck and nibbling on it, just like I know he likes it.

I feel him poking at me and I know he's ready. Cant say I'm not ready either.
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I see the boy...man...and how he looks at me but for now I don't show any interest. It's hard to tell in the clothes, which are a mess, that he has on how he is under them and his hair is a wreck. Guess his face has some pretty potential though. Not like I really care, I'm just here for business and once it's done, so am I.

"So, I HAVE the job then?" I ask Ephraim, since he said I'd start working there himself I assume I already am in, no interviews or tests needed.

"You offered her a place right?" His wife comes over and sits with us "Hello Levi" she says and chuckles a bit at what a mess he looks "you should go have a Whiskey and wake yourself up" she pats his back to tease him

JONAH

"I do have the parents farm to tend to, the horses and other animals. I don't get my muscles that you like so much doing nothing" I tell to Eirika. I have other rounds of business too, but nothing she needs to hear for now. My dad does some rough stuff and mom wants me to keep them a secret for now, not sure why. She doesn't seem SCARED about it, more like she wants to surprise some people, not like I'm sure WHO she could surprise around here.

I take Eirika over to her bed and lay her down on it, my body hovering over hers, waiting to hear what she wants me to do with her. I look her over though, always loving how her breasts practically pop out of her corset whenever I do lay her down, ready for me to take in my mouth.
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"Yeah," Levi says, coughing a bit and gets some whiskey. He drinks some of his whiskey and went he perks up just a bit, he unbuttons his shirt to button it back up. He's a muscled lad and I know Erika saw. Unfortunately, Levi sometimes forgets that it's inappropriate to undress and dress in front of ladies but from his brothers, it's not an issue as he never had a woman in his home. Lianda is about as motherly as he can get from a woman.

"Well, come back here so Dani can go take a nap. She's been here since early and she barely got any rest last night," I say and Levi comes behind the bar, straightens his hair and puts on his charm. He's awkward but when he gets behind the bar, he's a charmer. Flirts with alot of the girls. I had to hit him to keep him in check for flirting with my daughter.

Eiri

I smirk and say, "Well, show me how you handle the animals." I love it when he's rough with me and sometimes it embarrasses my mom and Dad because i'm so loud. They say some couldnt concentrate on their games nor hear the music but only when I'm with him.

I kiss up at him and keep my legs around his waist.
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I did catch a glimpse of Levi's chest but still don't care too much, as I said, I'm not here for the boys. I'm just here for my family and the revenge they deserve.

"Can I catch a quick tour of the place?" I ask Ephraim

"I can show you, I'm going upstairs anways. If I just take a small rest I do it here, otherwise I'd just go home" the little sister days to me, Dani I guess she's called for short and she watches her dad for approval which he gave and I follow her upstairs looking at the rooms. There really isn't much to learn about the place. A bathing room. The bedrooms the girls work in. I see a room that must of been a 'master' bedroom in the past but it doesn't seem to used now.

"your parents lived here til they got thier own place I assume?" I say to Dani

"yep, when they fell in love and settled they got a proper household to care for" Dani tells me "this is my room, it's easy to figure your way out and back down from here" she says, retiring to her room and I glance around a few more places before heading down and passing one of the other girls going up with two men at once. I must admit, her chest is massive. No wonder she works here.

When I get to the bottom of the stairs I look around. I cringe at what I'll have to do, looking over these dirty old poker players and rogues I am not impressed at all. I go and sit at the bar, watching Levi throw his charm onto a few of the other wenches who are clearly on break.

JONAH

I press into Eirika more and kiss her before moving back and pulling her to sit up with me. I love it when she strips me and if she wants me to give her what I have she knows she needs to do just that for me. I don't even have to give her any commands before she is unbuttoning my shirt and removing my clothes. I remove the gun at my waist myself, not wanting any 'accidents' with it.
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His guns scare me but I know it's part of whatever he does and it's for protection. I strip him completely bare and take his large member into my hands and begin to tease him by kissing him before taking him fully into my mouth and sucking him. I look up to him, knowing it turns him on and so i can see his face while I do it.

Levi

"Why so glum? You're doing what you both can!" I say, flirting with them but I do feel some protectiveness over them.

"I just want to be...independent. My mother and father are just farmers and I never wanted to be a farmer's wife so I left. I'm pretty sure they miss me. I miss them since I left a baby sister there...Maybe I can go back to them one day," Miracle says. I remember when she told me how she got her name. She said her mom went into labor and there was a chance that she and her mother were going to die but when she was born, her mother kept breathing and she cried.

Miracle looks over at the photographer. He's more awkward than I am but a gentleman. He takes pictures of the Saloon for the newspapers sometimes but I know he has pictures of Miracle.

"Maybe one day. Now, perk up, babe," I say, tickling her chin which makes her giggle before leaving the bar and going over to the Photographer.

I go over to Erika and say, "Anything I can help you with? Any drinks you'd like?"
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I sit and watch things from at the bar. I'm not working at the moment, actually I just don't feel that great to do it today. But I'll sit and look pretty for now. Today is the anniversary of when my parents died. They were both shot in a raid while out shopping for new material for my mom to sew into clothes. After that I had nothing. The Sheriff told me of thier death and I moved on, unsure where to go, lost, crying and a mess. Ephraim saw me walking the street one night, looking thin and ready to fall over and just die in the street. Something in me sparked his interest. I heard stories over time about his past, a woman he loved. I think she had the same lost parents background that I did. He gave me a home for a few nights and I started working here on my own after. He didn't ask me to do it, he was just keeping me alive and safe, but I did it anyways. I don't mind it, but I don't love it either. I saw Eirika's 'regular' in here earlier and the town photographer is in too, probably to take some photos of the saloon at Ephraims request. He never drinks the booze or takes the girls. At most he'll have a light meal, do his business and leave like a gentleman. Miracle is lucky he notices her, even if she hasn't noticed what we've all seen.
Dianna is sitting next to me and giggling about Levi and how he treats us. She likes him but in a brotherly fashion, her 'regular' tends to come later at night. She's the closest I have to a best friend around here. When we aren't doing our job she really is nice to spend time around town with and she's fun.
"He notices her" I tell Dianna, speaking about Levi and the new girl.

"yeah he does, but he flirts with us all, he's probably making her feel welcome" Dianna says watching "though he should find a girl, he's of age"

"You two think she'll fit in here?" Lia comes over and asks us, leaning on the bar.

"Sure, her hair will make her unique from the rest of us, she's good looking too" I tell Lia and watch as Levi and the new girl clink thier glasses together in a drink.

JONAH

I smirk down at her while she sucks me and run my hand through her hair. Her hair beats anything else in a day I have to ever touch, soft and silky. She must spend a bit of her earnings just to keep it that way, while she is sucking me I use my hands to loosen up her corset and allow her to take it off later when the time is right.

Through the walls I can hear quite the ruckus in the next room. From what Eirika has told me the wild big breasted one works from there, sounds for sure like she has two men having thier way quite well with her.
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