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| The Cheatin' Heart 2: Revenge.; An ErikaxLevi (and others!) Western. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 7 2011, 08:29 PM (572 Views) | |
| LadyG | Nov 8 2011, 09:23 PM Post #31 |
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ERIKA I sit around for a bit of the night, just scoping the place out, talking to Levi, learning more about the girls and one by one they start introducing themselves to me. I like the cute small black haired one. Amy. She seemed nice. The one called Miracle just seems in it for the wrong reasons. Kiyah seems interesting, very wild and carefree. Eirika I already knew and she was sitting with Jonah most of the night at a table playing poker with her parents and friends. Dianna is cute too, plain but there to help her parents, noble cause, just wrong place to do it in. I'm sure she could of gotten a more decent job in this town then she did. Willow went up earlier I found out her name, she seemed okay. Guess I'll have to meet her better later. I see Dani and Levi shutting down the bar slowly and cleaning up for the night. I wait around since I don't have much else to do and everything I can learn about this place the better, including any hidden security measures they have in place. When all the men, drunk or not, leave I watch as the girls go up and retire to the baths or thier rooms for the night. Probably go up, count thier money and figure out thier bills to do it all again the next day. Somehow I bet thier laundry isn't fun either with what the men must do to thier clothes. I sigh again at the thoughts. Maybe tomorrow I will take it easy and pretend I am just learning more and getting comfortable in my role, probably won't even be a huge lie. "what side of town do you live on Mr. Levi?" I ask him, curious. |
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| Syniah | Nov 8 2011, 09:47 PM Post #32 |
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Levi "Northside of the town," I answer. "I usually get up early to get here. But It's not bad. The pay is actually decent. Get alot of tips. Hmm, apparently Miss Willow's regular is staying the night." He usually does. Everytime he asks Willow to take him for a bath, he stays the night and leaves by the time we open up in the morning. I think he has some feelings for Willow but since his brother is sleeping with her and is married, he's not going to go for marriage. She loves him too. It's sweet. |
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| LadyG | Nov 8 2011, 10:13 PM Post #33 |
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ERIKA "I'm actually in a motel on the Southern side, so I guess I'll see you tomorrow. Maybe it was wise, I won't hear your brother screaming from where I am" I tease Levi. Despite he's not that attractive to me so far, at least I seem to be able to talk to him. I get off the stool and head to the front when he is leaving too. Outside the Saloon I look up at it a bit, seeing a few lights on from the various girls and look around, the streets are quiet. It's odd, I've never seen a town this behaved. Thier Sheriff must be a hardass or something "I'll see you tomorrow Levi" I say to him waving and heading off in my motels direstion and get to my room, kicking off my shoes and outfit and sigh "tomorrow it all starts falling into place more" I say to myself and lay on the bed,falling asleep quickly from some of the extra whiskey I drank all day. ------- LIANDA The next morning Epue and I head in early to help set up the bar. I know Epue doesn't normally need my help but since we will be gone most of the day I give an extra hand so the place won't fall apart. I clean while Epue takes stock and writes up some orders he'll need. I bought Erika a cute little purple garter. Epue told me she requested purple so I picked an outfit piece for her, and a nice candle. It was something Kaellan liked to do. Buy candles and give them to the girls. I just picked up on it. I go into the room Epue let her have, Kaellans old room. It hasn't been touched much at all over the years. I think every once in awhile Epue came up here to dust it and tidy up, but as far as moving things, it's all the same. I save Epue from the 'dirtywork' and bring up a box, taking out things that were personally Kaellans and pack them away very safely and respectfully. I know Epue will appreciate it even if it hurts. I change the linens. Leave the candle and garter on a small little nightdesk. Clean a bit, check the locks. It's all in order for her. I take the box to a safe place that we can take it home later, I don't mind if Epue wants to keep it. I loved her too. By the time I am done most of the girls are down eating some breakfast before thier day starts. Erika walks in and looks around. Her black leather pants surprise me a bit, they show off her legs more then her skirt the day previous did. Her skirt I could tell they were long and her body seemed slim, now her pants are hugging both her legs and behind tightly. Yeah. Men will like her. Perhaps we should let her stick in her clothes all day. Men might like the option of a girl in leathers then just the typical corsets and skirts the others wear. Her black leather boots are cute, feminine despite being boots. I look and see Epue watching her. I see the sudden flicker of pain in his eyes. He's thinking of Kaellan and she loved wearing pants too when she could. Her top is a deep blue that brings out her eyes intensity and is unbuttoned at the top a few buttons to show what she has of cleavage, it's not much, but she works her body well. She waves at me and I wave back "sit and have some breakfast Erika, it's on the house" I tell her and Erika nods and thanks me, sitting with the other girls to probably chat and get to know them better. Levi is late once again. I shake my head wondering what the reason will be today, his brothers are just horrible sometimes. |
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| Syniah | Nov 8 2011, 10:35 PM Post #34 |
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Levi Damn horses and their owners. A stampede happened and I almost got trampled but luckily it's still early and the Saloon had just opened. Lucifer and Belial said they were going to visit a bit later but I pray they dont start anything. "Sorry, stampede...People cant control their horses," I say, getting behind the bar. I see Erika and I know I have a surprised look on my face. Her figure is amazing to me. I cant help seeing her like this and I hear Epue chuckle. "Like what you see champ?" he asks, nudging me before joining with Lia. "Oh! And Levi, I left a list of things I need. Send out for them when you get the chance." |
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| LadyG | Nov 8 2011, 10:47 PM Post #35 |
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LIANDA "The more amusing thing is she's sitting and he notices her like that, just wait til she stands and he gets the real eyeful" I laugh to Epue about it, I've never seen Levi so struck by a girl and it's cute. He's always been a flirt, but this look is different. "Ready to go home and get ready for dinner later?" I ask Epue. I know it's early morning and dinner is well, later..but I can't help wanting to take Epue from this place once in awhile and have quiet time away with him. Or not so quiet, depends on how you look at it and I smirk slightly to myself. "what do you think Jonahs parents will be like?" I wonder to him, thinking it over. I hope for the kids sake we all like eachother. DIANNA "He looks at you" I tell Erika and Erika looks to see Levi after he came in and gives him a wave and a wink, I know she's just teasing or playing him but his reaction was rather cute, waving back and a slight blush actually hit his face "wow" I hear Amy say, seeing it all happening too "I don't know, getting involved wtih him would mean being close to THEM" she says, meaning Levi's brothers. "I'm sure she could handle. Lucifer is all talk, but he's not that bad or dangerous even in the bedroom and if you treat him right, mmm, he tips well" Kiyah says. I swear I don't know HOW she keeps her corsets on, the one she has today looks so tight her breasts are practically spilling out and jiggling all over. I even catch Erika watching them a second probably having the same thoughts I do. "Think I can get away with just teasing and flirting but not sleeping with men today?" Erika asks us "sure, I did it yesterday" Amy admits. We all know she had reason though and we don't bug her. Some days we do make competitions with eachother to see who can earn the best tip, or get the most men or money in a day. Days like yesterday we don't out of respect. We hardly all fight with eachother, but once in awhile our hormones flare up and there is a few catfights but Ephraim knows how to handle the situations well, like a good boss. "Willow, your regular stayed all night" I wink at her and she blushes but gets a grin too "and Eirika, you aren't in your outfit, what gives?" I ask her, not aware of her plans to have dinner with her regulars family. |
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| Syniah | Nov 8 2011, 11:02 PM Post #36 |
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Eirika "my regular is inviting me to his home for dinner! I cant wait!" I say to Dianna and Amy. "I've never been to a farm before! I know it probably doesnt smell good or whatever but it'll be even more special because it's with him!" I cant help twirling around a bit and smiling. Epue I smile and see that Jonah really makes her happy. I yawn and say, "you kids keep the place nice and PLEASE for the sake of God, dont let this place get trashed nor Lucifer mess it up. Just let him have fun and let it go." I got with Lia and hug her. |
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| LadyG | Nov 9 2011, 08:16 AM Post #37 |
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LIANDA I chuckle a bit at Epues worries. Levi is good and despite his awkwardness sometimes since he did get the education and some previous experience in keeping businesses safe and the girls trust him. He's good at making our orders and tending to things so I know we'll be safe while gone for the day. "I need to figure out what to wear. I mean. I hope his parents dont' think we are lowly since we run this place, we DO have some class" I say, thinking it over. Some people think we aren't the best folks since we run this place but I tend to just leave that thier problem for saying such things. "We'll be fine" Dianna says to us and smiles and Amy nods beside her "you guys go have some fun and relax for a bit" Kiyah says too "isn't Dani going?" she asks seeing Dani working behind the bar "Nah, I'll stay here and help Levi" Dani says overhearing it all and smiles "Okay, well come on" I say pulling Epue with me so we can leave before he starts worrying TOO much and won't despite our plans. "See you later Eirika" Amy says as they all leave "OH, and Erika, if you want to wear that outfit today go ahead, I'd actually like feedback on how well the guys react to it" I say as me and Epue walk out the door ERIKA "So, the bosses are gone, do we party?" I joke, not meaning it. I see they are getting ready to open up and I can already hear some mens voices from outside waiting to get in for thier favorite girl. Actually I am very happy at Lia's offer that I can stay in my current clothes and work the day in them. It's what I am comfy in and will enjoy. "They might of heard about the new girl and want to test her out you know" Kiyah winks at me and I groan "I think I'd prefer to just watch and learn and tease for today" I admit, before the biggest loser in the place takes me up and runs me off I say and Dianna chuckles "The ones who wait good and early usually ARE those type" Dianna says and shakes her head "come on, lets get you more ready, lighters are behind the bar, Levi can hand you one. Men love it when we light thier smokes in provacative ways" she says "or any attempt at bending we make, handing them a drink to 'dropping' something to sitting in thier lap" Kiyah says "I'll handle" I say to them and get up to go a bar stool and sit "Give me a shot of that Brandy there, see what it is like" I say to him "and a lighter" |
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| Syniah | Nov 9 2011, 02:51 PM Post #38 |
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Levi I give her the lighter and Brandy and watch her a bit. I guess I am awestruck at her. She's a very beautiful girl and I'd like someone like her by my side. Someone who's graceful and cool with me who's awkward and clumsy. I'll have her notice me. I'm so in thought, I jump hard when I hear Willow say, "hey! I need some more lighters." I look at her and give her the lighters she wants and smirks. "Thank you!" she says, going off to see some of the guys in when we officially open our doors. |
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| LadyG | Nov 9 2011, 05:41 PM Post #39 |
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ERIKA I sip at the alcohol and hear the men come in when the place opens. I sit where I am for now, contemplating how to work my day. I really want to just tease and earn smaller tips and not give myself out. Honestly I hate this place. I hate Ephraim. I hate what these girls think they have to do to survive, it's disgusting. I'll make sure this place has no chance of reviving after I am done with it. Get my revenge and set the girls free in one shot. On the other hand I might have to lower to the level just for the time being while I 'work' for Ephraim and complete my plans. "You okay?" Kiyah comes up asking me "you look so deep in thought" "If I hold back a bit today Ephraim won't take it out on me?" I ask her and she shaked her head and sits down next to me "no, he's good. Ephraim isn't like others who run these places. He allows no abuse, no hurt, he feeds us, helps with clothes and even if some girls wanted to get an education further she could just work evenings. But this is home, so we 'work' all day but take our breaks or sit in our room or at the bar when we want. Extra money we can shop. He's really good to us, I promise. He'll understand if you need to take it slow at first and adjust" she tells me. I find her interesting. She's so bold and out there, but she showed a caring side. Still, I don't think Ephraim is as innocent as they think. I look at his old girlfriends photo above the bar with him. She's not alive anymore is she? how great can this place be. Others have died here too I know but thier pictures aren't on the wall. Kiyah gets up to go do her 'business' and I finish my brandy letting it's warmth hit me and relax me "How long have you been here Levi?" I ask him about working in this place |
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| Syniah | Nov 9 2011, 06:09 PM Post #40 |
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Levi "Been here for about a year and a half," I say, "My brothers barely did anything around the house so I went out and looked for a job and I ended up here. Long hours with not many breaks but hell, the pay is good. What about you? Didnt you work before coming here?" I see Kiyah with her regular. I believe a Caleb? he's an oriental from the East that caught Kiyah's attention. He's the tallest Oriental I've ever seen. He's atleast six foot something. He feels at her legs and smirks. She smirks as well and I shake my head. They might as well be together. I clean some glasses before some of the men came to the counter and ask for Brandy and Whiskey |
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| LadyG | Nov 9 2011, 06:27 PM Post #41 |
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ERIKA I avoid the men for now and wait for the two at the counter to leave. Since they distracted Levi I don't answer his question about what I did before here. I don't have a quick proper answer to give him that he would like. I sigh, get up and look at a table of poker players. May as well start somewhere. They are only getting set up so I go over and make sure my top is open nicely to get some attention with my pants that I know are tight enough to gather some eyes on me with as well. "You men need a ladies help for anything while you get set up?" I ask and give them a big smile "perhaps some whiskey?" "Beer honey. From that barrel there" one points to the bar on the far right side and I nod "I can do that honey" "and some smokes. Tell Levi to give us a tin of our usual cigars" a second says and I nod and go to the bar, I know they will watch since I am new and want to make sure I can get thier stuff proper, I purposely lean onto the bar a bit as I ask Levi for thier requests so that my behind sticks out nicely for them "A tin of thier usual cigars and some beer, make it a big pitcher since I bet they'll drink lots" I say to him and he nods, knowing what they like already When he gets it all, I put some full mugs and the pitcher and tin of smokes on a tray and work the crowd, taking it over and setting it down all nicely. I take the mugs off one by one and make sure when I hand them over to the men on the far side of the table that I lean over to give them a look down my chest. Makes me feel dirty but it works, I see thier eyes flicker and small grins hit thier mouths. The ones closer to me are leaning back to watch my behind. I look and go to the one who ordered the cigars and take one from the tin and sit on his lap "need a light?" I say close to him and he looks at my chest, thinking that is where I keep my lighter "a little lower honey" I say and pat my back pants pocket. He takes the hint and sticks his hand automatically and quickly down the pocket to feel my behind and grab the lighter that he hands to me and I light his cigar for him. He takes my lighter before I can put it back and slips it in my pocket for me, not before I noticed him slip a bill in there too. I 'thank' him by intentionally rubbing against him and his hardening pants as I get up and walk away, not even needing to look to know he watched for a bit before going back to his game. I glance around and see Levi watching, with almost a look of anger before he catches himself and shakes it off. |
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| Syniah | Nov 9 2011, 08:17 PM Post #42 |
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Levi I look away from what they do to Erika. Touching her, those disgusting smoking, drinking brutes! But I shake my head and know that I will be the first to get her before the rest of them. "You like her," Miracle says as she approaches. "You're crazy," i say, looking away and I know my cheek burn. "You wouldnt look mad if you didnt. Just tell her," Miracle says. "It's not that simple. You dont go to a girl like that and say, 'hey! I think I'm falling in love with you!' You just can't," I say, shaking my head. |
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| LadyG | Nov 9 2011, 08:25 PM Post #43 |
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ERIKA I glance around and seeing that each of us girls basically worked a table so now I just sit at the bar and relax a moment. Miracle was already there and talking to Levi but they both got quiet when I sat down. "Levi, I need a bottle of Whiskey, that one there will do" Kiyah comes up and gets Levi to grab one that she points at and she goes back out to a man I notice is oriental. I bit odd in these parts but I've seen them around before, some like it here, some are just here for business. I realize as I sit there no one actually showed me the room I was supposed to use. No matter, I don't plan ON using it anyways and I go back to the poker players "you men doing alright?" I ask and a few of them nod, not really answering since they are so into thier game and thier cards that for now I am not needed. I stop and groan when the one known as Lucifer makes his grand entrance for the morning and the whole place seems to stop one moment before going back to their games and business. |
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| Syniah | Nov 9 2011, 08:34 PM Post #44 |
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Levi I see Lucifer go over to Erika and smirk and slap at her ass. I growl a bit and Miracle smirks. "Dont give me that look!" "What look? The look of knowing that you like her?" she asks before grabbing a bottle of Brandy and taking it over to that photographer that she goes to sometimes. Lucifer comes over to the bar and surprisingly Belial isnt with him. "Whiskey, on the rocks. And make sure the glass is DIRTY," Lucifer says, smirking. "Your glass isnt going to be dirty, Lucifer," I say, giving him a mug with ice and pour brandy into it. Lucifer rolls his eyes and drinks the mug. "I see that new girl is working here. Want some of THAT ass." Lucifer licks his lips and continues to smirk "She's not sleeping with anyone today. Just harmless teasing," I say, shaking her head. |
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| LadyG | Nov 9 2011, 08:43 PM Post #45 |
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ERIKA I sigh since I look around and really have no where to go and no other girls went to Lucifer so I just decide to do it myself and walk up to him "Hello there Lucifer, hope you aren't insulting Levi TOO much today" I say to him. I remember that I had wanted to talk to him and make plans and I decide it was good afterall that I got to him first today and then touch his arm lightly with my hand "say, perhaps you and me can sit in private and I can get to know you a little bit better" I say then whisper into his ear while I move a strand of his hair back from it "or you can get to know ME better" I say and give him a smirk I was almost surprised when I heard a piano start playing. I forgot there was one in the corner but I had never seen it used the time I've been here. The young man on it is handsome and a bit rugged. He almost looks Mexican maybe? I cannot tell, maybe he's just in need of a bath. Amy goes over to him and smiles, leaning on the piano a bit and looking like she is enjoying the music. |
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