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The Cheatin' Heart 2: Revenge.; An ErikaxLevi (and others!) Western.
Topic Started: Nov 7 2011, 08:29 PM (569 Views)
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I nod and say, "Sorry I wasnt the best date. I should get some food for Dani." I go and ask for the food I asked for and they brought it out in a metal container and I pay them the money and both Erika and I head back to the Saloon in which I hear loud arguing. I listen more closely and it's the shouting of a woman just going hysterical so I run ahead of Erika and see a woman corner Willow and just screaming and going hysterical. A lot of the men, drunk or not try and hold her back.
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ERIKA

I was going to go upstairs and change to go to the graveyard but I hear all the ruckus and want to see what is going on. I recognize Willow in a corner with another lady screaming at her and a whole bunch of men holding her back.

"Did....she piss someone off?" I wonder to Levi and see Dani running to us

"It's River, Sets wife. I recognize her face. Remember Set? he has a twin Thane who comes in for Willow but shes done Set too and he's married and now the wife has found out" Dani says out of breath and looking a bit more then worried.

Two men also come running into the saloon. I recognize one as Willows 'regular', Thane. The other there is no question must be his cheating twin. Both go running over to the girls, Thane infront of Willow and Set trying to grab at River.

"STAY AWAY FROM MY MAN YOU DIRTY LITTLE TWO BIT WHORE" I hear the one called River screaming out at Willow

When Kiyah comes down waving a gun at all of them and screaming at them all to calm down the place gets a bit silent like they were contemplating just how far Kiyah would go with swinging that gun around.
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I'm so angry and so upset. I hide behind Thane, pressing my face into his back but River keeps screaming and yelling until I explode and shout, "IF YOU KNEW HOW TO PLEASE YOUR MAN, HE WOULDNT HAVE TO COME TO ME EVERY OTHER NIGHT!"

"Oh shit..." I hear Set say. Tears fall down my face and I try and hold back from crying but it doesnt work. Set keeps sweet talking to his wife. I dont know what he's saying because it sounds so surreal what happened. I was minding my own business until she comes in and just attacks me and hits me, screaming and yelling

I see Levi through my watery vision and I'm happy he's back.

"Kiyah, give me the gun, right now. Epue's going to have my ass if he sees this shit and you waving around a gun," he demands to Kiyah, holding his hand out for the gun. I hope Kiyah does.
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RIVER

I am so upset right now. I had my suspicions about my husband, but to really confirm it. It was Thane who came to me one night, tired of Set sleeping with his woman. Then again that made me wonder since I suspected a wench and I know wenches don't belong to anyone. Thane told me he wanted this one. For himself, however once in awhile she would talk about Set and his kindness and 'horrible' wife.

I was never horrible. I'd swear I wasn't. I got educated, I worked hard for my mama and papa and they had been longtime friends of Set and Thanes parents. They even arranged mine and Sets marriage. We were in love, happy, he is a kind and wonderful man. I know we don't always get along and sometimes I wish he'd work harder around the house, but when you suspect your man is cheating it's hard to be a great wife. I kept asking and trying to get the info and fights would start. Lots of them. He'd always deny what he did, even now as he's sweet talking me it seems like he never cheated, but the evidence and truth was already spoken by that whore called Willow.

Anger took me over and I came here to confront the home-wrecker. Everything is a jumble to me right now. Willows face is covered in tears and so is mine. My husband was cheating, betraying me. With that beautiful wench infront of me. I'm being held back, talked to by Set, another man who I guess runs this bar? he's holding his hand out to the other wench who came in swinging a gun. I don't know what took over me but I just made myself look tired and slumped my body a bit so the drunks would let go and Set took a breath of relief. Then I jumped for the gun and surprised the wench who didn't have time to respond. I remember grabbing the gun and seeing Thane make an attempt to stop me, quickest in responding but it was too late. I aimed at Willow and pulled the trigger. I couldn't see what happened cause next thing I know Thane is grabbing the gun and aiming it at my head. He's stalled, deciding whether to do it or not. To do what I think I just did.

ERIKA

I watch in shock. Levi was very quick at getting to Kiyah and trying to react but everything blew up beyond all control. When the gun started shooting most of the drunks started backing off and some even just ran like cowards to the streets or home. I watch. Willow is slumped to the ground and from the looks of her chest and the blood, I doubt she is alive. In fact it was probably so fast she never felt a thing. Levi is frozen in horror for a second, as is the one called Set before he responds to what his brother is about it do.

This just re-affirms all I believe. Ephraim and this place are damned curse to everyone, causing nothing but heartache and death. He'll pay. For all of this.
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I see the light leave Willow's eyes and I'm frozen as my mouth cant make a sound. Set goes over to Thane and tries to grab the gun but as soon as he goes near him, the gun is aimed and is shot right between his forehead. Set's look is of surprise as his eyes rolled behind his head.

"GET THEM THE FUCK OUT!" I shout to two police men who come running in, hearing the shots. One grabs River and the other grabs Thane. I go to Thane before the officer takes him away and I say, "We'll give her a funeral. A nice one and I'll arrange so you can see it."

What a mess...One of the mayor's sons is dead and one of the girls is dead. I get a few of the sheets and cover Set after I close his eyes and do the same with Willow and close her eyes. I sigh. This makes four deaths, nineteen years apart.
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I have to admit, I don't think that Thane meant it. After the trigger pulled and his eyes cleared to seeing his brother there he seemed to blank out again almost, lost of all thoughts. I don't think he meant to shoot anyone really but it happened. River screamed when Set was shot, upset and hysterical but the police pulled her out so quickly I don't know what will happen to her. Or Thane. I think if River can get her hands on Thane his life won't last long either. Maybe both of them are doomed too now. I don't know how the law around here will handle it.

I hear others talking and murmering in the crowd that did remain. I heard something about the mayor and his sons. So Thane and Set are the mayors sons. I guess maybe that will be Thanes freedom. The mayor no doubt will pull some strings. It happens in all towns that I have seen.

I look at Levi covering the bodies and almost just on cue to action happening Lucifer walks in and I'd swear he almost has a smirk on his face at all the destruction, then his eyes rest on the covered bodies and I can see him wondering in his head who was killed. He see's Levi standing there so he knows his brother is safe. I found it interesting how almost immediately his eyes DID shift to find Levi in the crowd and assess that he was unharmed. As much as he acts like a dick to Levi, he just showed he cared too.

I decide to move a bit and go over to Levi "are you okay?" I ask him and before he said anything he pulled me into his arms and close to his chest, I hear his heart beating much faster then it should. Scared from the action maybe? or adreneline pumping. Either or.
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I bring Erika close since I need someone to help me stand. And then i think about how it easily could have been her that could have gotten mixed up in this. I back away and go behind the bar and sit on a stool, trying to keep myself calm under the circumstances.

Lucifer comes to the bar and says, "You alright? What happened?" He normally acts like he doesnt care but he's a good older brother. I tell him the story and he nods.

"Thought something like that was going to happen," he says, "As long as you're okay."

"Yeah...Here Dani, your dinner. Sorry I didnt give it to your before the ruckus," i say to Dani. Her meal is intact so she wont have anything to worry about for now as I put my face in my hands and just sit there thinking for a while. I already know I will have my shit cut out for me when Epue returns and he finds two dead bodies in the Saloon.
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ERIKA

I watch and sigh. Seeing Levi like that suddenly made me sad and I took a step to go to him, then stopped. I look around, seeing all that happened, the blood, peoples reactions. Everyone in the saloon is so sad. Some of the girls came down and started crying. Miracle seemed the hardest hit for some reason. Dianna and Amy are holding eachother. Kiyah is just sitting there, probably upset her gun caused the most damage, if it was hers. I want to feel bad and realize the revenge I want on Ephraim will cause the same pain and destruction but I don't feel bad. I know my dad never got THIS reaction. He would of been alone again, no one caring, they all only cared about the girl instead. It all still fuels my anger and need.

I step out. Leaving to catch some fresh air. I look at a few stores until I see one that sells some flowers and I buy a few then head towards the graveyard. It's not even that far from the saloon truly, how ironic. I look around all the markers til in a distance I find the two I am looking for. Derek Dark and Kaellan Suzume. I look over the couple roses I bought and placed 2 at each grave. Kaellans I can tell has had flowers in the past. Not my fathers.

"Would you ever of loved me if you knew me?" I ask at Dereks "I hope you watch on and know I exist, at what I am going to do to make your death right, give you what you deserve....and I'll probably meet you sooner then later" I say

I hear the wheels of a carriage coming back in town and I try and duck down a bit. That might be Ephraims and Liandas.

LIANDA

We get back into town and things seem so quiet and tense on the streets. Folk are almost jittery about something. That only happens when bad went down somewhere. Guess the day we leave is the day we always miss the fun stuff.

I look out the carriage and I would of swore I saw that new Erika girl at the graveyard. At THIER graves but my attention got distracted so quickly I forgot to double check and we see the mayor looking in a fume and going into the saloon with Lucifer also leaving at the same time. THAT got both mine and Epues attention and we get thier faster and hop out of the carriage and into the saloon, only to see the wreckage that must of happened in our absence.
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I'm shocked and go over to the covered bodies and see it's Set, the mayor's son and I go to the second and see it's Willow. I sigh and shake my head.

"We're closing early. NOW," I say, knowing it's possibly only seven or eight considering we close at around ten or eleven but seeing how everyone's spooked, we have to close now. Me and Levi shoo away most of everyone as the police come and question everyone.

"Me and my wife were away. I left Levi and my daughter in charge in my absence but I never expected this to happen," I say to the police. "We just came back."

The police write down what i say and go to Levi. He went out to dinner and left Dani in charge while he got dinner for himself and Erika. He says he got dinner for Dani and heard screaming and yelling and that's when the events happened.

I go to Kiyah and shake my head. I'm not upset at her but I am disappointed in her judgement to have the gun in the first place. The only people that should have a gun would be me, Levi and Dani and the one for Dani is always behind the Bar in case someone jumps behind there and tries to attack her. But nothing can be done now.
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"Are you going to fire me now?" I ask Epue, pretty sure my time here is done and over with. They'll see it as my fault since I brought the gun down. I only meant to spook River out and get things calm again. Not for all this to happen. I wipe a few tears and stay sitting on the stairs to the upstairs. Normally I keep a happy face, or a hard one, but I never cry. Today I can't help it. Willow was a nice girl and now that we've probably pissed off the Mayor I can't imagine my time here will last.

LIANDA

I watch as the local law enforcement question Dani for a good long time since she was around to witness it all. She puts on a brave face, no crying so far. I bet she will in her room tonight, she's probably still in full shock right now. The enforcement get content they heard all they need and after awhile they leave and I sigh at thier presence finally being gone and out of this place.

I see Erika coming in and no one questions her since they figured she wasn't here and I watch her. Where was she? was that her I saw at the graves? I don't like this feeling coming over me. She arrives and more bad just happened. She walks over to Levi and he perks up a bit at her presence being around. I hope HE won't get hurt from her.

ERIKA

I made a decision at the graveyard. I've been so serious and hellbent on my objectives all my life that I never stopped to really live. I don't expect TO live after what I'll do, maybe that is why. I figure my whole revenge will also end in my death, I always figured that. So I never bonded to people, why hurt someone when you plan to do evil and die. But for now, I don't want to go without SOME experiences and I bet Levi will show me some things I've never experienced or had in my life yet. I walk up to him and give him a hug, which I can tell surprised him

"you feeling okay?" I ask him "do you have a room here to rest in? you can use mine for the night" I say to him and nod my head in the upstairs direction to try and get him up there with me.

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I follow Kiyah and say, "I'm not gonna fire you. you're one of my best girls. However, i AM disappointed in your decision. You know if something like that i gonna happen, get either me or Levi. Look, I know your intentions are good. Levi was out to dinner so you thought you could handle it. Even though I'm disappoint, doesnt mean I hate you or that your time here is over. Come here and give me a hug. I dont like seeing any of my girls cry or upset."

Out of all my younger girls, they know I'm willing to give them hugs wwithout expecting anything else out of them. It's a bit hard to hug Kiyah sometimes becaus eof her breasts but as long as she's okay, then I dont care.

Levi

I go with her and take her to Kaellan's room which i'm assuming that's why she's taking me upstairs for, just to find the room she'll be sleeping in. Or did she already find it, i dont know...
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I watch as Epue consoles Miss Kiyah a bit and don't mind. I just head to the bar, going behind it and getting a glass of whiskey for myself. I even see a destroyed table in another corner "how much destruction today? wow" I say shaking my head

"that was an earlier fight, sorry, rowdy drunks" Dani says to me and throws her dinner tray out when it's empty. I was surprised she ate it all actually, with all she saw tonight.

The local mortician is in already and getting the two bodies bundled up to take to the other side of town where I guess someone will pick out the caskets and such for them.

ERIKA

When I take Levi upstairs I have to admit he looks a little distraught. He was leading me like he was showing me my room, guess he forgot I saw it already from him with all that happened. I go in and close the door then wonder if I am doing the complete wrong thing. I'm probably playing with emotions when he already feels like shit but I can't help it, and he can say no if he wants.

I look at him "you alright?" I ask and he nods being quiet. I walk up to him and place my hands on his chest and look up at him "lets...both feel better" I say to him "I know you've been wanting me"
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That rattles my thoughts as I sit on the bed with Erika on my lap. I want to hold back but I decide to let instincts take over and I kiss at her neck, keeping her close to me as I start undressing her and get her completely naked. I pinched at her nipples and suck on them to turn her on more.

I lay her down on the bed and hover over her before stripping down her pants and lick over her. I wonder if she's ever had sex before. Nah, she came from the East, she's wild, she's had sex before.
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I'm a bit scared myself. I don't even know if I love this guy yet I'm letting him have me. Then again I decided long ago I'd never love and this is just for life experiences, isn't it?

I don't show fear when he strips me, feeling awkward being naked infront of someone for the first time. Being in this saloon and all others I've noticed men like a large chest and I hardly have that at all. I know my legs are long and my body is fit without being overly muscled or skinny. I watch him as he changes personality a bit before me again. Out of the saloon he can be clumsy and awkward sometimes. In the saloon working he is a smooth talker and quick on his feet for orders and flirting. Up here with me, he seems confident and in control. Or it sure seems that way. He has no troubles getting my clothes off or knowing just how to turn me on.

I've never experienced some of these sensations before and his touching me, licking at my chest, it all starts to make me feel hot inside, pleased. When he licks at me I instinctively let out a moan, his tongue and breath are so warm against me.

The only sign I accidentally give off that I haven't had this before is a strong tremble my body gave off. I don't even know myself if it's from excitement or a sort of fear but I still want Levi to continue.

LIANDA

Epue and I decide to let the girls change into thier everyday clothing and I sit with them in the empty saloon table area now that guests are kicked out and Epue went to go order dinner for them all to bring back. Least we can do is give a nice hot meal to soothe them a bit tonight. Dani went to, to make sure it all can get carried back.

"you girls okay?" I ask. Amy and Dianna nod. Kiyah is trying to put on her brave face again and nods. Miracle seems the most shaken. To me that isn't a surprise since she really doesn't belong here, I still think she is only doing this to rebel and maybe this will hit her back to reality and she'll decide to use her eduaction I know she has for good instead of being here.

"do you think the mayor will come after us?" Amy asks me and I can't really answer that

"I'm not sure honestly" I say and mean it. I hope the mayor will keep it quiet. We can't fully be blamed for Set cheating....or can we? I wonder with all the deaths if it IS time to close this place or such, then shake my head, trying to clear the thoughts.
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"I will talk to the Mayor about this. While it's obvious that his son's wife killed Willow and his twin shot him, there's no guarantee that we influenced Set nor his wife to come into the Saloon and cause what he did.

Levi

When she trembles a bit strong I say, "You've never had sex before...Did you?" I chuckle and kiss her. "Dont worry, you're safe with me." I go down on her again and start licking at her and even poking my tongue into her a bit to turn her on even more.
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