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| The Cheatin' Heart 2: Revenge.; An ErikaxLevi (and others!) Western. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 7 2011, 08:29 PM (568 Views) | |
| LadyG | Nov 14 2011, 07:10 PM Post #91 |
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LIANDA "OH, you're back" I say when he comes in talking, overhearing us talk "but we did provide the gun since Kiyah brought it down, but still, hopefully nothing happens" I say "no matter what you girls won't be in trouble with US, we know you have to defend yourselves and do what you need sometimes" I say to calm them "where did Levi and Erika go?" Amy asks looking around "I saw them going upstairs" I admit. Whether to rest or go to seperate rooms or be together I am not sure. I find myself hoping he's not WITH her since I have this bad feeling, but I just hold in my thoughts. "Set was really nice to us" Dianna said randomly "Willow too..she was so pretty...and young" "you ALL are young" I remind them "we'll give her proper burial and you all can be there, give your respects. You won't be asked to work or nothing that day, trust me" I say to them and they nod ERIKA I don't really answer his question since apparently words aren't needed and I don't want to ruin the mood...or does he enjoy having a virgin? I'm not sure. When he sticks his tongue in I moan a bit more and my back arches up a bit, enjoying the feeling. I watch at him and I know my cheeks are burning a bit but I don't mind, I want to keep going. I move a bit and pull him up to kiss me. I know there is a saloon rule of no kissing but this is different, I'm not asking payment for this and I want to have it all |
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| Syniah | Nov 14 2011, 08:05 PM Post #92 |
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Levi I kiss her back and kept her close and strip myself of clothing and position myself. "I'll be gentle, promise you," I say to her as I start sliding into her slowly so she could get use to my invasion. I've had sex enough to know when a girl is a virgin or not and from ow her muscles are squeezing around me and I moan out, she's a virgin Epue I nod and I know the girls wont be able to work that day since one of them is now dead. Poor Willow. Poor girls... |
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| LadyG | Nov 14 2011, 08:15 PM Post #93 |
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ERIKA I heard Levi moan when he slid into me and I wonder if something is wrong, then decide he'd stop if there was. I feel a slight stinging pain and I bite my lip lightly but he's being gentle to me and that helps. I kiss him again and move my hips very slightly to him, trying to get used to it. The one thing I noticed was he is very large..or so I am pretty sure from things I've heard around. He might not look the most built, but I saw under his shirt before when he had it open and he has a strong chest, but in his pants...I never expected so much. He starts moving in me a bit and stops kissing me to watch my reactions, I smile at him to let him know it's okay, it's not so bad really. I still moan out a bit when he starts moving more in me KIYAH I went upstairs ahead of all the others. I heard a very slight moan from up the hall and I stop and listen a moment, then smirk. So Levi got the girl afterall...or else they are working off the stress, either way. I decide to not snoop too much and go into my room. Seeing the light go out of Willows eyes right before me, and knowing it was my gun. I'm probably the most upset of them all. I remeber one time a customer got rough with me, left me bruised for a few days. Epue took care of him very roughly and made sure I was alright, but it didn't stop the fear I feel sometimes. I bought that gun and hid it under my bed for quite some time now. I lay there upset and start to think of Caleb, I never thought I'd leave this place...but now things are different. |
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| Syniah | Nov 14 2011, 09:06 PM Post #94 |
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Levi I keep moving in her and moan a bit more as I go a bit faster in her. I pinch her nipple and suck at her, wanting to hear her moan out before I go rough on her anymore than I should. I kiss her lips and bring her legs a bit higher up so that i'm atleast going in a big deeper to please her. |
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| LadyG | Nov 14 2011, 09:25 PM Post #95 |
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ERIKA I wanted an experience and I swear Levi is determined to give it. He keeps showing more and more control with me, so different then the man downstairs. Even his eyes seem more intense. I think people including Lucifer underestimate him. I don't know if I yelped or moaned more when he lifted my legs and went deeper, but I'm pretty sure anyone else upstairs might know what is going on. When he starts sucking on my breasts too I know I moaned loudly and gripped hard at his back, probably digging my nails in but he doesn't seem affected by it. At my moan of pleasure and grip he goes a bit faster in me still and I moan out more, moving my own hips to him and doing the best I can. When he keeps going I feel myself getting tighter around him, I know this is good, and it makes him moan out more too, feeling me reacting to him. I keep moaning and moving to him until I shattered. My body tensed up and I know he felt it, he went harder when he felt me going over the edge and when I did shatter my whole body loosened up again and trembled a bit even. My breath got more ragged after I let out a moan that I'm sure was way too loud and I realized he stopped and was watching me with a bit of amusement, but he seems happy and he continues to move again on me, I know he needs to have his release still too. LIANDA The place was so dead quiet with all the mourning and sad thoughts that Erika's scream broke the silence and I looked a bit surpised anyone would be having sex right now. Guess Levi did go up with her for a reason. Amy was the first to chuckle and a few others did too, I realize this might be the sudden break in bad thoughts they'd need. Though I'm not sure what Epue will think of someone having sex now in Kaellans bed, but it was bound to happen. |
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| Syniah | Nov 14 2011, 10:27 PM Post #96 |
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Epue I chuckle. It does break my heart because their moaning makes me think of when Kaellan and I did that but I try and just let go. I have to. Levi I keep moving in her until my limit is reached and I push into her as deep as I could, not able to control myself and I pant a bit and kiss her cheek. "Do you feel anything? I feel alot for you," I say to her, touching her cheek. "We can go. Leave here and be together." Maybe it's my emotions? I dont know but I hope she feels something a little something for me. |
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| LadyG | Nov 14 2011, 10:34 PM Post #97 |
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ERIKA In that moment I close my eyes and sigh a bit. I have to tell him. I need to. I know I told Lucifer to meet me but I need to tell things to Levi...or can I? will he turn on me? make sure I can't get what I want? I'm confused and unsure. But doesn't he need to know I'll probably never last in his life? "planning a future with me is a bad idea" I say simply to him, unsure what else to say. My emotions and head are all scrambled and I'm not sure what to do anymore. LIANDA I was relieved when I heard him chuckle next to me and I lean into his arms and kiss under his chin "can I go home mom?" Dani asks and I nod "we'll be leaving soon too I think, we'll go together" I say to her. Judging by the looks of the girls they'll probably all go to bed early. "Girls, if any local people come by trying to get info, don't unlock the doors, say NOTHING okay, just stay up in your rooms for the night, be safe" I tell them, knowing no doubt some locals will try to twist the story or make us look bad. |
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| Syniah | Nov 15 2011, 11:38 AM Post #98 |
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Levi I back away from her and say nothing. What can I say? She doesnt want to be with me? I start dressing and said, 'Sorry..." I then head out her room and go into the room Epue let me have, right next to Erika's. Whenever I dont leave around the time Epue does, I just stay in his old master room. The next morning, I get up very early so I can head home and get my work clothes since we had the ruckus go on. I unlock the door and lock it back with the extra key Epue gave me and head home. My brothers are up early and are surprisingly silent. |
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| LadyG | Nov 15 2011, 11:56 AM Post #99 |
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BELIAL "That saloon opening today?" I ask Levi and he nods, saying it is, they got it cleaned up the night before and will clean a bit today too before it opens for business again. Lucifer told me he has business with that new Erika girl in town, she requested a chat with him. Hope she knows what she is getting herself into. For the hell of it I said I'd go along too with Lucifer. Hell, I'd take that girl to bed if we can make it part of the deal, we'll see what she wants, how big of a deal it will cost her and just what me and Lucifer can get out of it. After Levi gets his clothes and leaves for the morning I smirk at Lucifer "lets go over, opens soon and we'll see what the girl wants" I smirk ERIKA When I get out of bed the next morning I put back on my pants and a black top and go downstairs. The girls are down there eating and looking a bit glum but still putting on the best happy faces they could and know it's 'back to work' as usual later. I sit with them, avoiding Levi since he seemed so upset with me and start filling up a plate for myself and eat. All the girls stop when Lucifer, with Belial, knock on the doors early. Surely they know we are still closed...but Lucifer is watching me with a slight smirk and I know I have no choice now but to talk to him and figure out the payments. |
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| Syniah | Nov 16 2011, 08:55 AM Post #100 |
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Lucifer When Levi opens the door and welcomes us in --reluctantly, apparently--, i go over to Erika and wrap my arm around her. "Now, you and I as well as my brother has some business to take care of," I say, taking her away from everyone else after she's done with her breakfast and take her to a very far corner of the Saloon. "Now, you want me to ruin Epue, which wont be too hard to do since the shootings but what else and there is the discussion of payment, my dear," I say to her, smirking. |
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| LadyG | Nov 16 2011, 03:38 PM Post #101 |
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ERIKA "I'm not actually sure I need your help anymore Lucifer. I've been thinking and trying to figure it out and bringing in more people might just complicate it up for me and them" I tell him and look in Levi's direction and sigh "Ah, young brother has it hard for you girl?" Belial says to me, might be the first time I actually have heard him talk and he's watching me so closely I could swear he was reading my mind "I might have it for him too......but I'm not good for him" I say and look at them "I NEVER came to this town to fall for anyone, and yet I think I did. If I kill Ephraim, and that IS my plan...he'll hate me won't he? Levi? Ephraim killed my father many years ago, a father I NEVER got to know. I have a feeling though if I get the revenge I've sought all my life that I'll hurt Levi, but then again I always knew murdering HIM would end up with me finished off too, but at least I'll of had my revenge" "Why so intent on revenge if it will kill you or destroy you?" Belial wonderes, watching me. His eyes shift to Levi and I look too, seeing Levi watching us with a deep annoyance in his eyes. I wonder if Belial wants me and Levi together? "All, I've wanted all my life. My mother died heartbroken when my dad never returned...COULDN'T ever return...and that left me parentless and alone, taking care of myself with my Uncle til I could get the info I needed on his murderer. All for what?? he fell for another girl, he got two children and my dad couldn't have a love OR a life" I tell them "so now what is the problem? I drop my revenge and go with Levi? I kill Ephraim and face the fate I always expected to have? but no matter what I want this saloon ENDED! Girls do not deserve this" I say "Perhaps WE might have an issue with the saloon ended" Belial tells me and I notice Lucifer for the time being has just been absorbed in listening and thinking. |
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| Syniah | Nov 16 2011, 04:29 PM Post #102 |
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Lucifer "Hmm...How about this, I tell you a bit more about the situation of Ephraim and his Saloon in exchange so some action?" I say, closing near her. "That way, you know more of the weak point and i handle everything while you can skip merrily with Levi down the aisle. Everything comes with a price dear out here in this town." I lick her ear and keep her close to me and smirk |
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| LadyG | Nov 16 2011, 04:36 PM Post #103 |
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ERIKA I back away and watch him "part of this is Lucifer, the revenge is ALL mine, I won't let anyone else make the point to Ephraim BUT me. So no matter what, I doubt that 'skipping down the aisle' comment will actually happen" I tell them "Interesting, the girl likes her own dirty work" Belial said "Listen to Lucifer and decide from there, but you'll still owe for the talk and no matter what is decided, I still plan on a ride girl" he smirks at me I look at them both, what Belial just said and the look in Lucifers eyes I know where my afternoon is going to end up.....and it's going to hurt Levi even more. Maybe for the better. "fine, give me more info to fuel my fire and ideas and I'll work from there, even if I don't use you guys to destroy anything I'll consider the information, but it better be NEW information then what I have already" I tell them. I doubt much will come from thier information, but I might as well go along with it and just amuse them and myself. |
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| Syniah | Nov 16 2011, 05:36 PM Post #104 |
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Lucifer "Of course, Epue inherited this Saloon from his granddaddy but the Saloon is still in debt to owe. WHy he was forced to have 'entertainment'. The Saloon girls decided they wanted to prostitute themselves to help pay for any renovations and such that happened to the Saloon, which still happens. All the girls were jealous of the top: Kaellan. Raven black hair and beautiful face you'd ever seen. Didnt have a chest but she did things you wouldnt believe. Anyway, she was also Epue's girl. He didnt want her in that life but she did anyway to repay him. That's when Derek walked into town. Smooth talked and wanted her. Not only to have her travel with him but to make Epue miserable since that was all he had. Why they had a showdown and to really piss of Epue, he fucked his girl with the door wide open. When the climax of the showdown came, Kaellan ran in the way. Got shot by Derek's bullet while he took the shot from Epue. To REALLY ruin him, put him in the same situation as Kaellan. Even if he's married with two Daughters, Kaellan's name, her room, her belongings ALL pull at his heart strings. Pull his heart strings, you'll be playing him like a violin." I say since I did happen to be there a while ago. Was a younger man. About to enter my twenties then. The time does fly by. |
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| LadyG | Nov 16 2011, 06:12 PM Post #105 |
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ERIKA I listen to Lucifer and the story. I knew some of it, how Ephraim loved Kaellan and she was his and she was put between my father and Ephraim. I rather wonder how Lucifer knows they had sex with the door open, I rather not ask about THAT. Pull at Ephraims heartstrings? should I destroy that room of hers? can I find her belongings and destroy them? But what will that REALLY do, he'll still have memories of her, his family, his daughters, this place....it won't FULLY destroy him. "Payment Erika" Belial urges at me. I look from where we sit to the bar and that photo of Kaellan and Ephraim. She is beautiful in her own way. I remember a part of Lucifers story. She took Dereks bullet. Not Ephraims. She was protecting Ephraim then. She took my dads bullet to save Ephraim so she could be with HIM I bet. They may of died together, but my father wasn't her choice like they all claim...and the bitch is buried next to my dad like she deserves it. She didn't deserve it. Maybe she did get what she deserved. Death. She wouldnt of chose father and Ephraim lost her too, she got what she deserved as far as I am concerned. I wanted to like her for loving my dad, but that is changed now. She just doesn't deserve to rest eternally at his side when she never chose him. "Alright, I got what I need" I say, I know the look on my face changed, I know my eyes got more determined and Belial and Lucifer both smirked seeing it "my room is upstairs" I tell them. Ephraim will pay but first I have a debt to pay now. LIANDA I was helping Dani behind the bar when we all saw what happened. Erika got up and went up the stairs with Lucifer and Belial. I'm shocked and stop, just watching in disbelief. I thought she LIKED Levi. They were just having thier own fun earlier and now she's doing his brothers? something just doesn't seem right about this, especially with how they were huddled in that corner. Did she do the unthinkable and make a deal with Lucifer? There is a reason he got his nickname and making a deal with him IS making a deal with the devil. I need to know more. This isn't right. "Dani, watch the bar a bit" I say and go to Levi "you okay?" I ask since he looks very upset at what he just saw and what he knows is going to happen. |
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