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| The Cheatin' Heart 2: Revenge.; An ErikaxLevi (and others!) Western. | |
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| LadyG | Nov 17 2011, 08:28 PM Post #121 |
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ERIKA Belial takes me to the bed and pushes me down so that I can have some support and he still does my ass for a bit, I'm not really turned on by this or even really enjoying it but I moan out and after a bit Belial pulls out and lets off a moan and sprays on me too before he gets clothed again and goes to the door "I'm not as cruel as Lucifer, he would of done it to spite Levi, I say hold onto him" he says then leaves. I sit on the bed and use a sheet to wipe my face off, feeling dirty and horrible inside. I go to a bathing room and wash up very quickly and get my clothes back on and stare at the mirror a little bit. KIYAH "You know Levi, if you feel that bad you can always do one of us....revenge sex" I say and smirk and go to him sitting on his lap "you always flirt or keep our spirits high, our turn to switch your low spirits around" I say and rub his chest. |
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| Syniah | Nov 18 2011, 08:37 PM Post #122 |
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Levi I chuckle but I say, "no, it's okay. You have Mr. Caleb and he loved you. I couldnt hurt him, even if I've been hurt. I'm an honorable man, what can I say?" I see Caleb sit on the far end of the Saloon and point her to him. "Go. Maybe he'll get you out of here before anyone else gets hurt. I'll be fine." When she leaves and goes to Caleb, I sigh and hope the girls go or atleast stop prostituting now. After what happened to Willow, I dont think I can stand looking at them doing this the same anymore. |
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| LadyG | Nov 18 2011, 09:05 PM Post #123 |
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KIYAH I go to Caleb and whisper a few things in his ear then go back to the bar "Two Whiskeys Levi" I tell him "and Levi, I already told Caleb a bit, I'm a fast talker. IF you want to fake it and make her jealous we can do that too" I wink at him ERIKA I go downstairs after a bit and look around, I feel awful cause I see the look on Levi's face, especially when he first saw me come down the stairs. He was angry maybe but he hid it quick as he could. I go to the bar and ask for a whiskey...a LARGE one...and he gives it to me silently and I down it and look around. Lianda is there so I go to her "is it alright if I go to my motel quickly, I need to pick up some stuff?" I ask and she nods, watching me carefully and I sigh "I never meant to hurt him and it'll stop, I swear" I say, I know it's a lie. The hurt is still going to come. I get my permission to leave and I do. Going to my motel and sit on the bed. I look around and see my gun sitting there. Soon. Soon for Ephraim it will all end. LIANDA Epue walks in after Erika left from doing some shopping for the saloon, picking up a few small supplies. I watch him and I feel conflicted. I want to warn him but I don't, I know my plan. I know Erika won't keep playing around, I bet her move will be made tonight and so will mine. I'll be ready for her. |
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| Syniah | Nov 18 2011, 09:17 PM Post #124 |
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Epue I watch Erika leave and see how upset Levi seems. She must have slept with his brothers and hurt him. He really did like her. I go to Lia and kiss her cheek and say, "Wanna spend the night here? Be like old times. But wait, dont you sleep in my room Levi?" "It's okay. you have an extra room for any guests and whatnot so I'll use that. You can use your room." he says, smiling or forcing his smile atleast. |
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| LadyG | Nov 18 2011, 09:43 PM Post #125 |
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LIANDA I smile and pull Epue close, laughing as I pull him onto my lap "we see all the men do this to the girls, I can do it too" I laughed, just to have fun and hug him. He jumps off my lap again pulling me onto his as he slips into the next chair with me and I hug him and kiss him on the lips quickly. I hear Dianna chuckle from a table a couple over, seeing us and smiling at our acts of romance. I've seen her like that in the past. It's the part of me that can tell she really wants real love and not just this place. Kiyah is with her Caleb. Oddly enough Dimitri I believe just came in too and went over to the piano, I smile. He's such a good player that even I enjoy it and listen when he plays often too. I haven't seen Miracle today really. She must still be mourning or such over Willow and if she is we won't push her. ERIKA I walk back slowly to the saloon. I almost considered stopping by the graveyard but didn't and kept on my path. The last thing I need to do is scream at the dead. Kaellan took my dads bullet...Not Ephraims and saved HIS ass, not my fathers...I consider all the ways to hurt Ephraim or burn her stuff or destroy it or hit him where it hurts. I can't though. What is the point? I'm just going in and I plan to kill him. I will get what I came for. No distractions, no games. Just putting Ephraim in a grave. It's already taken me much too long. I watch from outside though, I see him playing with his wife and I wait, I need the proper moment. When they finally stop kissing and giggling at the table and Ephraim gets up to go behind the bar I take a deep breath. This is it. The revenge I wanted and probably the end of my life too. I feel excited. I walk in and look around, Dianna waves at me and I smile back. Levi is watching and my heart skips a beat but I know I can't let it affect me. I take a few steps and pull my gun out, cocking it and aiming it at Ephraims head behind the bar "This is my revenge Ephraim, for my father" I say and almost pull the trigger when I hear a click and feel cold metal at my head LIANDA The bitch did exactly what I knew she would. Though I expected her to do it with less people around. Guess she knew no point in hiding her actions. She wants her point made and wants people to know and see it, to see her cold blooded actions. When she pulled out her gun I was just as quick on my feet and pulled out my own and had it at her head, ready to pull the trigger "So now what bitch?" I growl "what is going on?" Dianna asks, having moved to a far corner of the saloon. I don't need to look at her to hear the fear in her voice. All the girls are still traumatized, much less see more guns aiming around. "what did you mean father Erika?" Amy asks, having heard her say it "Why don't you explain Ephraim" Erika growls at him "it was all right infront of you. My hair, my eyes, my face, I have my fathers features. Your gun scares me not Lianda. When I kill Ephraim my life is completed anyways, death is no problem anymore after that" I saw Erika about to pull the trigger, REALLY pull it, she wasn't afraid of death like she said and I misjudged that...but Levi stepped in the way and it was enough to stall her a moment. |
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| Syniah | Nov 18 2011, 10:05 PM Post #126 |
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Levi "Erika...Please..." I say, stepping in front of Epue. "Killing Mr. Dark ISNT going to bring back your father. His death wont mean anything. Even if you say it's revenge, it wont do any good. You saw what happened to Willow. Her funeral is tomorrow. Is it worth it? Erika, I love you, truly love you. Yeah, I hated that you slept with my brothers but I could see through your actions you didnt like it..." Epue Since the girls asked, I sigh and say, "Derek was a rogue who happen to come by town and came into our Saloon. Kaellan fell in love with him because he represented danger and excitement. I loved her too much...I couldnt. We started a fight and a girl suggested a showdown. Let's just say it didnt end very well. Lia, put down the gun. Please..." |
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| LadyG | Nov 18 2011, 10:33 PM Post #127 |
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ERIKA "NOT until she puts down hers" Lianda says to Ephraims request "It won't heal your soul Erika and it won't bring him back" she tries to say to me, but I really don't care to listen "Maybe not, but it will still feel good. Levi move" I say to him but he doesn't. I can't kill him. I can't. I don't truly care for many people in this saloon but Levi is different "I never liked being with your brother no, but he gave me the last bit of info I needed for this. THAT was business. I didn't like it, but I WILL enjoy this. My whole life was planned around revenge and getting it" "He's dead Erika, so is Kaellan, drop the gun, we can come to other arrangements" Lianda tells me and I growl and spin around aiming my gun at her so we are both pointing at eachothers heads "THAT bitch took my dads bullet. MY DADS BULLET" I scream out, finally losing my control "she never LOVED him, she never CARED for him, she was going to turn on him and choose your dear lover Ephraim. SHE was going to turn on him and he would of had nothing AGAIN. He died and you put her damned body next to him but she died trying to save dear Ephraim there, not him. WHO did he really have huh? NO ONE. DON'T tell me this won't mean anything or that it isn't justified" LIANDA I admit I feel scared now, she's a loose cannon and running on anger and the drive for revenge. Her gun is at my head and I feel nervous. I know my body even trembled slightly. I see out of the corner of my eye Eirika coming down from upstairs, wondering what all the screaming is "you decieved us all, YOU found your way into writing to Eirika didn't you? getting info, coming here for your revenge. Have you ever been honest in your life?" I ask her and she narrows her eyes ERIKA "I watched my mother die at the loneliness of my father leaving. She never got to even TELL him she was pregnant and she kept praying he would return, he never did...never COULD" I growl at them "She died of a broken heart and I was raised by her brother after that. I wanted to know who my father was, track him down, find out why he never stuck. Then I found out bits and pieces. Found out he was murdered. I was at least happy when I heard that Kaellan bitch died with him, loved him....then I found out she took his god damned bullet instead of protecting him, instead of being proper. I wanted to do so much to all of you, make you hurt and cry, feel the pain I felt all my life. I decided against the games casue the simple ending of his life will be enough for me, even if it ends mine, drop your gun bitch or I will shoot you" I tell her "I was SHOCKED when I realized I looked so much like him and it hurt even more, that I was that close to him but never got to know him. YOU all robbed me. He didn't have to DIE" I scream "but you all will say he was evil, a rogue, danger and excitement in bad ways instead of just being a man on his own or living his own life his way, you insult him, demean him" I finally had enough and before anyone could answer or say anything back to me I spun and pulled the trigger. I saw the shock in Levi's eyes, I saw the bullet hit Ephraim, but I missed. He dodged but just barely, it hit him a couple inches from his heart and into his arm instead. I curse and feel my own chest sting a moment and I look at Lianda, assuming it was her, but it wasn't. She was staring in shock at the stairs. Where Eirika had come down. Instantly Levi was at my side and holding me, he looked distraught and in shock and looked over me frantically. He moves my shirt a bit and I'm almost confused at the relief he let out. Why would he be relieved at my death? "call the town medic, get him here NOW" I hear Lianda scream, she goes to Eirika and shoves her upstairs, probably since she knows her husband is fine really. I don't know why but I felt the need to bury my face in Levi's chest and I do. "It missed her heart, she might live still" I hear Ephraim saying close to me obviously at Levi's side. I felt Levi lay me down and of all the damned people it was Ephraim pushing a cloth against my chest to stop the bleeding. |
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| Syniah | Nov 18 2011, 10:46 PM Post #128 |
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Epue "I cant say that your father was the best person nor can I say that he was a good man. But we dont need anyone else dying..." I say, pressing down on her. "You have Levi. It's not worth it. I have to admit that I miss Kaellan dearly and everyday but I dont think I want Levi to go through the same thing that I did." When the medics come, they do take her away and I say to Levi, "You truly do love her, dont you?" Eirika I cry. I cant help it, she deceived me. Used me just to kill my father. Because of why!? Her father who probably didnt give a fuck about her!? The smoking gun is still in my hands as my mom shoves me upstairs. I lean on a door and just cry. |
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| LadyG | Nov 18 2011, 10:56 PM Post #129 |
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LIANDA "Eirika why?" I ask, confused but I am pretty sure I know the reasons "We've had enough death, don't add to it, give me that gun" I say taking it and Dani came running over. Luckily she had been in her room and heard the shots and came out after, wanting to know what was going on. She probably assumed drunks were wrecking the place til she saw Eirika. "Dani, stay with her, please...just stay together you two" I tell her and Dani nods and goes into Eirika's room with her and I go downstairs "is she....?" I ask and Epue shakes his head at me telling me she's alive and with the town medics. I sit at a table and think to myself. Again for the second day the drunks cleared out. The town rogues and men left, knowing this place is a danger and people keep dying. We're done for and I know it. I see Kiyah in Calebs arms til she goes to Levi to talk. Amy is near Dimitri at the piano still, him holding her protectively. For the first time in a few days I see Dianna's regular in and she's instantly in his arms and clinging to him, she's the one I know will leave first, maybe even today and never come back. I think all of them will leave. The looks on thier faces and thier mens faces. Eirika was already ready I think, to leave with Jonah. Her fate might be up to Erika, she just commited attempted murder on her and if she lives....she might be able to take Eirika down, Eirika wasn't even in full danger to claim self defence, she was out of the way. Miracle is on the stairwell crying. Hopefully Tade will find her later. No doubt he'll have to come anyways, the photography shop will find this 'newsworthy' and will want coverage to sell the papers, even if he means good he might have to come to do some dirty work. I won't blame him. I look at Epue "we need to close this place" I say, knowing in my heart it's the right thing. The past came back to haunt us, and too many got hurt. KIYAH I go to Levi "Levi, go, be at her side. She'll need it to recover or change her thoughts or ways" I tell him. It seemed most right. Somehow I think he's the one who can stop all this. He's the key. |
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| Syniah | Nov 18 2011, 11:09 PM Post #130 |
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Levi I nod but not before saying to them, "No, you dont have to. I have an idea but I'll explain later." I run to where they have Erika and they have her bandage and she's fine. She awake and I go to her. "Erika...Why? Such a path of destruction..." I hold her hand and squeeze it. Epue Levi says he has an idea for the Saloon but I close it up when I'm pretty sure a bulk of people are gone. "Well, we'll hear what Levi has in mind for now. But I should have closed it down after Kaellan died...But maybe Levi CAN save this damned Saloon." I go to the back to clean and wrap my arm up since it was grazed. |
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| LadyG | Nov 18 2011, 11:15 PM Post #131 |
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LIANDA "Epue, that needs a medic" I tell him looking at his arm and the bullet in it. But I know he might be stubborn and want me to just try and remove it on my own "you know, if we get the medic to check this and bandage you up, you can talk to Erika too, or we both can" I say to him. I feel for her, I do. I want to be angry, I still am, but a part of me feels for her too. I hope Levi can save her. "Girls, go to your rooms, you can keep your men here, but be safe, take time to yourselves. No working, just...do what you please on your own, no money involved" I say and take Epue to see the medic too ERIKA My chest hurts. Badly. They used some equipment and pulled the bullet out, cleaning the area, stitching me up and giving me some painkillers. I know it'll be awhile before I can move proper. I feel groggy and tired but Levi showed up and him holding my hand at least made me feel warmer. But also empty. I know what I did and I don't know why he is still sitting there "you heard my reasons" I say, my throat is really dry though and it comes out as more of a croak then anything and he was super quick at giving me some water to help, holding it up to my mouth even. It made me cry and I couldn't respond for a bit. |
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| Syniah | Nov 18 2011, 11:25 PM Post #132 |
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Levi "Well, just know that I want you to be Mrs. Leviathan Livingston. Yeah, Livingston is our last name. Or atleast the last name we used from now on. The past is gone. Both of our pasts. Let's try and move toward a better future. Start over together. Just us," I say as I get up and kiss her. I stay for a few seconds before backing off and holding her hand. "Revenge is never the way. Willow died because of self revenge. Let's just see her buried and laid to rest tomorrow, hopefully." |
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| LadyG | Nov 18 2011, 11:48 PM Post #133 |
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LIANDA After Epue sees the medic and sterilizes the wound and wraps it up, closing the hole I bit I feel more at ease and hug him, holding him a moment, needing to feel him "I might of lost you today" I say quietly into his chest and feel him hold me back. After a bit I pull away "lets go check on the girl" I say, going with Epue and finding where they have Erika and Levi is at her side. She looks exhausted and pale. She probably lost a bit of blood. I'm actuall surprised she looks as well as she does. She sees us and looks away. I don't think it's anger anymore that made her do it, I think it was a mixture of emotions. ERIKA I'm being hit with so much at once and I'm not sure how to deal. I see Lianda and Ephraim come in. Watching between me and Levi. "you know, I think it's cause you look like HER that we never figured you for your father. You have the same raven black hair, beautiful eyes and face. Same figure too in a way" Lia tells me and I don't really say much. "I asked Epue to close the saloon. It seems right, it caused so much pain. For the girls who felt they had nothing better to do when they probably did. For Kaellan, for your father. For you and Willow and Set and everyone" Lianda says and I look at her now, but I still can't find the words in me to know how I feel. Lia smiles and sits on the other side of me then Levi. "Levi says he has an idea though, lets let him talk" she says and I nod. |
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| Syniah | Nov 19 2011, 12:04 AM Post #134 |
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Levi Why dont we turn the Saloon into a check point, a market of sorts. Like a motel and supply since the farthest motel is toward the outside of town. And instead of the Cheatin' Heart, why not rename it to something else?" I say to them and Epue thinks. He finally says, "THAT could work. Give it a new make over. I think that'll be better. We'll start on it the day after tomorrow. A new image and new look. No prostitues, not heavy drinking, nothing taboo..." I hope my idea is okay or will make the place flourish even if it's not a Saloon anymore. |
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| LadyG | Nov 19 2011, 08:41 AM Post #135 |
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LIANDA I can see Erika is still upset and I watch her and take her hand, which she tries to take back but she's not really strong enough right now so I keep hold "Erika, you know Epue wants to step down a bit, I bet if the men talk it over we can make Levi a part owner, good share in the place, more money, more say and you can have a role too" I offer, I hope Epue doesn't shut down my offer since it seems to be what is needed. Then I realize something. "WAIT, I know an idea too. I read in our paper a report of other not so far towns making places called 'Bed and Breakfasts' have you ever been to one Erika?" I ask her and she looks at me, sighs a bit and nods. ERIKA They are all so damned persistant. I sigh and nod to Liandas question "I've been to a couple yes. Nice places" I say, not wanting to admit I had liked the ones I had been too. I stop and let Lianda explain since she seems to know "They are more 'home-like'" she says "we can decorate the place to clean out the sleaze and make it more cozy, change the rooms upstairs to be more decorated, new beds, classier. We have a kitchen for cooking and making breakfasts, we have tables, a piano, we have what we need for a breakfast area we just need to clean up and make it nicer and more beautiful. Let the guests sleep in better then a motel, let them eat in there too. The girls can keep thier jobs. They can cook, or clean or housemaid for the rooms after guests leave, serve the guests thier food. NO sleaze. Hell we can even keep a table open for poker if we really wanted" she says and I see the ideas just flowing through Levi and Ephraims heads. I can see she is waiting for thier opinions. I watch Ephraim. I still feel anger, some hate. He also kept me alive too, for Levi. I look at Levi. I never planned on falling in love. Do I even love him? I watch him and decide that I do. Erika Livingston? it sounds kind of nice really. "You talk like I actually have a future to have a job.....my place will end up jail since I attempted murder" I tell them "attempted, but failed...and we aren't cold hearted that we want you to suffer when we can give you a clean future and let you find happiness for once instead" Lianda says to me |
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