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| Fire And Ice: Teaser, Should I Continue?; Jake's thoughts in the tent... | |
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| Topic Started: Apr 2 2008, 04:42 AM (1,262 Views) | |
| Dazzle-Me | Apr 2 2008, 04:42 AM Post #1 |
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*PLEASE give me your thoughts on what you about to read, SHOULD I continue or NOT? ))) Jacob- The storm continued to hammer on the tent, the raging winds still trying to take the little refuge tent down. But inside the tent, all was still I could hear the even breathing of the girl I loved most, she was so close. I had her in my arms trying to “warm her up” since she almost froze to death because of the bloodsucker’s efforts. How I longed to be with her forever. Steal her away from the monster she was mesmerized by, but alas, as much as I tried to convince her she hung on the idea of only love for him. She didn’t know the true nature of these monsters, I did, and it was in my blood. He was tricking her, he would kill her. And I couldn’t allow that to happen! I decided to focus on happier thoughts. What would happen when I finally did save her from her castle tower and the bloodsucker was slain. I would look at her, touch her, propose to her…We would be together, never leaving her side because I knew that even though my body, my mind would imprint someday on another girl, my heart would never because it had imprinted on Bella. My Bella. Only just recently I thought of her as mine, because she spoke in her sleep that I was hers. “My Jacob” she said. Oh what a thought. She had no idea how that sounded to me. And I wondered if she would say that when we- “DO you mind?!” his voice was strained yet so deeply angered. I smiled. “What?” I snarled back. “Could you please attempt to keep you little fantasies to yourself? Its like you’re shouting them at me. “If you don’t like it then stay out of my head!” I threw back. ((END of teaser, should i continue?)) Dazzle |
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| lovedenied_painbroughtforth | Apr 2 2008, 04:11 PM Post #2 |
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YES please do even though I hate Jacob with a passion I enjoyed reading this. |
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| caw | Apr 5 2008, 09:12 AM Post #3 |
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Heh, Dazzle-Me, I so don't like Jacob!.. and I so do like Edward...but yes I would like to know more about your thoughts of what Jacob was thinking from the tent chapter. Gee, he has the gall to get my temper going and the unease... and sort of Jacob's (to me )mean manipulations too. cww |
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| Dazzle-Me | Apr 5 2008, 09:15 AM Post #4 |
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O.O !!!! I know i think Edward and Jacob went at it with the minipulating Bella and Bella is so afraid to make them upset and leave that she won't stand up for herself b/c she is afraid to lose them !!!!! jerks.... thanks i'll get writing soon Dazzle |
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| Paige | Apr 13 2008, 05:29 PM Post #5 |
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[SIZE=7]Omg i hate Jacob with a passion but i would like you to continue. :D |
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| DaOneAndOnlyTt | Apr 14 2008, 05:41 PM Post #6 |
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yes please continue lol ..poor edward has to listen to jacobs thought..fantises of him and bella xD |
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| Guest | Dec 29 2008, 07:06 PM Post #7 |
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Pease continue, I want to hear the rest. One little thinkg, do you think Jacob would ever say, "alas"? |
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