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This can't be happening; The Baby Vision
Topic Started: Oct 13 2008, 08:41 AM (234 Views)
FussyPink43	Oct 13 2008, 08:41 AM Post #1
Newbie Posts: 2 Group: Members Member #233 Joined: September 9, 2008	Okay here's my first fan fiction. The * parts in the stroy are what STEPHINE MEYER wrote in her book. I did not come uo with that part, they belong to her!!! The rest is what i came up with. I take no credit for the * parts. Also, the part where Alice calls Bella is in Stephine Meyer's book so that's her's but the thoughts Alice thought are mine. Tell me how i did please and how good you think it fits in with Stephine Meyer's stroy!! Oh, and read it all the way through and like i said, leave me a comment. I really, really, want to know how i did compared to other fanfiction. Be honest! “Yes I think that would be great! I hope they will love the house; Bella was in a desperate state of needing new clothes. Look at these!” I nodded my head to the clothes I had thrown in the trashcan. Bella could complain all she wanted about me throwing them away; by the time she could do anything about it they would be long gone! I smiled at my luck that Edward had taken her to Esme Island. I gave me time to prepare, now with the wedding gone. I pouted at the reminder. It was so fun! Maybe Esme and I should go into wedding planning. I pushed it aside. I had to focus now. This needed to be perfect. “She’ll love me for this!” “Like how she loved you for planning the wedding, Alice?” Jasper asked with a raised eyebrow. I glowered ignoring his side comment to me as Emmet began to tease me. I knew it was coming before he said it. “Yes she did tell me she did after it!” I retorted in a angry whisper before Emmet began to talk. I knew what he would say anyway. It wasn’t very nice. It took me less than one tenth of a second to. His thoughts changed and said something else. “If she doesn’t kill you first,” Emmett laughed. He was sitting down next to Rosalie on the couch his arm around her. He and Jasper just got back from hunting. It was going to be mine a Rosalie’s next, after I made sure everything was ready for Bella’s birthday. There would be no time to prepare after Edward and Bella came back so everything was being done before Bella’s change. Besides if she even had the slightest idea what we were doing she would throw a fit. Esme was outside with Carlisle making sure the house was getting complete. I was a worried as them but I was more focused on making Bella look nice. She was my sister-in-law now. I could not have someone related to me look so…Bella. I stuck my tongue out at him. Jasper laughed at my anger that he saw and felt. “I think she would know that before,” he hinted. I grinned at him for his rescue. He smiled looking into my eyes. I knew he could feel the love that I was experiencing for him the second I stared him in the face. We were some much alike in the sense we knew about others. I, seeing the future, and him, feeling the emotions. “At least there’s only one freak in the house now,” he retorted. I laughed. It was hard not to laugh at Emmet. It was harder to laugh with him. “Rosalie, are you sure these clothes will do? That the color is right? Do you think the blue will look good on her after the change?” I worried aloud. Rosalie got up and came over to me staring at the rack of clothes by my computer. She was half interested. She hated Bella for choosing to be a vampire but I knew she would hate even more being seen with Bella dressed by Bella. “I think it will be fine,” she reassured me, “but she still will be her.” She snorted. I sighed. Things between Rosalie and Bella had not gotten better. It was hard, to love both in different ways, and have them be so mean. It was more of Rosalie, Bella tried to get along. There was no way I could force Rosalie to be nicer. Bella may go for the guilt trips but she did not. It made me mad. She would not even tell me why she treated Bella this way! It was so frustrating! Sometimes I wish I could read minds instead of seeing into the future. It would be better and more helpful. Jasper touched my shoulder. Calm ran through me. I smiled up into his golden eyes. If there was one thing in my extinct that I liked it would be him. Unlike Rosalie, I would trade nothing for that. My eyesight became blurry. I could feel the room I was seeing now be pulled away from me. I focused. This was normal, seeing into the future. I liked to know what was coming. Not knowing or being a part of it was cruel. I felt my lip pucker a bit before Jasper calmed me again. The vision was very dark. There was on figure in the center. Human. It took me a second to realized it was Bella. She looked torn up and sick screaming and throwing her arms around whatever was hidden behind her. Blood was dripping from her skin as she screamed more before hugging something behind her tighter. She looked awful and in pain. “No!” I had my cell phone out dialing before the vision was complete. Jasper stared at me shocked by my fear. Something was wrong. He knew it and I knew it. What I didn’t know was what. “Alice?” He asked uncertaintiay I ignored him calling Edward. He should know what was wrong. If he had given Bella a cell phone like I wanted him too…I would have to give her one for her next birthday. After she couldn’t complain, she was part of the family now. “Alice!” He was more worried. He touched my shoulder slightly. I pushed it off. I could not afford to feel calm. Emmet and Rosalie looked at me. Emmet was slightly worried, he was about to get off and come to me. I shook my head ‘no’ at him. He guessed it had something to do with Edward. When Edward left us when we moved from Forks it ruined everything. Emmet had not been as jolly. He seemed to remember that too. Only that would make him concerned even that small amount. Rosalie turned her head back to the T.V. uncaring. “Hi Alice.” Bella answered. I was a little stunned that Edward didn’t and Bella sounded fine besides her voice which was strained. “Bella? Bella, are you okay?” I was vaguely aware of Jasper listen carefully. I needed to know. Whatever my vision was, it was not pretty. I didn’t want my new sister to be like that. Not if I could help it. “Yeah. Um. Is Carlisle there?” “He is. What’s the problem?” Bella was avoiding my questions. I began to become irritated. Jasper did not bother to calm me down. What was wrong? What was going on? I had never been so blind! “I’m not…one hundered percent…sure…” her voice got distance. I growled soft enough so Bella couldn’t hear. Something was wrong with my brother and sister. I became more irritated and concerned. I was too late. “Is Edward all right?” I asked. I was too nervous to wait for a answer. “Carlisle,” I called louder than necessary holding the phone away from me. Quickly I pulled it back to me to demand, “Why didn’t he pick up the phone?” Did something happen to my brother? “I’m not sure.” Oh. I blinked. He was fine. He just didn’t pick up the phone. Why? Why didn’t he pick the phone up to talk to me? “Bella, what’s going on? I just saw—” “What did you see?” I stopped. I could not answer her question. What did I see? Maybe I wasn’t too late. Carlisle walked in followed by Esme. He gave me a questionable look. Esme went to Jasper quietly to ask what was wrong. “Here’s Carlisle,” I said in relief holding out the phone. I mouthed ‘Bella’ when he took it. He did and faced me when he began to talk. I held my breath to stop panting. “Bella, its Carlisle. What’s going on?” He stayed silent while Bella spoke. She was speaking softly I could not hear very well. “I—I’m a little worried about Edward…Can vampires go into shock?” I exhaled surprised. Something was wrong with Edward? Why had I not seen this?! “Is he hurt?” Carlisle expressed my concern. Esme gasped, Jasper stood still, and Emmet tightened his fist. Rosalie was the only one who stayed the same. “No, no.” Bella said honestly. “Just…taken by surprise.” Huh? What could have taken Edward by surprise? Edward was never surprised. He was when it came to Bella….Bella. My vision. Unlike the others I did not relax. “I don’t understand Bella?” Carlisle talked to Bella but the question was asked for me. I stayed quiet not answer. Carlisle angled himself away from me slightly. “I think…well, I think that…maybe…I might be…pregnant” A little gasp escaped her mouth after she spoke. Carlisle turned back to me surprised. I thought back to my vision. Bella, Bella was protecting the baby. It made sense. I nodded confirming her story. Carlisle nodded surprised. “When was the first day of your first menstrual cycle.” I left the room in a great rush. Jasper followed me. The vision was happening again but worse. Bella was worse. My sister. The vision gave me a headache. Sometimes it was clear and other times it was foggy. I panted collapsing gently against a tree. “Alice?” Jasper asked taking my hand. I smiled calmly. Unable to lie completely to him I told him about the vision. I left out the part about the pain it was for me when I saw it. It was better to lie to Jasper and keep him safe. I stopped talking having another vision. “Their coming home,” I sighed leaning my head against his shoulder. That information lifted a weight off my chest. We stayed still like this for a while before I gasped having another, different vision. No. That would be wrong. How could they?! Carlisle would never go for it! “No!” I bonded to my feet. “Rosalie if you dare hurt my sister!” I stormed into the house. Emmet stood in between Rosalie and me defensive and confused. He would protect her no matter what. No matter if he did it would kill Bella. “It’s Bella’s chose,” Rosalie reminded smugly knowing I saw. I closed my mouth. She was right it was Bella’s decision. But…I didn’t know if I was going to lose her or not. A vampire baby—it had to be, Bella would never cheat on Edward—could not be good. I felt useless not knowing. What was I going to do? And what about all the work I put into Bella’s birthday gifts? And the house?! Those things could not be ingnored!



peace1089	Sep 25 2009, 12:44 PM Post #2
Newbie Posts: 10 Group: Members Member #669 Joined: September 11, 2009	I liked it! Good job!


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