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|After Breaking Dawn; The fifth book|
|Topic Started: Nov 8 2008, 06:00 PM (2,657 Views)|
|iluvedward_bella||Nov 8 2008, 06:00 PM Post #1|
I do not own these characters
!!!!!!Warning!!!!!!! SPOILER ALERT
DO NOT READ IF YOU HAVEN'T READ BREAKING DAWN
Sitting at Charlie’s house pretending to sleep while Edward watched was just a game to them now. Yes, Bella missed her human life but she felt that this “next life” was much better for her now.
“I love you.” She mumbled.
“I love you too.” Said Edward. “Can we go home now? Renesmee will wake soon.”
“I suppose. Charlie will wake soon also.”
“Something is bothering you.” He said, not as a question, but a statement.
“It’s just that, I was thinking about what would have happened if Charlie and Renee had never split up. What do you think?”
“I think you may have had brothers or sisters, and we never would have met.”
She got up so fast and sudden that the bed sheets hadn’t even settled by the time she was in Edward’s lap, “Why do you say that?” She asked.
“Bella, think about it,” He sighed, “If Charlie loved Renee as much as he still does, he would have done anything for her. You, your father, and your mother would all be living vampire-less lives in Phoenix.”
“I suppose that’s true”, she said wanting to leave. This topic had made her feel uncomfortable, and she made herself a promise to never think about it again; she was happy right now, with her family, however annoying they might be.(Alice)
When they got home Renesmee was outside on her new over-sized tree house-mansion that even someone as big as Jacob was could fit in it, plus 3 inches of wiggle room.
Renesmee was as big as a seven-year-old, and used her voice more, now, than she used her gift.
“Mommy Mommy Mommy!” she screamed, excited.
As she jumped into her mother’s arms, Carlisle and Esme had just gotten back from hunting, and since Edward, Bella, Renesmee, and Jacob, who had been hunting with them to keep an eye on Renesmee, hadn’t gone in two or three days they decided now would be the best time to go. Renesmee and Jacob said that they would catch up in a couple minutes, as Bella and Edward started off.
“Okay Jake, see you in a few. Just so you know, the good stuff might be gone by the time you get there.”
“Very funny, Bella. We’ll just go to Oregon.”
Just then Bella got angry. She trusted Jacob and all, but she had seen the suspicions of people in the small town of Salem, which is probably where they would end up going.
Rosalie and Emmet had gone there just yesterday to fix a bear problem, and a ranger had seen them, now the whole town thinks someone is going to attack them in their sleep. They have signs all over the place looking for pale, beautiful gods who looked vicious, and had people patrolling the woods.
“You will NOT take my baby into that wretched town! Do you hear me Jacob, NEVER!”
“Okay, okay Bella. I was just kidding, ya know, joking?
“Do not even JOKE about that Jake!”
“Bella, you know me better than to put Renesmee in any danger.”
“Let’s go Edward.” Bella glared at Jacob, turned and ran.
Please post what you think...chapter 2 will be up soon
Edited by iluvedward_bella, Nov 8 2008, 06:01 PM.
|iluvedward_bella||Nov 8 2008, 07:28 PM Post #2|
Chapter 2 Hunting
As I leaped over the river just beside the mansion, I thought about how I hadn’t gone swimming in a while and decided that I would go after hunting.
“I love you.” Edward said.
“I love you too.” I answered.
“So Bella, what do you think, moose, elk grizzly, or lion?” he asked as he kissed the top of my head.
“Hmmm…Well you know I need to learn to eat with manners so moose and elk are out, we haven’t had lion in a while; you pick.” I answered.
“Lion, it’s my favorite.” He said, smiling.
“Me too.” I said, remembering my first hunt.
“I did some research, there is a large lion problem in Ohio, we should be able to take care of half of it.” He said, and then ran.
Once I got to Ohio, I realized that Edward was gone. I listened and heard his steps just as he burst through the trees half a second behind me.
“HA I won, and don’t even tell me you let me win again.” I scolded.
“Sorry, love.” He said, and then kissed me.
“Edward” I growled, and then play-tackled him. As we fell to the ground laughing, the lion smell got much stronger, and my thirst took over. It seemed that his did too.
“Shall we?” he asked.
“Of course.” I answered. We found the pride in no time at all and as I watched Edward gracefully snap his prey’s neck; I tried to do the same but the lion was standing in a mud puddle and, of course, I went in with it.
“Shit!” I exclaimed. Edward laughed.
“Bella dear, I figured this might happen, so I brought provisions.” He said to my relief.
“Edward to the rescue once again!” I said, “By ‘figured this would happen’ did you mean Alice?” I asked smugly.
“Yes, I think you should wait to change until after we have eaten.”
“That might be best.” I scoffed.
“So, what exactly did you bring for me?” I asked when we were finished.
“This.” He said pulling out one of the pieces of lingerie Alice had provided for our honeymoon. (One that had survived)
“Hmm, forget about swimming.” I said.
“Swimming?” he was curious, but I was already kissing him, and he kissed me back. Edward somehow managed to get his shirt off with how tight I was clinging to him, and he also managed to get me into my lingerie. He changed his mind and was about to rip it back off when we suddenly were ripped apart and on the ground. Something held me back as I scrambled to get back to Edward. Although whatever it was wasn’t strong enough, something made me stop.
“You might want to stop, Renesmee is watching.” Jacob said.
“Oh, right.” I answered, somewhat upset, not that Renesmee was here, just that I had to stop kissing Edward.
“And by the way, Alice sent me with this so that you could make yourself presentable for Renesmee to see you.” Jacob said handing me a long white coat.
“I’ll make sure I tell her thanks,” I said a little annoyed. Just then Renesmee started walking towards me, tripped over a root, and fell. Her knee was gashed open and she started screaming and crying.
“Mommy, help!” she wailed. Renesmee had never been hurt before due to her protectors. “Mommy, why wont you help me?!” I was backing away from Renesmee, for although my thirst was quenched, a second thirst came along and I wasn’t sure if I was strong enough, although Edward was.
“Lick it to seal it.” He directed me.
“Edward I…” I started to protest.
“Bella, yes you can, I’ll be right behind you if you can’t.”
“Edward I…I…I love you Renesmee.” As I licked the wound, Edward’s fingers tightened around me. I backed away and wound turned into a small scab, and then disappeared completely.
“I did it didn’t I?” I said astonished.
“Yes love, you did.” He replied as he pulled me into one short kiss.
“We need to hunt.” Jacob said, “You two’ll probably want some privacy, so I’ll take her to the park afterward.” He added a wink.
“Thank you.” Edward said as we tuned to go home.
When we got home Edward steered me strait to the bedroom and pulled me into a deep kiss. As he took his shirt off, I noticed something blue on his skin.
“Edward, what is that?” I asked.
“What is what?” he said pulling me into a deeper kiss.
As I pushed away from him, I grabbed his arm and pulled him into the bathroom, grabbing the handheld mirror on the way. When we got to the bathroom I pushed him towards the mirror and held the handheld up. He burst out laughing.
“It’s a tattoo Bella!” He laughed some more. I looked closer and saw that the tattoo said “I M C”, Isabella Marie Cullen
“I thought needles couldn’t puncture our skin.” I said.
“Well I sort of got Emmett to do it, he said he would on one condition.” He said casually.
“Oh,” I said, “and what does this condition happen to be?”
“Well,” he seemed reluctant to tell me, “I told him that he could make jokes about my sex life now.” He seemed to notice the anger in my eyes. Good.
“Would you mind explaining to me, WHY!?” I screamed.
“I just wanted you on my skin forever.” He pleaded.
“Oh Edward!” and I threw myself at him. We could have been locked in that kiss for days, for all I care. Jacob got fed up with waiting, so he and Renesmee decided to take a vacation to Hawaii. When Edward finally decided to stop, it was very abrupt.
“Edward?” I asked, out of breath.
“Hmmm?” He asked, he was out of breath too.
“Why…” And then I knew. It had been weeks since Edward and I had started kissing, we were thirsty, no doubt. Jacob was probably still on vacation with Renesmee.
“Let’s go hunt, we can continue later.” He winked at her.
“Fine but this time don’t let me win, I can do that on my own.” I sneered.
“I’ll try.” He laughed.
“Edward we’ve been…absent…a while, maybe we should stop and say hello to the family?”
“Perhaps, but Emmett, well Emmett will be Emmett.” He said.
“I suppose I can handle it, he is family.”
“You are the same Bella as before, I knew you would be.” He said and added a kiss.
“I love you, forever and forever.”
“As I love you, forever and forever.”
“Let’s go say hi.”
“I’ll be there in half a second.”
“Do you mind if I wait for you?…Emmett.” I explained
“Of course you can love.”
“Thanks, you know it will be bad, with how long we’ve been…absent.”
“Yes, but I told him where the limits were and if he breaks any rules, deal’s off.” He said as he turned around to look for something.
“Hmm” I pushed my shield farther out than ever before, I had figured out how to ‘turn it off’ and thought, you told him he could mess with you, not me. The fist time he does, it’s over.
He turned around with a very smug smile on his face.
Please comment, i will answer questions too
|Guest||Oct 12 2009, 01:42 PM Post #3|
|k this is me and im not putting up chapters 4 or 5 until you guys comment i know a lot of people viewed it but NONE commented so yeah|
|Tara||Oct 29 2009, 09:44 AM Post #4|
I thought it was really good. I thought it was a little bit unlikely that Bella and Edward would be Okay with Jacob taking their daughter off to Hawai though. Well done!
|Guest||Jul 18 2010, 05:34 AM Post #5|
|hey i thought that your writing is briliiant and i would love to read more. very soon :D but i am a bit confuse so jacob took renessemee to haiwaii? ^o)|
|Aadya Gupta||Mar 13 2011, 04:01 AM Post #6|
hey i think its really gud.....bt u shud go a little slow.. bt otherwise its nyc
n if u need help editing it or sumthing.....think of me!!!!! :)
overall i think its gr8!!!
pls do post the nxt chapters.....dying 2 read them!!!!!! ;)
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