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|Blinded Love; Rating PG-13|
|Tweet Topic Started: Nov 28 2008, 10:05 PM (2,170 Views)|
|Belward_Fan||Nov 28 2008, 10:05 PM Post #1|
Hope this is in the right gene Okay so this is my first twilight fiction so hope you enjoy it. Edward has lost all hope for finding love until she comes to town. She’s smart, funny, beautiful, everything he wished for. The only problem is that he thirsts for her blood. She comes to town looking to fix her relationship with her father but ended up with more than she wanted. Did I mention that she’s blind?
Today was like no other day. Go to school come back home then wait for the next day to repeat this. I’m tired of the same old routine of my life. I want to do something to screw it up blow the whole routine to hell. But how, how can I do this? My adoptive Father Carlisle asked me to drop off something for his old friend Charlie Swan, what confused me was that they were women clothes like my sister’s Alice’s type of clothes what could Charlie Swan want with these? I arrived at the house and got out of my car and walking up to the door knocking briefly before a man just over 5 foot answers the door “Hi Edward nice of you to come over” he said welcoming me inside his home. I looked round and noticed something was off but I didn’t know what just yet “Edward I want you to meet someone very special to me” Charlie said guiding me into the other room. A saw the most beautiful creature sitting on the island in the middle of the kitchen. She was just sitting and eating an apple like she hadn’t a care in the world. She was beautiful and graceful that I knew already.
“Charlie, isn’t she a bit I don’t know young for you?” I joked looking at him with curiosity in my eyes. He shook his head at me laughing. What was so funny? I thought to myself thinking he was crazy because he was laughing for no reason at all
“Edward my boy, this is Isabella my ‘daughter’ ” I knew if I had any blood flowing through my veins I would have turned bright red instantly. I looked over at the girl that was oblivious to our existence in the room
“Isabella, that’s a beautiful name sir” I said politely after staring at the girl for what seemed a lifetime. He nodded as he moved passed me and walking over to the girl. He lifted up her chin with one of his fingers letting her know that we were there now. She smiled and quickly wrapped her arms around her father obviously happy to see him. I saw him help her down from the island and over to me, her smile still planted on her flawless face. “Nice to meet you Miss. Swan” I said kissing her hand that was now fitting perfectly in mine. I saw her smile as she blushed when I did this
“Nice to meet you too” she said in her angelic voice. Her voice was like music to my ears. The one thing about her that caught my attention the most was her eyes they were light brown with a white coating almost over them.
“Oh sorry…. I’m Edward Cullen” I said realizing that I forgot to introduce myself to her. She nodded at me again still smiling her beautiful smile. “When my dad asked me to drop these off I thought you have had secretly turned into a woman- wanna- be Charlie but now I know why” I handed Charlie the bag and nodded at Isabella again before leaving the house. I was saddened when I didn’t hear her say good- bye to me
Even though I couldn’t see him I knew he was handsome. Just by his voice I knew he was breath taken and usually I’m always right when I’m guessing who’s cute and who’s not. “So Edward….” I began to say but a hand was placed on my shoulder interrupting me “Yeah dad?” I said looking behind me
“Honey he already left” I frowned knowing he probably thinks I don’t like him because I didn’t say good – bye. “Why don’t I bring you to your room sweet heart so you can get some rest” my father said picking me up in his arms carrying me up the stairs to my room
I knew my father was gone when I heard the door shut. I could still feel the burn of his kiss on my hand. He was freezing cold when he touched me but it just be freezing outside. It was hard for me to do things. But Ch…dad made sure that my room hand no sharp objects so I could hurt myself more than just falling which I did often. Instead of a dresser I had a shelf type thing that was organized by day of the week. I made sure that my mother Renee told dad which outfit goes in what day, so I was set for a least a week or two. I got up carefully and found the shelf and counted down until I found the last shelf which contained my pajamas. I pulled them out and got up from the floor. Charlie before I had come to Forks to live with him had built a bathroom connecting to my room. I haven’t even seen the house but I know it’s huge just by how big my room is, it takes a few minutes just to find the bathroom. I shrug off my clothes and cautiously enter the shower and reach out to start the water. I sigh in relief as I feel the hot water hit my skin.
I arrived home in record time. My hunger was bizarre when I was over Charlie’s. That girl was that smell that I couldn’t resist but I did some how. Something was wrong I was close to going all vampire right there and then to devouring that that beautiful creature…… but why? Why had I almost lost control because of her? I needed to get away because I know if I see her again I will lost it and kill her. I find Carlisle in the living room reading a book.
“Carlisle I need to leave town, I’m afraid that I’m loosing control” I say walking into the room. He looks up at me a lets out a sigh
“If it’s best then go. My keys are in the pocket of my jacket…. Be careful Edward and please come back soon” I read his thoughts as I nodded and left the room after thanking him
I quietly sneak out of the house if that was possible and left before anyone could know I was even there in the first place. I look at the scenery past me by quickly as I drive out of town. That girl kept popping up into my mind….why can’t she just disappear? Why is she stuck in my head? Why can’t I stay in control when I see her in my mind?
I walked inside my house and stopped dead in my tracks staring blanking into the room. I saw my brother Edward in Alaska why was he there? When is he leaving? I wondered as I came back to reality, I saw Jasper my boyfriend standing in front of me. I knew what he was doing he was trying to calm me, he knew that I was upset about something and like always had to make it better “Edward….” I whispered just loud enough for him to hear
“He left about an hour ago Alice. He needed to get himself under control I guess.” I was confused Edward next to Carlisle was the most controlled one out of us all.
“Why would he need to control himself he’s one of the best at it?” I asked only for Jasper to shrug that he didn’t know. I’m betting that’s what my vision was about so at least I know where he is in case we need him.
|caw||Nov 29 2008, 12:40 AM Post #2|
Wow, I was so surprised Edward could control his thirst for Bella-so well at her house.
How interesting to have Bella be blind, she can't be dazzled by his looks this way just by his voice and his scent.
Hope Edward comes back sooner then anyone thinks.
|Belward_Fan||Dec 7 2008, 02:22 PM Post #3|
I woke up the next morning to feeling the heat from the sun on my face. True it was raining that much I knew from the water hitting my window. I carefully got up from my bed and walked slowly over to my bathroom so I could take a quick shower and get ready. Charlie didn’t want to send me to school so he said that his friend Carlisle was sending one of his children over to watch over me since Charlie had work and didn’t want to leave me alone. I don’t blame him for doing that because I’m majorly clumsy and I was secretly hoping it would be Edward to keep me company.
After about maybe 15 20 minutes I was done and ready for my day. I quietly left my room after another 5 minutes trying to find the door. Once I was out of my room I instantly found the railing and clung onto it for dear life. I slowly made my way to the stairs tightening my grip as I began to walk down them.
I counted every step so I knew how many there was for next time. Clumsy me tripped over my own two feet, I didn’t know how far down I was on the stairs and thought I was going to fall down them. But instead I was welcomed by a strong pair of arms that I didn’t know. I looked up and smiled to whom ever had saved me “Thank you” I said politely to the mystery man
“No prob, just watch your step next time” If only I could watch my step “I’m Emmett by the way” he said introducing himself. I smile softly “My sister Alice is parking the car and my brother Jasper is helping her” he telling me of who else was there with him. I frowned in my mind knowing that Edward was not coming to see me. I could still feel the man ‘Emmett’s’ arms around me and blushed as I stood back up.
Charlie must have heard the commotion because he came running down the stairs. I heard his let out a breath he was probably holding in “Oh thank god” I heard him say as I was swung around and engulfed into a bear hug “Thank you Emmett for saving her” I heard him says I knew he was crying he must of heard my fall or something
“No problem Chief anytime” I heard my hero of the day say to my father. If only he knew that hero title for me changed daily
“Bella what were you thinking trying to come down stairs when no one was with you?” I heard my father asked me I knew he was mad right now by his tone of voice “You could have killed your self if Emmett hadn’t caught you in time” I’m going to be hearing this for the rest of my life I’m sure
“Sir if you don’t mind me asking but why can’t Isabella walk down the stairs by herself?” Emmett asked my dad but I needed him to know what I preferred to be called before it stuck
“Bella” I corrected him
“Emmett you didn’t know Bella’s blind” I hated when my dad would tell people that’s probably the reason this Emmett guy didn’t know neither did Edward yesterday.
“Oh I’m sorry I didn’t know” ugh here we go with the whole ’I didn’t know sorry’ speech that I didn’t need to hear again
“Now you know, can we get this day started with already?” I said annoyed to the two men in the room. I heard a squeal coming from the front door and instantly I was in another hug. “Alice let the poor girl go will you?” I heard Emmett say in laughter almost. ‘Alice’ acted very pixie like so she must not look very different than a pixie either
“Oh come on Em, this is going to be the best day ever!” I heard her pixie like voice say to Emmett “Bella, I’m guessing you already met my older brother Emmett. The shy guy over by the door is my boyfriend/adoptive brother Jasper. He has blonde hair which is majorly curly, tall, and gorgeous as hell” how did she know I couldn’t see him? “Don’t worry Bella I over heard Charlie tell Emmett so did Jasper your secret is safe with us. I’m guessing no one except us knows about you not being able to see?” I nodded my head confirming her question “Well no worries we won’t tell a soul” I nodded I already can tell we’ll be friends and I just met her
“Thank you Alice” I say politely to the pixie sounding girl
“No problem Bella.”
“Do you three think you can handle this if I go to work?” I heard my father ask the three Cullen siblings. I glared at where I could feel my dad’s presence was. How could he not trust my in taking care of myself just a little bit? “Isabella don’t look at me like that I’m just a concerned parent” I sighed and stopped glaring at him I couldn’t blame him I just almost fell down the stairs
“Yes Mr. Swan, Bella is in the best hands don’t worry one bit” I heard Alice say perky like I could tell she has been since I met her only minutes ago. My dad kissed me on the head and after a minute or two of silence I heard the door close indicating that Charlie was gone. “So Bella, I brought you some clothes since you just moved here and all you must not have a full closet yet” I smiled and nodded at her generosity towards me
“Thank Alice. That’s very kind of you”
“Don’t have to thank her Bella she just wanted an excuse to shop she is addicted to it” I heard Emmett say as he chuckled. I heard a swat sound and knew Alice must have wacked him “Oh you know its true Alice” I heard Emmett say again but this time I was the one laughing
“”Hey Bella lets go try on these clothes I got you in your room” Before I could protest I was being picked up in a pair of arms to big to be Alice but too small to be Emmett’s they must belong to the other brother of Alice “Thanks Jasper” Alice said as Jasper put me down. “Bye Jazz” she said as her hand took a hold of mine and guided me across the room
“Alice I don’t know about this I’m not that much of a model of any sort” I never thought of myself as beautiful mainly because I have never saw my appearance before but my mom would dress me up and brush my hair for me and help me with brushing my teeth.
“Oh stop Bella, you look beautiful but not with my help you will look stunning as ever” I felt the red return to my face as she said this.
“Let’s just get this over with Alice” I heard her squeal in response as she dragged me somewhere. It felt like for ever since she started tugging at me and pulling things off and on my by the second. Next she was doing my hair and make up. I felt like a Bella Barbie doll right now with Alice, but now the torture was over I think since she stopped.
“This is my best work I think.” I heard her finally speak up
“That’s good right Alice?”
“Yes that’s good Bella” I heard the door open from the other side of the room, since I can’t see my hearing is almost completely perfect “Urg what do you want?” I heard Alice ask the person the at the door
“Just making sure you haven’t killed Bella is all” I didn’t recognize the voice which frustrated me like you wouldn’t know. The person must have noticed my frustration because they spoke again “It’s just me Jasper Bella” I smiled and nodded to him thanking him for answering my unasked question “So I see that Bella is in fact alive in every sense of the word so I’m going to back downstairs with Emmett” I nodded but I didn’t hear the door close so I was confused did he leave or is he still here?
“What are you two doing down there anyway?” I heard Alice asked curiosity in her voice as she asked him
“Well when you took Bella hostage Emmett started looking around. Sorry Bella. Anyways Emmett found the ‘Wii’ and some games and got attached to it. He found Charlie’s hunting game and got a kick out of it” I laughed to myself as Jasper explained what they were doing while we girls were up here “Why don’t you two join us?” I smiled and nodded
I felt Jasper pick me up again and carry me out of the room. I could hear Alice’s faint footsteps behind us as he carried me down stairs and into the living room
I’ve been watching the guys play the game for almost an hour now. Emmett sometimes would help Bella play by holding the controller with her and playing the game. Since I can see the future because of my powers I knew who should be doing that with Bella and it wasn’t Emmett. I’m surprised that Jasper could carry Bella like that. Not because he wasn’t strong because he was uncontrollably strong because of what he is but because he’s new to our family and he acted so in control it was kind of hot. Edward had called me telling me why he had to leave. I couldn’t blame him the whole time I was brushing her hair I wanted to loose control but I’m not seeing how why Edward was so scared of her. Sure she smelled very good but not to the point I would bite her.
When Carlisle told us that three of us would be coming over here, of course Jasper and myself volunteered but Rosalie refused because she mad that dad would want us to baby sit some ‘human girl’ as Rosalie had called her.
I was completely spaced out that I hadn’t noticed that Jasper had made food for Bella and they were helping her eat it. I smiled at the site, I felt bad for Bella in a way this was her life always needing someone around to help her go on with her day. I noticed her yawn and remembered that humans sleep unlike us “Well it looks like Bella’s tired time to sleep” I said pointing to the stairs. Of course I could carry her but it would be strange how someone my size could carry her all the way upstairs to her room
Emmett picked up Bella who was half a sleep on his shoulder, he carried her upstairs as Jasper and I followed him. He laid her down on the bed and I tucked her in. We said good night to her and left to wait for Charlie to return. Jasper could sense that he was worried About Bella because he was close enough to the house. I saw him in his car he looked like a nervous wreck. We couldn’t blame him he’s Bella’s father he has every right to be worried about her.
Charlie came in and sighed in relief seeing that we were all just watching television. “Don’t worry Chief Swan Bella’s upstairs sound a sleep” I say as we get up and get ready to make our leave
“I can’t thank you enough you three.” I smiled as we left the house after saying out good byes. We took off back to the house
|Guest||Jan 22 2009, 02:21 PM Post #4|
|this is a great story, very interesting, post more soon!|
|Smickyla||Jul 9 2009, 10:29 PM Post #5|
|She's blind?! :o|
|Cherish1810||Aug 3 2010, 11:57 PM Post #6|
|WOW! This is a great idea for a story! Please post more soon!!!|
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