Dancing With Alice

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Dancing With Alice; Jasper takes Alice to dinner
Topic Started: Nov 30 2008, 11:37 AM (1,386 Views)
Jacob'sImprint	Nov 30 2008, 11:37 AM Post #1
Newbie Posts: 43 Group: Members Member #337 Joined: November 29, 2008	"Why can't you ever let anything be a surprise! You and your stupid visions have to ruin everythng! You can't just block them or something?!" I yelled at Alice across the room. Her visions ruined something special. Bella wanted to give me a gift to let me know that she forgives me for how I acted on her 18th birthday. Alice told me she was giving me a present and I didn't want her to tell me what it was since I never recieved a gift before but she ignored my wish and told me anyway. "Well I'm sorry you can't learn to appreciate my gift! I never thought that you would be ashamed of it! I knew you were getting a present and I told you. There's nothing wrong with it!" "Alice, everything is wrong with it! The idea of a present is that you give them something to show you care and you're not supposed to know what it is so when you open it it's a surprise which is something I can't have with you because you don't know how to keep your big mouth shut!" By looking at her big watery eyes I could tell my words offended her deeply. I felt bad, but not bad enough to apologize __ yet. Her eyes seemed to get bigger by the second. Then the tears came. Oh no! I couldn't stand my Alice looking so upset. I rushed over to her side and gave her a big hug and never let go. "Look, I'm really sorry. How about I take you dancing tonight? We could go to that place you always wanted to try." "Okay," She said looking down at the floor "I'll go. Be ready in ten minutes." She said skipping up the stairs happily. When I got ready in my black pants and light purple button up shirt, she came down the steps in a beautiful red dress that came down a little below her knees that had a slit in the right side from her thigh down. She had on dark red lipstick and a necklace made out of many shiny, black stones. "You look lovely." I said taking her hand and walking with her to the door. "Thank you!" she said. When we got to the restaraunt she immidiatley steered us to an empty table. That's when it struck me that she had a vision about tonight. Curse Alice!! "Would you like some wine sir...madam?" The french waitor asked us giving Alice a more than friendly smile. I slightly growled and Alice grimaced and the waitor ran away. "So you think your okay with my gift?" Alice asked quietly. "Yeah." I said smiling. We both ordered some red wine and when we finished I decided to give her a long apology forgetting she alreay knew it. "Alice," I said looking deep into her eyes "I love you a lot. I really do. I'm sorry about earlier today." I went on and on while she smiled about how much I'm sorry,love her, wish I could take it all back then i said"I'm sorry but I never recieved a present." and to my surprise we said the last line together "Wait, yes I have, you." We continued looking into each other's eyes and holding hands. That was when she confessed to me that she had a vision tonight and that she knew I figured it out when she took us to a table because that was going to be the next thing I say. "Well at least we had a good night." I said paying for the dinner. "Alice, by any chance did you have a vision about what happens next? I bet you can't tell me!" "I made it sound that way so she'd get competitive and tell me if she knew. She sadly shook her head slowly. I smiled. We got in the car and I drove to a meadow way out of town. We sat down in the grass and looked up at the stars. "The stars are beautiful," I said thankful she didn't know what was going to happen, "but they will never hold a candle to you." "Awww Jasper. Thank you." We leaned in and kissed. Then we hugged each other tightly and looked up at the stars for the rest of the night. (I'm sorry, this isn't supposed to be in Chaptered Fics, it's a One Shot. Leave a reply if you liked and tell me why if you want.)



jasper83	Jan 14 2009, 03:08 AM Post #2
Jasper's Lover Posts: 1 Group: Members Member #408 Joined: January 13, 2009	Aww honey, your fanfic it's so sweety :wub: !!! I love it, really!!! Jasper and Alice are the sweetest couple in Twilight saga; they are so reserved and tender when they are toghether :$ !!! In my opinion you were able to catch these feelings (surly and at the same time shy, introverted him; sweet and full of life her) in a perfect way ^_^ Absolutely I love your fic dear Jacob'sImprint Yours Cristina



Guest	Jan 16 2009, 02:36 PM Post #3
Unregistered	It is really good :D
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Guest	Jan 29 2009, 03:57 AM Post #4
Unregistered	I love Alice too. sigh. It's something about her eyes...so deep and mesmerizing. I'm still swimming in them, even though it's been months since our eyes last talked to eachother. :(
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Alyshia	Feb 10 2009, 09:24 AM Post #5
Unregistered	Alice and Jasper are the best cuple (other than Edward and Bella) in the world and i think you did a grest goob!!! :D ;)
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Jacob'sImprint	Feb 28 2009, 10:55 AM Post #6
Newbie Posts: 43 Group: Members Member #337 Joined: November 29, 2008	Awwww... Thanks you guys! You are awesome!


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