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| In Alice's Shoes.; only a bit of Twilight | |
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| Topic Started: Jan 17 2009, 11:29 AM (1,460 Views) | |
| sweetsgirl | Jan 17 2009, 11:29 AM Post #1 |
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hunting with Jasper was always very fun to do. " Alice have you get anything yet? " Jasper asked me. " 2 moose and 1 buck " i responded sinking my teeth into the buck. When the sun rose the next morning Esme, Carlisle, Jasper, and I were standing around the piano listening to Edward play a beautiful song. " Ok school time " Esme said like a real human mother. Rosalie, Emmet, Edward, Jasper, and I all got into Edward' silver volvo. As Edward drove to school i got into a fight with Rosalie. " How come you wont tell me your vision was last night " She argued. " Cause i dont know if it is really going to happen! " I protested. " What was your vision Alice? " Edward questioned. " you and someone blurry couldn't tell who it was, someone we have never seen before, brunette teenager, looked like she was REALLY into you. " I answered. " Me and a Human? " Edward chuckled. We arrived at school and I danced out the car seeing an old red pick-up truck we have never seen before. " That's the girl in my vision's car! " i yelled excitedly. Edward rolled his eyes and we all walked inside. I went to hisotry with Jasper, Rosalie, and Emmet. I Took my seat beside Jasper and we started whispering to each other. " so what did the girl in your vision look like? " he whispered to me. " well she had brunette hair, brown eyes, pale skin kinda like ours by she was still human, her in voice in my vision eager and it sounded like pleading to become one of us.. " i answered in a hush tone. " In your vision, were they dating? " Jasper asked quietly. " Maybe, not sure " i whispered back to him. The bell rung and i went to my next class. " Math " i sighed my only class without Jasper. I took my seat next to a girl named Peggie Therton. She always looked at me like i had three heads or something. Today she was too busy texting her boyfriend. When Mr. Charter began class she was still texting. 20 minutes into class she finally closed her little LG Rumor and put it in her pocket and listened. I sat like a statue not breathing cause Peggie just joined this school 1 month ago and i was still getting used to her scent. Mr. Charter called me to ask me to solver the problem. I answered it perfectly and went back to hold my breath. Finally class ended and i walked out the class to find Jasper waiting for me. We walked to the cafeteria talking all about my vision. as we walked in i saw the girl from my vision right in front of my own eyes. It was her i was positive! As i walked pass i could here her whispering to the sassy girl Jessica Stanley. " Who are they " she asked her. " Alice and Jasper Cullen, adopted by Dr. Carlisle and Mrs. Esme Cullen. They are together i mean like together together, im not even sure if that's legal " she answered. Legal i thought, please like a cop could stop me at my speed and strength... I went back to listening to the girl's conversation. " they aren't really related " answered the nicer one Angela. " Well but they live together and that's strange! " Jessica fought back to Angela. Strange i thought, im a small moves like im dancing, pale skinned vampire and they think that is strange! I sat at our table still ease dropping on the girls. I watched as Rosalie and Emmet came in. " Who is that? " She asked. : Bella,.. " i stopped listening for about 10 seconds. Bella hat was her name! i went back to listening. " That's Rosalie and Emmet Cullen also adopted " JEssica said. " Also going out " Angela added. Rosalie and Emmet took their seats at our table. I didn't even pay a speck of attention to them i was too busy easedropping! I watched as Edward walked in. " and who is that? " Bella asked. " Edward Cullen " JEssica said flirtingly, " But dont even try appartently no girl here is good enough for him ". Edward cracked a smile and came and sat down. " Apparently no girl here is good enough for me " He mimicked. I giggled and Jasper let a few chuckles slip out himself. " Anyways the girl she was talking to is the one from my vision! " i said excited. " Good for her... " he said harsly. " God what is wrong with you today " I questioned. " I just dont want to be in love with a human! " he starde at Bella and Bella stared back. Quickly Bella looked away then looked back and Edward was still staring at her. We all go up and went to our classes. I went to gym with Jasper and Emmet, Rosalie went to Math, and Edward went to Biology. [/color] Edited by sweetsgirl, Jan 17 2009, 11:35 AM.
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| Jacob'sImprint | Jan 18 2009, 11:21 AM Post #2 |
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I always wondered if anyone would write something like this. Your good. Hey, if you don't mind could yopu tell me how to change the color of your words? |
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| YellowPorscheyGirl1901 | Jan 24 2009, 08:17 AM Post #3 |
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thats a really good one...i kinda wish i would've thought of that XD by the way somebody read Almost Alice, im looking for support. THIS IS REALLY GOOD WRITE MORE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZZ. -Alice :P |
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| sweetsgirl | Jan 26 2009, 01:59 PM Post #4 |
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to change color you click the color thing in the right corner and choose a color highlight what you wanted colored and CLICK :) |
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| caw | Apr 6 2009, 06:53 AM Post #5 |
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Always good to read what Alice thinks and sees. caw |
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