going to the fun house

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going to the fun house; a new fun house to find trouble
Topic Started: Aug 26 2009, 08:15 PM (59 Views)
caw	Aug 26 2009, 08:15 PM Post #1
Freshman Posts: 185 Group: Members Member #117 Joined: March 6, 2008	today is 9/2/09...I woke up the other day with this on my mind..it's been nagging me... so to get it off my chest I thought I'd share it. Now I've shared and other thoughts came to me..so I changed a few sentences...sorry if you are reading this again. ------ Everyone had been watching one of the horror movies Jasper had chosen for them. Jasper felt Alice's body tense and looked over at her. Alice had gone into her psychic world. Jasper watched her face and held her gently. He would only stop the visions if she was breathing hard-like being scared in his opinion..or if she was crying. He watched her closely...she seemed amused. Edward glanced over and was amused too. Bella instead of watching Alice like everyone else was watching Edward's face. As Alice came out of her visions she looked over at Edward and he shrugged his shoulders. He didn't understand why she was having a vision of a Fun house. They never had been to one like that. He saw colors and he knew music was being played by the way others swayed or walked with a bounce. It was like a massive hall way...he saw some other visions that didn't make sense. He knew that Alice would have some other visions too and would watch for them. Alice giggled and told them the following week they would go to a new fun house. ----- Six months earlier..flashback, "Bella?!" Charlie yelled excitedly.. which made Bella jump and she moved quickly towards Charlie. She was so surprised she hadn't heard him pull up. "Yes, Dad?". Bella came from the kitchen, with the kitchen towel, still in her hand as Charlie closed the front door behind him, and waited patiently for him to speak. "I'm going to see an old friend tonight from the police academy..he's the only one I've stayed in contact with. He has this new idea he wants to throw at me...to see if it might work. I'll be there a couple of hours....so don't wait up for me ok?" Charlie glanced at her, raising his nose to the scent of her wonderful cooking being baked. "Dad, don't you remember Alice invited me over for a sleep over tonight? Bella looked at him questioning and she sighed..he had forgotten by his face changing. She rolled her eyes. Charlie coughed a little and said,"Oh ....yeah..." --- Charlie's friend met him, told him his idea, of finding away that's safe, to learn more on why people have done certain things..and the latest therapies. The people in the video show all their reactions, for the people involved in correcting the mass problems the USA's going thru. It would show people's reactions to the sounds they heard, and the colors they saw. Everyone who has seen this, who have been problem solvers, have been excited about solving their communities problems, and they now have hope to deal with their problems thru the ages. He told Charlie that a few psychologist friends of his wife, a few doctors, and one teacher got together to brainstorm. They were tired of the high crimes being committed everywhere in the USA. They said there was away to find out things in a subliminal way... to get people to show the truth thru body language...and thru dancing. They believed each person would not even know they were being studied..their brain wouldn't even know they were giving information about themselves as they danced. The owners could have it set up, to see which people had problems, and who had healthy love relations, and why some had long lasting relationships. Why other community care givers could ask to include the music to find out why some liked sex more then the average person, and others who didn't at all, and why that was?! Charlie's friend believed some ...were raped..or had childhood traumas that affected their trust/ vulnerable sides and they couldn't give in to another. Their ideas and experimenting with the arrangements that they tried...seemed to show that they could make a person remember something bad from infancy up to how old they were...and that person wouldn't even know they were giving out information freely..they would just be enjoying the experience..They would not know that their deepest darkest secrets..in the closet sort of actions were being noticed. All's they knew would be that this experience was awesome- either enjoying the music or enjoying the colors they saw. When the person was drawn to a certain color, many times that color represented a lifelong trauma in their lives or for others their good choices in life. The researchers could also find out who had operations that made the patients change for life-physically or mentally. The teacher had asked for away to help those with low self esteem, bad study habits, or why some students were so hard to reach. Other ideas were to help those who had accidents and had lost some of their memories...they talked of all sorts of areas they wanted better for their citizens. Charlie's friend had asked Charlie to see the video he brought. There would be larger versions later..but in this video it had been taped in a train trailer, they hoped this idea would be all around the USA in a couple of years. So Charlie heard different kinds of music that he liked listening too, and he saw some people move around a lot, they would go down on their knees, some sliding, and getting up to dance to the left or the right side of the building, some jumping high in the air..there was all kinds of movements. Some swaying like they were the best dancers ever..or just enjoying the moment. Charlie was impressed, just to see the variety of people..who agreed to be in the video, and how his friend talked about each one of the people. Charlie noticed, he recognized..some of the guys who danced, he remembered reading some of their files, he knew they were bad guys, but they had been released, and agreed to be in the video..to make some money to pay back to their victims from the future fun houses. He saw how they reacted, that some of the guys had trauma when they weren't even two days old....they didn't even know it. It was taped, that Charlie's friend had gone to visit the guys parents', and family members that were still alive, and asked questions. Most of the fathers were reluctant to admit anything... or they just forgot.. since they were usually high on something and couldn't remember most of the bad things they had done...many times the mother remembered-but the same went for her too...she was either drunk, or passed out....there were a few that Charlie's friend got to re tell, an older brother, or sister, or an aunt to add to what they remembered. The information was like a break thru ,to see what had happened, to so many people,and now they had a better chance of giving these people healing or a chance to change. As Charlie watched the video.. Charlie gave his suggestions too.He had to promise he wouldn't tell anyone about the studies. His friend explained that people who have killed someone would only do a certain dance movement, people who have been raped would do another kind of dance movement, people who had been raped by a guy would go to the right of the wall while dancing...people who had been raped by a girl would go to the left, there were some (sadly to see) who had been raped by both...and Charlie was amazed at their records. Many of the dancers were so surprised they could even dance. While Charlie watched the movements, he thought of Bella, and thought, she might be able to get over her clumsiness by going to one of these fun houses. He smiled a little on that thought. People who had seen or been apart of deadly gun incidents, would dance in a different way, or and go to the color appropriate for that trauma. On a brighter side of the video.. He was impressed by some of the women.. who he thought ...looked mighty fine...his friend called them 'the Siren's' and his friend wanted Charlie and him on their next vacation time... to look them up.. Charlie liked the fantasy but knew he would probably never let it happen. He did ask if he could have a copy of the video, and of course his friend sent him one( along with new ones when they were impressive to share in the future.) They had joked around about knowing people that lived good lives and were envious of them, the dysfunctional ones were interesting, but the ones they wanted to stop were the ones who just didn't give a damn about anyones lives, how they broke people's hearts with their violence and crimes against humanity...they too now might finally change..and stop the generations of horror and sorrow. Charlie so liked the idea that maybe in a decade the USA would be a country to be proud of. --- So what happens when Edward and the family go..? What will be the results or will Alice and Edward see they have to do some blocking...to protect themselves? Who will be able to pass the best? I don't know if it's ok or not...please let me know if I should do more or just get the idea out there? Sorry if there are spelling mistakes I tried to catch them. caw PS..this is just my imagination...I really don't have any experience with this kind of observation of people...so I have no idea if there has ever been away to test.. to find out by dancing what someone has done in the past... just trying to think of a new way so Edward and the other Vampire's have a bit of drama and can maybe be a little uncomfortable.. or to problem solve there way out, of this situation..with Charlie. Of course he will ask Bella and the others to go to the fun house..so they don't get caught. Edited by caw, Sep 2 2009, 09:34 PM.


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