Alice's Vision

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Alice's Vision; Alice's vision of Bella jumping off clif
Topic Started: Oct 29 2009, 08:38 AM (22 Views)
Tara	Oct 29 2009, 08:38 AM Post #1
Newbie Posts: 2 Group: Members Member #706 Joined: October 29, 2009	I dropped the half drained dear as my vision clouded over and took me hundreds of miles away. I could smell the salty sea air. I could hear the waves crashing against the rocks bellow. I could feel the warmth of the forest. Most importantly I could see Bella standing, dripping wet her hair whipping her face and neck and back, as she stood far too close to the edge of the cliff. I wanted to scream or cry or something to make her stop. It would make no difference if I did, she was too far away. She stepped closer determindly, not looking down keeping her focus in front of her. She was waiting for something. I wished it would never come, I knew what would happen when it did. For some unknown reason she smiled and began waiting again. She rolled onto the the balls of her feet stiil smiling as though waiting for some form of relief. She stood as though she was meant to dive and flung herself into the empty space in front of her. She let out an earsplitting sound as she fell which was echoed by my own scream. She landed in the water and was dragged deep under, she began to struggle and then stopped resigned peacefully. "Alice, Alice, what is it? What's wrong? Alice, please?" Jasper's pleas brought me back to the forest in which I'd been hunting just a few moments ago. "I- I need to- go back and- talk to Carlisle." I stopped and took a breath trying to stop myself stuttering the words. "It's Bella. She just jumped off a cliff." He took my hand trying despretly to calm me and we ran towards Tanya's house, where we were staying. We arrived less than a minute later, but it seemed to take an eternity of pure agony. "Rose, where's Carlisle?" I asked frantically when I realized Carlise wasnt there. "He's hunting with Esme" She replied without looking away form the mirror. "He'll be back in acouple of days. Why?" "Bella's going to kill herself and I've got to stop her!" I realized what Jasper was trying to do. He was trying to stop me from interfering. Well it wasn't going to work. I loved Bella, and I loved Edward. I knew it would crush Edward when he found out. "Jaz, I'm sorry, but I have to try." "O.k I understand." He said looking hurt. "I'm going to fly to Forks and try and stop her, if I don't make it I'm going to comfort Charlie the best I can. I'll be back as soon as I can. Please don't let Edward know it will kill him if he knows." I flipped my phone open booking the next flight to Washington. I started to run faster than I ever had before. I couldn't stop her, but I had to try. I had to stop her from killing not only herself, but my brother as well. I wanted to scream. *Please can you give me some comments about what you think about it and what could be improved. Thanks.


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