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Topic Started: Jan 18 2008, 03:22 AM (218 Views)
Esaul
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Difference is I care about the law over you two i bet xD
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DayDreamer
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yeah i love jonas brothers..got a problem
hey now..of course i do maybe not as much as you..just not things like that..love should come before things like that..i mean really does it matter? anyway though..i just really can't wait to read more
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Esaul
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so it would be okay if a 10 year old loved a 30 year old?
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Riss
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Where we gonna go from here?
DROP IT.
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DayDreamer
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yeah i love jonas brothers..got a problem
sorry Riss..i promise i'll be good and wait patiently for more of the story
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Riss
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Where we gonna go from here?
I was actually telling Will.
I'm on YOUR side. XD
Anyways... I haven't been working on this story lately.
Been focusing on poems and 26-03-07.
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DayDreamer
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yeah i love jonas brothers..got a problem
haha she's on my side anyway that's cool too, i'll just enjoy your other works until you are ready to get back to ths :bow:
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LionHeart
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There's laws about kissing people older than you?
*goes to look*

well despite possible breaches in kissing laws, I think it's good, flows nicely and keeps your attention and I think the plot is pretty interesting too. Occasional grammatical problems, but I'm just psycho about noticing tiny details like that, they aren't anything major really. Keep at it, you're doing good so far. :)
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Riss
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Yeah... If the age thing bothers people SO deeply, I'll just stop writing. Either that or they can just deal with it or not read it.
Also, the quote at the beginning, is meant to help you understand that it doesn't really matter.
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LionHeart
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good to know
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Esaul
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It bothers me yes, but not enough for me to stop reading. I say keep going xD
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Riss
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Where we gonna go from here?
I'm kind of stuck.
I don't know what to to write for me and Andrew to do.
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LionHeart
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*shrug* can't help you there
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Riss
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Where we gonna go from here?
I can't add to this story.
Maybe in a few years, while I'm in London.
But not now.

Way too much stressing me.
This story just adds to it.
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LionHeart
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if you say so
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