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To Younge to be in Love.; bleh...
Topic Started: Dec 11 2007, 03:37 AM (155 Views)
Riss
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Where we gonna go from here?
this one is kind of just a string of thoughts.
bleh.
here it is anyways.




Too Young to be in Love.


I can’t do this anymore.
I don’t know what to say.
I don’t know what to tell you.
I go through this every day.

I know that I loved you.
I don’t know if you cared.
I knew I shouldn’t try to love…
But somehow… I dared.

It was hard to believe you,
After you screwed your first chance…
But not after it happened again.
It’s impossible now, I have to take a stance.

Then I said it’d never happen.
Not after I met you.
I said I’d never fall in love.
But I guess I didn’t have a clue.

I know that I’ll never stop caring,
You’ll always have a place in my heart.
But I think I’ve fallen in love,
It’s bad for life but I guess it’s a start.

I know that to you it doesn’t matter,
But I just wanted you to know…
I’m trying to forget you, but…
I do not regret letting that relationship grow.

You don’t think of me as “important,”
And I think there’s a part of you that might care.
I wonder if you’ll worry when I die;
If you’re heart will even flare.

Sure I’m just some emo girl, causing you pain;
Too much trouble and leaving you a bit reserved.
I might be emotional, bipolar, and a little nutty.
But in the end I guess I got what I deserved.

I’ve been broken hearted before,
But none have been as unique as this.
I think I’ve found someone though,
Can you remember those months of bliss?

I don’t know why I love him,
He cannot look at my heart and fix that crack.
I want this feeling gone.
Because I know that he’ll never love me back.
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DayDreamer
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yeah i love jonas brothers..got a problem
I really liked that, its relatable(that's not spelt right) It's sweet, and sad, and wow..i love reading poetry
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Riss
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Where we gonna go from here?
Yep. Thanks. :)
This was was from my point of view.
And it was written as a letter at first.
So it's kind of directly for somebody.
oO
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Esaul
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The thought of what you wrote made this poem great. The structure/flow you have is shaky in certain spots but i enjoyed reading it.
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