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| To Younge to be in Love.; bleh... | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 11 2007, 03:37 AM (155 Views) | |
| Riss | Dec 11 2007, 03:37 AM Post #1 |
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Where we gonna go from here?
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this one is kind of just a string of thoughts. bleh. here it is anyways. Too Young to be in Love. I can’t do this anymore. I don’t know what to say. I don’t know what to tell you. I go through this every day. I know that I loved you. I don’t know if you cared. I knew I shouldn’t try to love… But somehow… I dared. It was hard to believe you, After you screwed your first chance… But not after it happened again. It’s impossible now, I have to take a stance. Then I said it’d never happen. Not after I met you. I said I’d never fall in love. But I guess I didn’t have a clue. I know that I’ll never stop caring, You’ll always have a place in my heart. But I think I’ve fallen in love, It’s bad for life but I guess it’s a start. I know that to you it doesn’t matter, But I just wanted you to know… I’m trying to forget you, but… I do not regret letting that relationship grow. You don’t think of me as “important,” And I think there’s a part of you that might care. I wonder if you’ll worry when I die; If you’re heart will even flare. Sure I’m just some emo girl, causing you pain; Too much trouble and leaving you a bit reserved. I might be emotional, bipolar, and a little nutty. But in the end I guess I got what I deserved. I’ve been broken hearted before, But none have been as unique as this. I think I’ve found someone though, Can you remember those months of bliss? I don’t know why I love him, He cannot look at my heart and fix that crack. I want this feeling gone. Because I know that he’ll never love me back. |
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| DayDreamer | Dec 16 2007, 01:29 AM Post #2 |
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yeah i love jonas brothers..got a problem
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I really liked that, its relatable(that's not spelt right) It's sweet, and sad, and wow..i love reading poetry |
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| Riss | Dec 16 2007, 02:03 AM Post #3 |
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Where we gonna go from here?
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Yep. Thanks.
This was was from my point of view. And it was written as a letter at first. So it's kind of directly for somebody. oO |
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| Esaul | Dec 16 2007, 03:49 AM Post #4 |
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The thought of what you wrote made this poem great. The structure/flow you have is shaky in certain spots but i enjoyed reading it. |
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