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Silence; i'm bad at poems, don't laugh
Topic Started: Dec 16 2007, 01:37 AM (126 Views)
DayDreamer
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yeah i love jonas brothers..got a problem
Free verse, i can't rhyme(sp?). this poem, unlike some i've written, has no truth in my life at all

Silence
The tension grows, un said words echo in my head
I fell that same cold as it closes in
There is so much I want to say
I can not find the words, just one chance
The silence leaks into my sould
An awkward pause, a heart felt sigh
Everything will change with just one moment
Then all we'll have is...
Silence
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Esaul
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You warned me it was crappy. I'm disappinted now. It wasn't crappy at all. I really liked it. You should also share a few of your poems from you project last year in Bile's class.
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la-vida-loca
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Sometimes I think I was born backwards...
a few spelling errors, but i liked it also. :D

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DayDreamer
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yeah i love jonas brothers..got a problem
I was thinking of sharing some of them..you spelt byles wrong silly will. :jump:
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Naruto91
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Will is such a silly person! :lol:

I liked it too, even though I don't like poems that don't rhyme, this one still flowed despite that. Good job, and la-vida-loca is right. I few small spelling fixes and it will be perfect. Like sould, it should be soul, right?

Great job!

Naruto91 :jam:
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Esaul
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oh dammit. what you get for me not thinking

chris that's really a dumb remark.

Poem's don't have to rhyme to be considered poems.
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DayDreamer
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yeah i love jonas brothers..got a problem
Besides Chris I already mentioned that I can't rhyme...tsk tsk..and i can't spell either so HAHAHA and LALALA...I don't even care that I can't spell so there :jump:
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