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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 7 2008, 04:27 AM (130 Views) | |
| Riss | Jan 7 2008, 04:27 AM Post #1 |
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I don't really like this one. But it's easier than anything else for me to write a poem to somebody rather than to try to talk to them. Especially in this case. And even though nobody knows who this is really for, it's a poem none-the-less. No Matter. This pain I feel... My heart is tearing up. I cannot pour my soul out, Because I’d need more than a cup. I’ve thought I was in love before, I’ve thought I’ve hated you. I’ve wondered if you were meant for me. And I think now that it’s true. Why won’t you talk to me? You don’t know how much it hurts. What did I do? You’ve rejected all of my efforts. I’ve given up now, I’m going to leave you alone. It’s harder than you would ever think. If only I had known… I want you all for me, I know that I love you more than anything. I know we’ll figure it out one day, I’ll try still, no matter how much pain it brings. |
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| Esaul | Jan 7 2008, 09:58 PM Post #2 |
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I'm not a fan of how you said you need more than a cup. I would try to think of a different comparrison but that is just me I suppose. |
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| Riss | Jan 7 2008, 09:59 PM Post #3 |
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Yep. I think so too. I said I didn't really care for this one. >.< Edit: Oops. I lied. Saratn would know who this is for. |
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| Esaul | Jan 7 2008, 10:01 PM Post #4 |
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I have a hunch, which also would mean you semi-lied to me. |
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| Riss | Jan 7 2008, 10:03 PM Post #5 |
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Nope. If you think I lied to you, then you're wrong about your hunch. |
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| Esaul | Jan 7 2008, 10:07 PM Post #6 |
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Pm who you wrote it for and we will see. :p |
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| Riss | Jan 8 2008, 05:19 AM Post #7 |
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*Not a liar* |
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