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No Matter.
Topic Started: Jan 7 2008, 04:27 AM (130 Views)
Riss
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Where we gonna go from here?
I don't really like this one.
But it's easier than anything else for me to write a poem to somebody rather than to try to talk to them.
Especially in this case.
And even though nobody knows who this is really for, it's a poem none-the-less.


No Matter.


This pain I feel...
My heart is tearing up.
I cannot pour my soul out,
Because I’d need more than a cup.

I’ve thought I was in love before,
I’ve thought I’ve hated you.
I’ve wondered if you were meant for me.
And I think now that it’s true.

Why won’t you talk to me?
You don’t know how much it hurts.
What did I do?
You’ve rejected all of my efforts.

I’ve given up now,
I’m going to leave you alone.
It’s harder than you would ever think.
If only I had known…

I want you all for me,
I know that I love you more than anything.
I know we’ll figure it out one day,
I’ll try still, no matter how much pain it brings.
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Esaul
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I'm not a fan of how you said you need more than a cup. I would try to think of a different comparrison but that is just me I suppose.
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Riss
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Where we gonna go from here?
Yep. I think so too.
I said I didn't really care for this one. >.<

Edit: Oops.
I lied.
Saratn would know who this is for.
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Esaul
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I have a hunch, which also would mean you semi-lied to me.
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Riss
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Where we gonna go from here?
Nope. If you think I lied to you, then you're wrong about your hunch.
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Esaul
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Pm who you wrote it for and we will see. :p
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Riss
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Where we gonna go from here?
*Not a liar*
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