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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 13 2008, 04:58 AM (176 Views) | |
| Riss | Jan 13 2008, 04:58 AM Post #1 |
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Eh. It didn't turn out so well, but I wrote this during work. Same with "Me" that I just posted. Me Loves. Andrew is my love, Bobby beefcakes, lol. Captain Mischief, of the Crew. Dustin’s cute, I wish him well. Erin’s gorgeous as can be; Forrest was my first work crush. Garret sits by me there now. Hansen’s my last name… My brother’s don’t flush. Ilse sits beside me in sewing class. Jocelyn is my very best friend. Kortnie is so adorable. Levi… Well, you’ll just have to pend. Mariah got me my first job. Natalie used to have her locker next to me. Oscar sometimes gets on my nerves… Pester me, and you will see. Ryan sat with me in Sunday school. Rylee has changed… it’s been quite some time. Sarah went to summer camp with me. Todd… I dunno, I can’t think of a rhyme. Underwear adventures… hehe. “Vern!” helped with that memory. Wendy is my favourite aunt. Will… well if only he could see. You might not be a close friend… I dunno. Z’s a though one to fine. The point is that I really love my friends. But even if you’re not, I’ll still be kind. |
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| Esaul | Jan 13 2008, 04:10 PM Post #2 |
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no offense but i don't like it |
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| la-vida-loca | Jan 13 2008, 10:09 PM Post #3 |
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i like it, a few clever lines, but it could definetly be better. *nod* room for improvement, riss.
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| Riss | Jan 14 2008, 10:42 AM Post #4 |
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None taken, Saratn. I don't much like it either. Not sure why I posted it. XD But thanks, lvl.
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| Esaul | Jan 26 2008, 10:46 AM Post #5 |
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it's fun reading poetry. i've been doing that for the past hour or so just on WD. Most popular section by far xD |
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| CalmB4TheStorm | Jan 26 2008, 07:31 PM Post #6 |
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It kind of reminds me of a Shell Silverstein type of poem... Its good, but not your best Though i did love the idea behind it |
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