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Madness
Topic Started: Jan 14 2008, 03:15 AM (154 Views)
The Black Ghost
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Make sense of this, I dare you. You could easily spend your whole life at it.

[size=7]Madness [/size]




Madness is impossibility
Madness is unknowing
Madness is indecisive
Madness is uncertainty
Madness is hypocrisy
Madness is solemn victory
Madness has no foundation to support it
Madness sees the end, but not the means
Madness sees color as glass, sees the tangible as ethereal
Madness is slow to sift truth from untruth
Madness is not black or white; it is the bland shades that fall between
Madness is the difference between every calculable solution
Madness is the sum of every incalculable odd
Madness is impossibility
Madness is possible
Madness is paradox
Madness is choice
Madness is human
Madness is life.

Life is sane.
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Riss
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Where we gonna go from here?
Lol, wow.
Only a few lines made perfect sense.
But the entire thing together was still good.
I like it. :)
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la-vida-loca
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Sometimes I think I was born backwards...
love the ending, Life is Sane part threw me way off, though. it actually gave me a headache...although in this poem, that's a totally good thing. *nod*

awesome job, Ghost!
:D

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The Black Ghost
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Thanks all.


In the end, the poem itself is madness too. Theres a few lines I might switch the order of so it follows more linearly. Each line is significant, but I feel some of them were lost becauses its just a jumble of statements more or less.

Its hard even for me to understand, but I know its true, so how does that make sense? :unsure:

I guess it's sort of the "Iceburg effect" if youve ever heard of that.
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Esaul
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i got a headache. *cries*.

that was just reading it haha.

i don't dare make sense of it...
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CalmB4TheStorm
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It's beautiful.
and... migraine inducing
lol
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