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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 14 2008, 03:15 AM (154 Views) | |
| The Black Ghost | Jan 14 2008, 03:15 AM Post #1 |
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Make sense of this, I dare you. You could easily spend your whole life at it. [size=7]Madness [/size] Madness is impossibility Madness is unknowing Madness is indecisive Madness is uncertainty Madness is hypocrisy Madness is solemn victory Madness has no foundation to support it Madness sees the end, but not the means Madness sees color as glass, sees the tangible as ethereal Madness is slow to sift truth from untruth Madness is not black or white; it is the bland shades that fall between Madness is the difference between every calculable solution Madness is the sum of every incalculable odd Madness is impossibility Madness is possible Madness is paradox Madness is choice Madness is human Madness is life. Life is sane. |
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| Riss | Jan 14 2008, 06:44 AM Post #2 |
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Where we gonna go from here?
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Lol, wow. Only a few lines made perfect sense. But the entire thing together was still good. I like it.
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| la-vida-loca | Jan 14 2008, 02:49 PM Post #3 |
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Sometimes I think I was born backwards...
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love the ending, Life is Sane part threw me way off, though. it actually gave me a headache...although in this poem, that's a totally good thing. *nod* awesome job, Ghost!
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| The Black Ghost | Jan 15 2008, 03:26 AM Post #4 |
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Thanks all. In the end, the poem itself is madness too. Theres a few lines I might switch the order of so it follows more linearly. Each line is significant, but I feel some of them were lost becauses its just a jumble of statements more or less. Its hard even for me to understand, but I know its true, so how does that make sense? I guess it's sort of the "Iceburg effect" if youve ever heard of that. |
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| Esaul | Jan 26 2008, 10:48 AM Post #5 |
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i got a headache. *cries*. that was just reading it haha. i don't dare make sense of it... |
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| CalmB4TheStorm | Jan 26 2008, 07:28 PM Post #6 |
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It's beautiful. and... migraine inducing lol |
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