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| The Day my Heart Escaped; Love Poem | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 25 2008, 01:44 AM (151 Views) | |
| HopelessLoverBoy | Jan 25 2008, 01:44 AM Post #1 |
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"For some reason at 6:35 my heart knocked lightly against the door on my chest. Reluctantly I opened the door, to see what may happen. After all it's been awhile since my heart has requested some fresh air. Heh boy I was wrong my heart took off running,it ran so fast I couldn't catch it. I tried to follow it the best I could! The little sucker ran to the only place I couldn't follow...it ran to her...just seeing her made me sweat and my breath heavy. Slowly I back up leaving my heart at her feet! My heart my heart what am I to do?!? I'll go crazy if I don't get it back but I may die of fright if I approach her and request it back! Maybe I could share it with her and play it off as some kind of a friendship thing? Nah stupid idiot it ran to her for a reason...you know what it is! Thats why it won't leave her. But why doesn't she pick it up? Of course her sight was stolen for her....stolen by the very same thing now sitting in front of her feet. I wish her happiness and I wish her the best and because I do I watch from a far. I know I'm falling apart with out it with out an answer...without asking the question..without even trying...but it's all for her and if I fall apart I only hope before it's too late she'll be able to put the pieces back together.." This was my first poem in a very long time and I wrote it when I was first struck by love. Heh many have read this poem on facebook but I thought I'd post some of my past poems on this forum. |
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| Alp | Jan 25 2008, 01:47 AM Post #2 |
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[size=0]Real cute, Vinnie. I like it.[/size] |
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| The Phantom | Jan 25 2008, 04:13 AM Post #3 |
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I've read this one somewhere. I don't remember where. Might have been facebook, but I don't remember. It's pretty good. |
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| HopelessLoverBoy | Jan 25 2008, 04:15 AM Post #4 |
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Well I never showed you personal on facebook Brandon but I'm sure Brooke showed you it. After all when I write poems on facebook I only send'em to the girls. |
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| The Phantom | Jan 25 2008, 04:17 AM Post #5 |
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Ah. That might have been it. I remember recently I was snooping around on her facebook... she was watching, don't worry. |
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| HopelessLoverBoy | Jan 25 2008, 04:23 AM Post #6 |
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Hope on Facebook. I need to get your cell. |
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| RYUK | Jan 25 2008, 04:24 AM Post #7 |
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again, I will tell you that I love it! and I hope that someday she'll be ready p.s I'm glad you're kind of in a good mood (hate you) lol ^_^ Ludy |
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| HopelessLoverBoy | Jan 25 2008, 04:31 AM Post #8 |
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Me too doesn't look to promising though, from what I've been told. =P Oh well life goes on right? Thanks! ( I hate you too) Hahah. |
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| Esaul | Jan 26 2008, 10:53 AM Post #9 |
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This doesn't really seem much of a poem to me...but i like it nevertheless. I dunno what else it would be called though...oh well it is what you make it, not what i make it. xD |
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