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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 25 2008, 11:11 PM (122 Views) | |
| DreaCutieFace | Jan 25 2008, 11:11 PM Post #1 |
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With one more chance to say 2 words I don't know what to do, Because I have 3 simple words but 3 is more than 2 these words can now be anything but still are only 2 How I wish to say 3 words. But only, just to you. There is more meaning in these words than there should possibly be. the only reason why, because they came from me. With 1 chance to say 2 words, though there are really 3 I must make a decision I wish not to be. and yet I have a choice, to say the 2 or not. Or perhaps I'll break the rules and then I'll change the plot. Now these rules that I have mend, allow me to say more, my friend. And now 3 words, what can I do; but say these words I Love You. |
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| CalmB4TheStorm | Jan 25 2008, 11:14 PM Post #2 |
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SOOOOOO CUTE!! |
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| Naruto91 | Jan 25 2008, 11:15 PM Post #3 |
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That was really good. I love the rhythm and the originality. Excellent job. |
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| Esaul | Jan 26 2008, 04:20 AM Post #4 |
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I agree with Naruto91. the only thing that bothered me was the usage of numbers without using them as words. though you may have meant to do it on purpose :p |
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| la-vida-loca | Jan 26 2008, 06:28 PM Post #5 |
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Sometimes I think I was born backwards...
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EXCELLENT RYHMING! i especially LOVED the first 4 lines.
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