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Topic Started: Jan 25 2008, 11:11 PM (122 Views)
DreaCutieFace

With one more chance to say 2 words

I don't know what to do,

Because I have 3 simple words

but 3 is more than 2

these words can now be anything

but still are only 2

How I wish to say 3 words.

But only, just to you.

There is more meaning in these words

than there should possibly be.

the only reason why, because they came from me.

With 1 chance to say 2 words, though there are really 3

I must make a decision I wish not to be.

and yet I have a choice,

to say the 2 or not.

Or perhaps I'll break the rules

and then I'll change the plot.

Now these rules that I have mend,

allow me to say more, my friend.

And now 3 words, what can I do;

but say these words

I

Love

You.

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CalmB4TheStorm
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SOOOOOO CUTE!!
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Naruto91
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A Creator of Azryen
That was really good. I love the rhythm and the originality. Excellent job.
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Esaul
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I agree with Naruto91. the only thing that bothered me was the usage of numbers without using them as words. though you may have meant to do it on purpose :p
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la-vida-loca
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Sometimes I think I was born backwards...
EXCELLENT RYHMING! i especially LOVED the first 4 lines. :thumb:
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