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| The Creeping Darkness | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 25 2008, 05:24 AM (178 Views) | |
| DarknessLover | Jan 25 2008, 05:24 AM Post #1 |
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Intro: I walked up the steps as quietly as possible, another night out drinking and I don't want Jamie finding out. I heard one of the steps creak, and I noticed I wasn't on the steps...shit...she's awake...I am busted...what the fuck do I do now? I heard another creaking step and looked back to where I thought I heard it..."Hello?" I saw a figure standing completely motionless, too blurry and too dark from the lack of light and the lack of soberiority. "Jamie?" I tried to keep calm but I noticed I was frozen in place. "Jamie honey, I am sorry I was out so late." A moan crept from the darkness. "I will make it up to you though." Another moan followed by the figure walking toward me arms open and out, I guess she wants a hug... I walked over calm "I love you Jamie." I walked a few steps forward, when I noticed in irregularity in her steps...almost lifeless creeping. "Are you okay?" she fell into my arms. "Honey?" A ripping at my neck made me scream, as she tightened her grip I felt warm liquid stream down from my neck, dear god....color fell from my eyes, and I lost all feeling. |
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| la-vida-loca | Jan 25 2008, 08:47 PM Post #2 |
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Sometimes I think I was born backwards...
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cool beginning, very "28 days later" yet totally different, awesome, can't wait to see more.
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| CalmB4TheStorm | Jan 25 2008, 08:54 PM Post #3 |
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great intro I'm hooked. |
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